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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: mishtypie

Superb update pari

Geet is widow nd she dont want 2 ruin maan's life bt maan was firm abt his decision 2 marry geet
maan met wit accident nd slippd 2 coma nd dis made geet 2 express her feelngs
finally maaneet r engagd nd nw geet wants 2 marry maan be4 he goes 4 nxt mission
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon


thank u pie dear... i thought u are inactive in the forum, but ur comment surprized me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

so beautiful story both love each other but she thought he deserve better because she is a widower but maan's accident make her confess her feelings maan has to go again really want another part lovely story


you will get another part, and another probably seeing the current track of my mind 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: _Chinmayi_

Geet widow thi she came to Mumbai to live her life there she met her long lost cousin meera and her life changed forever she met maan whinis devar of meera maan was fell in love with her he proposed her but she rejected him because if her past maan met with accident and was taking Geet naam continuously... Maan slipped into koma and Geet din raat maan ke saat rahi thi untill maan came out from coma she accepted her feelings for him and both got engaged.. Hope maan wapis laut aaye nothing should happen to him


nothing will happen to maan... or maybe it will
but he will be back that is sure. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: dqno1

Hi!

It is six thirty in the morning here and I woke up with this song on my brain. I was humming it and scanning GF and voila it was as if you read my mind.
Dare u make this a sad story Pooja!!
I loved the way you incorporated the chor wala part here.
Looking forward to more soon.


Oh... read ur mind, it was in my mind for a long time, and finally i got a push with anniversary thread.
i had given up on it but priyanka di made me write anyway.

i am not into tragedy, so it definately won't be a sad story, though there will be challenges.

yes... i like that part also, i was typing in so much hurry that i thought it has become more like an article than a story, then i thought of incorporating a humorous scene.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25



Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Lovely story.

Geet found Maan and a loving family after undergoing pain.
looking forward to part 2.


Originally posted by: --Fairy--

emotional and beautiful os


Originally posted by: love2_soma

maan geet k milan k bina thodi hi story khatam hoga...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...



Originally posted by: soni-zee

Beautiful os...lovely one


Originally posted by: fict

Beautiful os. Geet because of her past didn't accept Maan's love but his accident brought her to senses. Waiting for next part.


Originally posted by: punam2712

Lovely OS

Waiting for part 2



Originally posted by: Maaneet099

very beautifully etched OS. Please please give us a conclusion for this. :D



Thank you everyone for your love and support.
i have got a track in mind to continue this, so there might be another part b4 we see a conclusion.
i will try to update by the weekend. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on the OS! superb start! well written! Geet has suffered so much bt wid Meera n Dev's help she manages 2 get a job n further her studies! Maan is his cousin! Maan arrives n falls 4 her! he proposes n she denies! Maan meets in an accident! This makes her realises! he is in a coma bt awakens! Maan has 2 go on a mission! she wants 2 get married b4 he goes bt he says he doesn't kwn wt wil happen! he assures her! will b waiting 4 next! update soon


thank you dear...
i will try to update as soon as i can 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one.geet is fearing because of her past.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Looking forward for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Sundari.


Oh my god... i hope i am not dreaming
i had long back given up the hope to be able to make u read my stories, and yet i managed it finally!!! 😆

well even i thought it was the perfect end... but new possibilities opened up seeing all the love pouring over here 😳


Tum ne hi tho kaha tha k u r scared of my comments😆

Tho mai ne socha bichari bachi pehle se dari hui hai aur nahi darana chahiye🤣

On a serious note... Tera na writing style n narration both have come a long way... I've read ur previous os too mujhe tho vishwas hi nahi hua tha it was written by u❤️

Phir meri tere reply to few of ur readers se i got confirmation that it was actually really u who wrote that😲

Keep writing pooja.. Would love to read more stories from you🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28


Tum ne hi tho kaha tha k u r scared of my comments😆

Tho mai ne socha bichari bachi pehle se dari hui hai aur nahi darana chahiye🤣

On a serious note... Tera na writing style n narration both have come a long way... I've read ur previous os too mujhe tho vishwas hi nahi hua tha it was written by u❤️

Phir meri tere reply to few of ur readers se i got confirmation that it was actually really u who wrote that😲

Keep writing pooja.. Would love to read more stories from you🤗


yes i think so, i have come a long way and started to realize the same recently..
i hope to keep improving and keep writing also 😛

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