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Posted: 9 years ago
plllz do try bcz ur loyal fans are always waiting for u,plzzz reconsider u😉r decision!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

Part 3 & last part..

Omg..geet had tumor 😲
Bt knowing this maan completely lost it with the fear to loose her..
Seeing her in this condition maan realized his feelings n then dev told him the truth that geet also never know about meera n his relation..
Maan realized his mistake that how wrong he was not believing her n ignorant towards his feelings in his rage..
Finally they sort out the differences nd confessed their love..
Also geet got treated by dr. Thomas
Both start new journey of their life...

only the fear of losing his geet made maan realize his love😆👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Beautiful updates. I'm glad Dev was finally able to get through to Maan to clarify that Geet had no part to play in what happened. I also liked that he gave Maan the push he needed to admit what he felt for Geet. Loved every bit of the last part. Fantastic job as always/

dev is a genuine friend rare and few ones to find in life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
plzz plzzz plzzz 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Teju_wkar

Part 1

It seems Maan has got wound .. n Miss Geet is responsible.. Meera is married to Dev.. n Meera is Geet's sis.. Ok.. but seeing Geet dnagling to other man shhot up Maan's anger. waiting to see what's connection n past btwn des two..

neither maaneet can't be blamed???read next to know more!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Teju_wkar

Part 2
Oh so Man accused her badly for DEv n Meera's affir.. n also humliated her.. but Geet got good friend in Jimmy... atleast der is soemone for her.. But Maan is still saem.. I felt bad for him last update n anger for Geet.. but thsi update changed side.. lolz.. Liked d way Geet gave him ans back..

yeah atleast jimmy was there for her!!!!!!!!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Teju_wkar

Part 3..
Sometimes when people whom we do love are near us n we don't value their place n love in our lif..e same happened with Maan.. now he got to know Geet has tumour n might die.. n that made him restless.. Dev told entire truth to Maan.. Geet helped Dev for stnding up on his own feet.. So dev n meera tn Geet too going in austrlia.. waiting for next..

exactly,we don't value our eyes until we lose our sight!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
geet agreed for treatment
doc said maan to join geet as soon as possible
maaneet moments were cute
loved it
thank u
Edited by leenuguru - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update loved It
all mu b/w maaneet is over
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

LAST PART

GEET was in complete new world on a private Island. She like her environment and adored the beauty of the place. One week had passed and all this could seems to her like a dream. Thoug on very first day she was angry on Dev and Meera for bringing her to Khurana's private Island but now she was in relief that Maan is no where.

After dinner she went to her room. Most of the time she kept distance from Dev and Meera to gave them their private space. She took her medicine and drifted into a deep sleep. Its 2 am when door of her room opened. One shadow came in and person sat near her head. She was sleeping like a care free baby. His sculptured lips curved to a smile. He couldn't able to resist and leaned to kiss on her cheek,due to which she alerts and sleep broke. She got up with a jerk and turned on the side lamp. Maan was there in her room. Torned aside her duvet she come out of the bed and glared him. Maan to stood up and went closer to her,covering the distance between them.

"i suppose you are on your business trip? Then what are you doing here?" She asked in a sharp

"this place belongs to me,and i need no one's permission to come here." He replied with a devil smirk.


Geet dont found words to argue. "ok then you stay here. I am leaving." she crossed her arms on her chest and stare into his eyes.

Maan picked up the alarm clock from side table and showed to her. "its 2 am Miss Intelligent." he teased her and her face faded.

"ok then i will leave in morning,but not stay with you under one roof." she dumped her feet and walked out. All lights were on but house seemed so dull and quite. "they must be sleeping. I will talk to both in morning." Geet thought not to disturb Dev and Meera but she was unaware that one more shock was waiting for her in morning.

Dev and Meera already left for their honeymoon. It was all Maan's plan to brough her here. "dont gave this look Geet. Un dono ka kaam tha tume yaha lana. Now they are left." Maan revealed and Geet fuming inside on both for trapping her.

"i am leaving right now." she said and went to pack her bag. After packing she left the mansion and Maan dont even tried to stop her.

Three hours passed. She was standing alone on sand tired and sad,when Maan joined her. He smirked at her. "kya hua tum to jane wali thi na?" he teased her again and she twiched her lips in disappointment.

"You are Devil. Tumhi ne sabko mana kiya na. No one is ready to help me." Geet cribbed.

Maan pressed her on to him. "yes sweetheart. You said right i am devil. What i want i get at any cost. This is my Island baby so its obvious all are only following my instructions."

Emotionally Geet knew she was in complete mess. Her emotions swinging radically from one extreme to the other. She knew Maan very well and now she was struck with him and on his mercy. "what you want?" she said in depressed voice.

"bahut kuchh." he said huskily staring into her eyes hysterically. She knew what he is upto and the though was enough to trembled her violently. He feels her shiver in his arms. "Dont worry,right now i only want you to get cure. Dr. Thomas will arrive any time. Once your check up had done,then we will proceed for further treatment." he informed her.

"Dr. Thomas?" Jimmay tried to get his appointment from last two month but failed and today he himself coming to check her. Definitely its MSK's power and money who forced him to come.

Geet jerked his arms and pushed back herself. "i dont want to meet him. I cant afford his treatment." Geet denied same time.

"You dont need to stressed yourself. Just concentrate on your health only." he assured her.

"no Mr. MSK its a matter of stress for me." She argued.

