Longings #2|| Maneet FF ||Thread completed || - Page 83

Originally posted by: Desire6

FINALLY READ ALL THE 23 PARTS ABBA ...

HAVE WRITTEN IT SO BEAUTIFULLY...SEE NOW AM LONGING FOR NEXT PART..IT WAS SO NICE TO READ DEM IN A GO..

THANKS FOR THE PMS YOU HAD SEND AND SORY FOR NOT RESPONDING TO ANY OF YOUR MSGS..WAS HELD UP AND IS HELD UP NOW TOO..BT SINCE I HAV CATCHED ALL THE PART..NOW IT WANT B A PROBLEM FOR ME...

COMMIN TO UPDATE...FROM START..I LIKED THE WAY YOU PORTRAYED EVERY CHARACTER

HAD LOVED GEET AND DEV KA PURE FRIENDSHIP

MAAN AND TARA..KA LOVE FOR EACH OTHER AND TARA KA SWEET NATURE

DEN GEET KA DAD AND HER MOM...MEEERA EVERY CHARACTER HAD DER OWN FLAWS AND DER THOUGHTS ...

OKAY I NEVER UNDERSTOOD Y MAAN USED TO HATE GEET AT FIRST PLACEWAS IT BECAUSE SHE WAS BORN WIT SILVER SPOON OR ...WAS IT HE WAS REALLY ATTRACTED TOWARDS HER AND DIS ANGER WAS A SHOWOFF..

COZ EVEN WHEN GEET HAD LOST HER PARENTS HE COMPARED HER WITH HIM FOR THE LOSS DEN AGAIN CHANGED FOR SHE HAD NO PROBLEM FOR SHE HAD ALL MONEY AND POWER TO STAY ALIVE AND SUCCEED...

ND DER IS A PARA IN BETWEEN ...I GUESS ON PART 16

DER YOU WROTE ABOUT ...HE COLLIDE WIT A PERSON AND DEN HE WAS FURIOUS ..SORY I COULDNT GET DAT PART..WHO CLASHED WITH WHOM ...

A BIT CONFUSED😡

WOULD LIKE TO READ HIS POV...

MAAN HE IS SHATTERED HE..FELL FOR GEET AND NOW HE IS AWARE EVERYTHIN IS PLANNED ...SO IS HE AWARE ...DAT GEET HAS MISUNDERSTOOD HIM..HOPE HE GOES TO THE DEPTH AND BRING GEET BACK...

ND MAINLY HE STOPS ..HIS GAMBLING...

I HAD LOVED DAT HEART WREENCHING PART WHERE GEET FAINTS IN CAR AND D WAY HIS LOVE POURED OUT FOR HER..

U MADE ME CRY WHERE HER PARENTS DIED..ONE MOMENT DEY WHERE PLANNING FOR SURPRISE AND NEXT MOMENT ...GOT A SHOCK FOR LIFETIME..

DONT KNOW Y GEET HAS COME TO VILLAGE..IS SHE IN MAAN KA VILLAGE

SHE HATES MAAN AS WELL AS LOVES HIM TOO..

ND OH 😲😲😲 I HAD THOUGHT TARA ...ND DONE DAT MEDIA WORK ..BT WOH WOH@@@ IT WAS GEET KA MASTER MIND ...

SO WAITIN TO KNOW IN ACTUAL GEET WAS OPERATED DAT DAY OR ..SHE WAS OPERATED LATER...

FEEL PITY FOR DEV..BECHARA ..IN ALL NO ONE IS KNOWING WAT IS GOIN THRU HIM...

HOPE MEERA ATLEAST INFORM HIM..DAAT HIS GEETU IS ALIVE..

U REALLY CONFUSED US WITH WHETHER MEERA OR TARA WILL BE GREY ..

BT TURNS OUT DAT...

MR RATHOD IS THE REAL CULPRIT..OR NAHI TOH KYA ..COZ OF HIM AND TO MARRY MAAN SOON ..TARA..KE MANN MAIN YEH GREEDINESS AAYA..ND WATS D END RESULT LOST EVERYTHIN..

HAD LOVED MANEET MOMENTS..DER FIGHT CRIB DER TALK..DER CLOSENESS..DAT BIKE RIDE...DAT OUT HOUSE COFFEE BALCONY MOMENTS ...EMOTIONAL HUG..ALL 😳😳😳

D WAY SHE TRUSTED HIM ...ND IN D LAST TO FOR HER LOVE ..WHICH WAS MORE THEN THE HATE SHE GAVE EVERYTHIN TO HIM..

BT HOPE SHE KNOWS ..DER MAAN IS MAKIN MONEY FOR HER..HIS JAAN ..HE TO LOST HIS SOUL AFTER SHE IS GONE.

NOW REALLY WAIITN FOR NEXT PART...

TEASER ..IS LIKKEEE😲😲😲 KISPEY KEHER TOOTH PADA..ND AISE LANGUAGE...ISSHH!!!!!!!!! ...SANGAT KA ASAR..HMM SO HE DONT WANT ANYONE IN GEET KA CABIN...

ND DEN 2ND TEASER..IS HE IMAGINING HER OR SHE IS REALLY DER..

PLEASE BRING DEM FACE TO FACE SOON...TASHAN ND NARAZGI AND TISHANGI ..ND HOT PASSION AND HATRED DEKHNA PASAND HAI ..NOT ..DURIYAAN

DO CONT SOON...AND PLEASE DO PM ME ...SORY FOR BEING LATE...

WILL BE WAIITN

Originally posted by: vrinda22

ye crazy sweta...where has she vanished