MANEET SS - LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL[THANK YOU NOTE ON PG 80] - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poojitha96

Awesome part

Loved the way geet fed maan bhindi
Waiting for the next part
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THANKS A LOT DEAR.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic Part

Maan is furious and he feels Geet is same but same as whom ?
so he lives alone too and just has Nakul Kaka taking care of him
Khushi and Arnav surprised that both Maan and Geet completed 75 questions but Maan ignored their talk while Geet was happy at lunch time she sees Maan and offers him to join them but he refuses until he had no choice and joins them where Geet very cutely feeds him but she also notice the change in him
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Posted: 9 years ago
Something happened with maan ade him weired
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004


<font color="#660099">Fantastic Part</font>

<font color="#660099">Maan is furious and he feels Geet is same but same as whom ?</font>
<font color="#660099">so he lives alone too and just has Nakul Kaka taking care of him </font>
<font color="#660099">Khushi and Arnav surprised that both Maan and Geet completed 75 questions but Maan ignored their talk while Geet was happy at lunch time she sees Maan and offers him to join them but he refuses until he had no choice and joins them where Geet very cutely feeds him but she also notice the change in him </font>



Thank you so much ..

Let's see in the upcoming updates ... with whom Maan was comparing geet


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hira2010

Something happened with maan ade him weired
Thanks for pm



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Posted: 9 years ago

PART FIVE

"Maan... Maan... Ise kya hua?" Khushi tried calling Maan but he was quick enough to vanish from there. Khushi glanced at Arnav to ensure if he had some idea about Maan's sudden disappearance from there.

Arnav nodded negatively signalling he knew nothing about what was wrong with Maan. He stated, "I don't know... abhi tak to thik tha... don't know what's wrong."

"Guys, I have to issue one book from library. I will meet you later" Geet declared while putting her half - finished tiffin back in her bag and left canteen without even caring to listen Arnav and Khushi's reply.

Arnav and Khushi was just looking at each other's faces in confusion witnessing the weird behaviour of Maan and Geet. They were in dilemma whether to think over Maan's behaviour or over Geet's.

Arnav said while putting his hand over Khushi's, "Khushi don't you think hame Geet ko sab bata dena chahiye?" Khushi's face turned pale. She disagreed, "No Arnav... If she gets to know from anywhere else then its ok lekin agar hamne Geet ko kuch bhi bataya... Maan will get very angry and besides that he will lose his trust on us... and then you very well know what will happen... but yeah Geet should know... but only from Maan... she will have to make him trust her"

Geet was walking in the college corridor muttering to her, "What happened to Maan? Wo ese canteen se kyu chala gaya? I have to find him". She was quite tensed about Maan's behaviour. She sensed it in canteen itself when her eyes caught tears in his eyes which he didn't let fall down and most probably he left to hide those tears. She hurriedly entered inside the library, hoping that she would find him there. She searched all over in the library, but he wasn't there. "Kaha jaa sakta hai?" she was thinking in her mind of all possible places he could be found. She searched in whole college for him but to her surprise he was nowhere.

"Dev, have you seen Maan anywhere" Geet asked Dev as she saw him roaming in the college. She raised her hope that Dev might could tell anything about Maan.

Dev stopped listening Geet. He thought for a while and answered, "I saw him making his way towards terrace" and he left from there.

"Terrace? " Geet thought in her mind and rushed towards terrace without wasting time.

With Maan:

Maan was sitting on the ground taking the back support of the wall behind him. He was sitting by folding his knees covering his face placing it on his knees. His eyes were filled of tears but he was too firm to let them come out. But he was dying from inside.

Geet came running to the terrace and stopped at the entrance. She felt terribly bad seeing Maan's condition. She could easily see how broken he was from inside. She could feel his pain though she had no idea about anything related to him but it was like some invisible connection in between them which was conveying Maan's pain, feelings and emotions to Geet.

She slowly took her steps towards him and sat down in front of him on her knees keeping her bag aside on the ground. She hesitantly put her hand on his shoulder causing him to startle a bit as he felt sudden weight on his shoulder.