Maan grasped her firmly. "Geet stop being childish. You need to be cure and he is the only hope." his fear again over powered his senses. His warm breath coming more rapidly.

"but i dont have a money. Main apna treatment wahi karwaung jaha main karwa sakti hu." Geet glance straight into his eyes and snap.

"Damn it why you creating a mess ha? I will pay to him its not your head ache." he was on the verge of shouting.

"Yeah right you can do any thing. You buy him. But i dont need your favours Mr. Khurana. Already you accusing me for consipracy and this favour gave you more reasons to accuse me later. Or wait a minute,you favouring me so i would accept your offer and become your mistress after getting well. Right." In her frustration of getting away from him,she accused him and took his favour an another trap for her. She couldn't even knew what she said in her anger.

"Geet..." he jerked and stare her with his widened eyes. She frightened seeing him furious. His body even shuddering from the anger radiating in his body.

She too shivered like a dry leaf. The fear in her eyes forcing him to face his previous issues with her. All the time he blamed her,which pushed her far away from him.

Losing her was not an option. Taking a deep breath,he tried to contain his emotions,pushing down ruthlessly on the hurt and possessiveness that were trying to claw to the surface. This time nothing he wanted more than to give Geet everything. But she not allowed him to do. She always do favours on other without any expectations and now he wanted things to be better in her life. A tension free healthy life. Maan cupped her face and rested his forhead on her's. "Pls allow me. Pls. I promise i dont show my face to you again." Shuddering as he breathed in her unique,famine scent. His lips touched hers and she lost control on her body. He shoving his body into hers. He was helpless but he loved the way her body surrendered to him. Geet's arms snaked around his body. He groaned as she glued her body against him. She was in his arms and his body begging to his mind to take her. Geet whimpered a meak sound of need as is mouth devoured hers.

Every time when they come closer their mind stop working and just their desires took all the charge. He want her to feel and make her loose her senses but he pushed him back when he found her breathles. Before they jumped into one more argument,his man came to inform them about the arrival of doc Thomas. Without hearing her,he forcily took her back to his mansion where Dr. Thomas read her all reports and interrogate her in his own way.

"dont worry Mr. Khurana. Her tumor is in early stage and cureable. Just a small operation and she will be perfectly fine." he gave them a hope which he excatly wanted.

"so when you wanted to operate?" Maan asked briskly.

"i suggest you admit her as soon as possible. First we have to do some tests then i let you know about the date."

"Thank you Doc. Tomorrow she will be there." Maan declared and he left.

"i am not going any where." she starts again.

"just stop it Geet. Now i dont want to hear a single word from your side. We are going and that's final. No more argument." he gritted his teeth in frustration.

"kis haq se Maan? Who give you authority to take decisions on my behalf." Geet afraid of his weird behaviour.

If it was some one else then Maan would lost his temper ages ago but Geet is spl. She is from the first they met,but he never consider his inner voice. Maan wrapped his arms around her and pressed her against his hard torso. "Then give me this right. Be my Girlfriend." his words stunned her. She could not able to believe first but then her mind alerts her.

"oh so you change your words to trap me. Girlfriend? Par matlab to woi hai na. Ultimately main bann to woi jaungi,tumhari mistress. Maan dont try to fool me. I know you already have a girlfriend." A pich of pain was added in her voice when she talked about his affair.

Maan's eyes narrowed. "My girlfried? Who?" he was even shocked.

Geet free herself and showed him the magzine where he was posing with one girl. "kya jwab hai? She asked in annoying tone.

Maan glance and laughed. He grabbed her again. "look at your face and you said you want to stay away with me." he caressed her face softly.


"My jelous queen,she is not my girlfriend. She is just my old friend and this pics,you know media. Wo log har cheez ko hype karte hai. Still you doubted then confirm with her. She is already engaged and soon going to marry her boyfriend. Geet I never allow any girl come closer to me as much I let you. Geet i hurt you so much. I know i did wrong with you in my rage,but pls give me last chance to correct my mistakes." Maan embraced her firmly. "i cant loose you. And that i realized on the day i saw you unconscious on hospital bed. I am sorry for hurting you always but pls forgive me and accept me in your life. I want to be with you,for forever." his whimpering voice and rapid heartbeats told Geet what he feels for her. She could hear his uneven heartbeats. Geet hug him back.


Both having a solace after 5 years of sepration. "then promise me you will listen to me. Not doubting my love." Geet demands in sweet voice.

Maan kissed her. "i promise,i will never hurt you. I know you were not at fault. My heart always aware of this but my rage never let me think in right direction. But i promise,from now onwards i wont hurt you." Maan hug her tight. "i love you Geet. You are mine. Only mine. No one snatch you from me. No one." Maan confess his hidden feelings for her which definetely delighted her. She was craving for this since long.

"Maan i want to live now. Live with you." her disease scared her. She dont want loose the moment waiting for her.

"dont scare Geet. Now when we are together,no need to worry about. We fight for your life." Maan's words filled courage in her.

"Maan main theek ho jaungi na?" She asked with a hope filled eyes and Maan nodded yes. "I love you Maan. Please never leave me." She confessed in a whimpering voice because of her overwhelmed heart.

"I love you to sweetheart." Maan embraced her protectively. In his arms she felt safe and secured. She got a courage to fight for her life. Their unsaid love now become their strength and she knew this man would not leave her. Whatever the past they live but that would not effect on their future. Maan not trusted her but always love her. But Today he trust her as well and this realization vanished all bitterness of them...

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