FS: Dimensions~ EPILOGUE and NOTE @65 on 12-02-2017 ~~COMPLETED~~ - Page 14

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

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Hiya my loveee 🤗 ❤️ OMG!!! 😲 😭 This update literally changed everything and denied almost every view I had about their story last time... to be honest, it denied mostly what were the reasons behind Geet's actions and decisions! 😆 This was such a heartfelt and emotional piece of writing, I am just so emotionally attached to it ❤️ It is like I'm breathing this story... 😆 goes well with my current inner peace level too, just think you got the perfect material to work with 🤣 it means i changed your dimensions about this story too 😆😆 I could literally keep re-reading it and it has the same intensity every single time! ❤️ What happens to absolutely keep me dying to read more of it is your ability to experience writing based on a variety of physical and mental sensations... ❤️ Like I can go crazy in just a moment by simply reading it, a full emotional roller coaster ride in which you'll make me experience all these kinds of things and also hold my hand tightly so I can continue the ride with my eyes open... even if you close your eyes you can feel me i mean the ride 😆😆 and then, after going through it, still being there supporting me to try again 😆 ❤️ And I swear it is DAMN addictive! It is true, I did cry reading it...😭 😭 😭 Just imagine, I was maybe blaming Geet for a lot of things without even knowing her real version though I got a hint and even told you that something is incomplete here... 😆 yes... yes... detective baby Isn't it amazing how every update keeps changing almost everything and doesn't let the reader's mind rest even for a bit? And you're doing such a fantabulous job my babyyy... ❤️ 😳 Whenever I come here, I just forget about everything and concentrate on the story There's something so magical about it and about the way you choose to pen it down, it makes me go crazy, love ❤️ ☺️ I was wondering if I'll get the answer to all my invisible questions but you make everything so PERFECT, baby 🤗 ❤️ Seriously ☺️ You shouldn't stop playing with my mind that way, gives me sooo many thrills 😳 After reading this update, I'm thinking even this comment is gonna change... 😆 Well, as long as I have the story (AND YOU MORE ❤️) I don't mind changing my thoughts every single time and noticing my theories being proved wrong... 😆😳 ❤️ If there is anything I won't stop doing is appreciating and loving you and your work more and more with time passing ❤️ Just gonna add that I'm really so lucky to be reading your stories right now and having you always by my side, my precious heart 😳 ❤️ 🤗 And the reason I can't sleep at night without writing this 😆 🤣I know you must be sleeping now but don't mind your little vampire's harkatein haan😉😆 You take me to another... dimension 😆☺️ ohhh that was so on point! 🤪😆 OMG... i was thinking again this one

Coming to this brilliant and much awaited masterpiece ❤️ I should be in my bed taking some rest... well I am lying on my bed but writing this thing up that is gonna take you too many minutes to read because... yeah... 🤪🤣 IKR... 6 minues to be exact till now... now dont think i am slow you know very well 😆 and wondering what should I write to even match up with the feelings I got while reading it? ❤️ Cause when it comes to your work, my whole universe is gonna end up trying to analyze it 😳 and writing a comment that is supposed to express my feelings in the clearest way possible... 😆 Whatever you read here is not even 10% of the intensity of my feelings... Words are too less to describe it and are never enough ❤️ If I sound repetitive sometimes is because I don't even have enough words to portray everything... 😆 it is ok i would love to read it again and again I should just make some new words and give them a special meaning just because you deserve everythinggg ❤️ may be you should buy new dictionary 😆