She instantly took her hand back from him as she felt his movements. Pulling himself back, he looked there to know who the person was. Maan was shocked to see Geet there. He hadn't expected her to be there. In fact, he hadn't expected anyone to be there. It was quite surprising for him that she left her lunch for him and came all the way to terrace searching.

Maan was feeling emotionally too weak to handle himself at that time. Before Geet could ask or understand anything, Maan wrapped his arms around her neck hugging her by hiding his face inn crook of her neck. Geet was way beyond stunned to respond anything. She slowly hugged him back putting her hands around his back rubbing it frequently to soothe him.

He was feeling relaxed in her embrace and she could feel that he was calming down mentally. Her touch worked like some magic for him.

She wanted to ask him so much but now his relaxation was more important for her. She preferred remaining quiet letting him to be somewhat stable.

"Is she caring for me? And if she is... then why? I am not even her friend and I had insulted her so much... I have been only and only rude to her from our very first meet... but she... why didn't she snap back at me even once? Isko dekhkar to lagta nahi that she is the one who will take her insults without saying anything? Then why the hell she is bothering about me?????" Maan was questioning himself in his mind being in the hug.

Soon realising their position, Maan pulled himself back from the hug staring at her. She felt little bit uncomfortable in his gaze.

She softly called for him bringing him back to reality, "Maan... Are you okay? Wo tum canteen se ese kyu chale gaye and what are you doing here?" She badly wanted to know what was wrong with him but not because she was curious to know about his personal life but because she was worried for him. Her face was reflecting concern more than curiosity.

"I am not answerable to you... and listen keep you this fake concern and care to yourself... because I very well know everyone is selfish in this world..." he said getting up from ground.

"And you..." Maan stopped in middle as he stared at her innocent face but soon turned his gaze from her. Avoiding eye contact with Geet, he continued what he left, "And you are no different"

He glanced at her once again to see the effect of his words on her. Though it wasn't like he was insulting her for the first time, it wasn't like he hadn't been rude to her earlier, but this time she looked quite hurt... umm not quite she looked terribly hurt.

Even his face showed somewhat regret and He left the terrace in just few moments before Geet could realise that he actually left.

"Maan... Maan listen" she tried stopping him but he was already left. She sat there unable to understand what she should do. There she was... doing every possible thing to understand his pain so that she could reduce it... and he... calling her selfish and not ready to share his anything with her. She banged her hand hard on the wall in frustration while getting up

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"Ahhh" the nail on the wall pierce directly into her hand causing it to bleed and make her to shriek in pain. She instantly took her hand back holding it by other hand.




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Edited by Alvapriya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb Update
feeling really bad for maan what happen to maan in past? why is he always rude to geet, now also he hurt geet really bad. poor geet
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Posted: 9 years ago


YOU DON'T REALLY NEED TO KNOW SOMEONE FROM LONG TO TRULY CARE ABOUT THEM. - UNKNOWN




PART SIX

"Kya hua... show me... are you mad? Dhyan kaha hai tumhara... god... kitna khoon beh raha hai" Maan scolded her by holding her hurt hand in his soft grip.


Geet was staring at him with disbelief in her eyes. She instantly took her hand back saying, "I am fine... but what are you doing her? You just left from here right... Ohh that means you had never left... you were watching me by hiding? Why? And anyway why do you care if I am hurt? I am selfish and mean na... so... you should not touch me... you better stay away from me." She was sounding nothing but emotionless that time.


She kept blabbering but he was least paying attention to her talks. All his attention was to her hand from which blood was constantly dipping. She stopped talking noticing him and took a step ahead walking straight to leave from there. But she couldn't walk much as her hand got gripped in his firm and strong hold.





He pulled her back to him with a jerk causing him to land directly on his chest and his hand automatically got slide holding her waist.

"Done? Or want to waste some more time with your nonsense? Now quietly come with me to the medical room, got it?" he said looking into her eyes letting her know that he wasn't gonna listen anything to her.

Geet was slightly lost into his eyes but soon broke her trance. Shifting her gaze from him, she started her efforts to get free from his hold, "I said I am fine... and you don't..."