I'm again unable to chill myself down and try to make a proper sentence 😆 🤣 First of all, your introduction ❤️ Like all your intros this one is also pure gorgeousness And now I feel so bad about whatever I thought about Geet's decisions... 😭 She is simply that person who is gonna sacrifice her own happiness just for your well being. Her love is pure and SELFLESS ❤️ There is no thought of personal gain or satisfaction in her decision! 🥺 All she knows is... she has to set him free, she has to make him escape the world she's going to embrace for more than five years and all these because she truly loves him ❤️ She has to do that because she feels she's gonna make his life harder but little did she know the pain of losing her took over all his mind and body and especially soul 🥺😭 The fact that he is going to suffer if he stays with her is so deeply embedded into her subconscious that she cannot even think of letting him know about this... And even is she knows the things they could have witnessed together could far exceed any expectations, she has to let him go... 🥺 Just love how you made me feel all the pain both of them are going through, baby ❤️ My heart is broken thinking about these past 5 years and how much the pain of separation affected them... And you are so right about Geet and her point of view ❤️ There are so many situations we come across to daily or rarely... She chose this way, the way of closing the door of their love and opening the door of his freedom. But the so-called "freedom" he was living up to all these years is nothing but a sort of living hell He became even more lost in her memories, he still dreams about her, he still thinks about her every single day of his life and there's nothing anyone can do about it The lines about their vows and how she chose to hurt the love of her life are sooo beautiful and magical, baby ❤️ There is that magic in those lines... I can feel it so well 😳 Maan was her only reason of living life to the fullest, he made her feel just so much special ❤️ even more than her own family could do... he has the biggest place in her heart Maybe this was why she had to do that... the pain of knowing the truth about her is gonna break his heart completely and she didn't want that to happen to the person who ALWAYS made her happy... 😳 but sometimes we thought we made right decision but it is not same every time, like here in this one Geet made decision for his good but still he couldnt prove that decision to be good sure he became successful and so but not in emotional way

How gorgeous were those details about both of them knowing that they belong to each other, love... so much relatable, I just can't ☺️❤️ Can I tell you how much I love the flashback?? I think you already know I'm getting crazy whenever I have to read the flashback and this time it was a full package of emotions, wrapped in the most beautiful way by you 🤗❤️ Maan cannot even stand the thought of her being someone else's ☺️😆 All those scenes in the flashback were so on point and brilliant, totally realistic and mind blowing Geet assuring him about her being his girl only was just so effin adorable and also the fact that he truly believed her after hearing her heartfelt emotional words ❤️ Such an amazing confession of those out of this world feelings they have for each other... 👏 You keep taking my heart away with each passing line... ❤️ And that's unfortunately the calm before the storm of their lives 🥺 It is so sad whenever such a beautiful and intense love has to disappear...😭 or separate... at least for a while... the college days details are LOVE ❤️😆 I'm imagining all these and got me so hooked I just can't even express myself in a decent and proper way... 😆 Poignant and absolutely beautifully depicted by you... All those people stopped trying to get one of them and all of them concluded that those two are simply made for each other and no one can come between them ❤️ Such a touching and lovely way of representing their wonderful relatioship in words... and trust me, you absolutely slay it!!! ❤️ Even their families used to meet each other's, which shows how confident they were about their feelings and about the fact that they belong to each other 😳 i am planning to make this story little bit different so tight your ahem ahem... CC time 😳

So Geet was happy for Maan and his admission actually Again proving how much she acknowledges and appreciates him, being happy for any amazing opportunity he gets in his life ❤️😳 Geet is not feeling comfortable in western countries awww... 😆😳 When you keep adding such lovely details the story is even better - and trust me, I absolutely love it ❤️

Here comes the part that literally made me cry so badly... 😭 The beginning of their end 💔 As for Geet, she wrote her own chapters on love and it was up to her how she turns those pages, what she is gonna write in between or if a page of her own life is gonna remain blank, empty but still covered in the darkest shade of her own actions 🥺 It's like the intern pain - we can't see but we can feel it the most and it hurts so much Jaan, you described her so so well 🤗 i love the way you described it so beautiful After all these, she felt abandoned and isolated by the world that meant so much to her, she was caught up in a string of misfortunes, fighting her own battle alone, without even wanting the help of that one person who means the world for her 🥺 But the decision was hers to go away from him

InRa first i got confused what is this when i read parents i joined the dots are such caring parents 😳😆 I just love how they were sleeping beside her, to feel whenever she needs something... ❤️ A very well described scene, with such a deep meaning ufff I'm more and more into the story baby... The doctor at home scene was so very realistic and without making it look too dramatic you perfectly show the essence of these scenes ❤️ And in the morning, when she wakes up and refuses to take her parents with her, it was just so touching... this girl is so selfless... and look what she gets She can't see any of her dear ones in pain so she chooses to let the pain make her die inside, break her heart and take away her soul 💔 Such a normal and common thing for Geet to suffer alone, with no one by her side, just to not make them go through the same pain 😳