"Shut up... just shut up and come with me" he said cutting her off in middle knowing what was she going to say. His tone reflected concern... concern for her when she was hurt.

She couldn't resist him witnessing so much of care in his eyes and tone as well. Without even waiting for her answer, he immediately took out his handkerchief from his pocket and covered her bleeding hand carefully by wrapping around her palm and dragged her to the medical room as fast as he could.


"Doctor, doctor" he called out for doctor stepping inside the medical room. On getting no response, he understood doctor wasn't in medical room. He gazed all over the medical room and ran his fingers through his hairs in irritation as he could see blood was dripping from Geet's hand through his handkerchief.


He made her sit on the bed and started searching for first aid in the medical room. After his search for almost ten minutes, he finally got the first aid kit and he rushed towards Geet. Taking her hand in his, he removed the handkerchief with utmost care not to hurt her. He started wiping the blood with cotton and cleaned her hand. While doing all that, he kept glancing at her as if trying to figure out about her pain. Though he could see how much the nail had hurt her, her wound was deep. But her face was hardly reflecting any pain or emotion.


He bandaged her hand properly and said while turning to keep the first aid kit back, "Tumhe itni chot lagi hai... tumhe dard ho nahi raha ya tum mujhe dikhana nahi chahti?"



"Tumhe dikhana nahi chahti... jaise tum mujhe dikhana nahi chahte" Geet answered to him making his legs go freeze at her understatement.


His head shifted towards her side facing her with wide eyes. "What? Main?... mai... nahi... I mean" he stumbled struggling for words. He couldn't understand how the hell she knew he was hiding something, was hiding his pain.



"Accha, ye kya hai?" she said while showing him his own hand which got hurt yesterday night when he banged it onto the mirror.

"Ohh ye... ye to bas ese hi" he felt quite relieved knowing she was talking about his hand.


"Mai sirf isi ki baat nahi kar rahi maan, ye to sirf physical pain hai... and I am sure tumhe to ye mehsoos bhi nahi hota hoga na... tumhare andar ke dard ke saamne"



He closed his eyes listening to some true facts about himself from her. His legs gave up and his body rested down on the chair side by.


Getting up from her place, Geet slowly walked towards Maan and sat down on her knees in front of him. She placed her other hand on his cheek and said lovingly, "Maan, the pain will hurt you only till you allow it to... you have to get over this... you can't stay like this always... you have to learn to enjoy your life..."


Maan was listening quietly to her till now like a child listens to his mom.


"You don't know anything about me and my life Geet" said Maan after hearing her last statement.


"Then I want to know Maan" she told him with determination.


Maan was taken aback by the words Geet uttered.




"But why? Why do you want to enter in my world of pain when your life is full of happiness? You should be enjoying yours" he said while putting forth his curiosity that why the hell she wants to waste her time on him and his dark life.

"Because I want to... and that's it... there isn't answer to every why in this world... and more importantly I can never be happy if you are in pain" she answered him clearly without revolving things around.

"Why do you care for me so much? We are not even friends. In fact I have been so rude to you always, always hurt you then why?" he again asked her one more question which was ringing in his mind with a innocent face.

"Who said that? It's you who don't consider me as your friend. But I do... and now if you think I am not that bad... then this friendship can be from both sides only if you don't mind accepting me as your friend?... lekin lekin lekin my friend... dosti ka ek usul hai... dosti karne ke bad nibhani padegi... bolo manjoor hai?" said Geet very dramatically trying to lighten his mood.



"Bolo bolo" she asked him again raising her eyebrows at him noticing he was only staring at her.

And at the very next moment, he hugged her tightly wrapping his arms around her neck. Geet smiled and encircled her hands around his back slightly rubbing his back to soothe him. Breaking the hug, he started at her for some time and said, "Thank you"

Geet got up from her place making a frowned face. He looked at her in confusion not understanding what happened to her suddenly.

"Dosti ka ek aur usul hai Mr... Dosti me no sorry and no thank you" again one more statement came from dramatic Geet. Maan couldn't help but smiled at her weird yet cute behaviour.



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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update curious to know his past
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update both care for each other hope he will tell his past thnx 4 pm

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