Loving the hospital scenes and the doctor trying to explain her everything and she is seriously so strong to go through all this 🥺 Some people are very weak, not being ready to fight for their lives, they get used to the idea of dying but she's a true fighter and I guess most of her power comes from her love Being just 18 years old, she's so mature and understanding... She loves selflessly and when we love selflessly, we don't worry about the outcome of it or whether we're giving more than the other person She provided room for his freedom, making sure she isn't trying to tie him down... so she let him go 🥺

She isn't even telling that to her parents, as she knows they can't bear it... 😭 The doctor tried to make her agree to tell that to her parents but she became more determined to let it be her own painful secret... 💔 I keep reading this part as it conveys such different and overwhelming emotions... And I truly love that you chose to write that she isn't considering telling anyone about it, but she's still willing to fight ❤️ And after reading this part, just found out about Karan... poor boy I was blaming him a bit much without even knowing what truly happened 😆 The doctor said she needs someone by her side and she got that person... Karan... he became her very good friend and her confident, she found in him that divine help she needed while coping with her unspoken pain 😳 Like you said, he became her "guardian"... and yeah baby, this is the perfect word ❤️ I was trying to get a good word for that but you got it for me... 😆 Now everything makes sense and the scene of Geet and Karan was MUed so much... She literally gave herself so much pain by letting Maan doubt her intentions 😭😭😭 soon everything will fall back darling hugs

There were five years, five long years in which every part of them called each other's name and I'm sure they thought about each other so very much... The inner fight of Geet with herself was even more painful cause she had to lie to everyone, to hide her pain and try to avoid the breaks down 🥺 Loving the fact that Karan has such a down to earth personality and always treats Geet in the best way possible 😳😳 but... but... 🥺 The memories of Maan are still haunting here and he's still such a big part of her life without even being present there and she's still thinking about both of them getting back together which makes me so happy... ❤️ but she thinks that's unfair to him 😭 The song is perfect, baby ☺️ 😳 It describes everything so beautifully.. Your choice is always perfect hahah ❤️😆

Heeey it was indeed a lot to handle with for this little emotional fool writing the comment 😆😳 But I ABSOLUTELY loved it ❤️ I tried hard not to disappear into a puddle of tears... 😭 Eagerly waiting for the next update... and 'til then I'll read this again and again to get the amazing flavour you have 😆😳 This was my very honest and heartfelt review means rest were not 😲 and like always I couldn't convey the real intensity I felt 🤣😆 but you know how much I love it and how much I love you ❤️ You're my inspiration, my love... and don't even think about not continuing this story 🤗😡 Do you want to be punished kya? 😆 😳 Iwould love to write even more but you already know you're my everything 😳 and also can't keep you much reading the comment, poor you 😆 ❤️ Keep slaying like you always do my baby... you're simply the bestestestest best 🤗 Love you endlessly, TTMAB ❤️

And in the end I would like to say that this update reminds me of TFiOS 😆😳and about some quotes from it which suit Geet and their story and the way she uses to live her life with his memories..

"There are infinite numbers between 0 and 1. There's .1 and .12 and .112 and an infinite collection of others. Of course, there is a bigger infinite set of numbers between 0 and 2, or between 0 and a million. Some infinities are bigger than other infinities. I cannot tell you how thankful I am for our little infinity. I wouldn't trade it for the world. You gave me a forever within the numbered days, and I'm grateful." ❤️ aww i loved it totally

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

❤️ Love, I heard something about season 2... there has to be one!!!

LYTSVM ❤️🤗

I forgot about CC... as I don't even get replies😆😆😳

Originally posted by: Soju.

yeah... than idiot phone died on me... i am going to buy new one this week... 🤢 i need season 2 😡

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

its so painful
geet has cancer that's why she lied to maan even her family doesn't know about it..
hope she is alright now and maan will get to know all this
thnx for update

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

Ummm ILY ❤️ ^.^