MG OS BEWAFA Part 2 p4 feb 25 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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intresting start.. i think its some misunderstanding..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful concept! even I'm suspicious was it really maan bcuz no son would repeat the same injustice his mother went through! though, I would refrain frm making any conclusion.

But there could be a possibility than it was maan's father. anyways waiting for more!
Recently, I have been humming to a beautiful song title 'Bewafa'. although that song was directed towards the heroine but it suits the present situation in yr os too...


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S6QIWT1pJ2I[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by sohni_kudi_111 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Wonderful update dear, mr khurana is it maan or his womeniser dad eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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THANK YOU SO MUCH ..FOR LIKES AND COMMENTS...😃
I KNOW MOST OF THEM HAVE UNDERSTOOD WHAT WOULD HAVE HAPPENED ...😊
BUT STILL HERE IS THE NEXT UPDATE..
HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT...

PART 2

It was around 1am Maan came back home. usually he used to find geet waiting for him at the hall. but today she wasnt there today. he ignored it. he went to their room. geet wasnt there TOO . It was for first time he didnt see her after coming back home in last 1.5 years. Maan searched for her in whole KM. at last looked at his mom's room. their was the best sight that just made his all tiredness vanish in just few seconds. there slept his precious two souls together. he silently moved from there.

Maan couldnt sleep without geet. It was now a habbit to sleep with geet in his arms from last 1.5 years. he still remembers when his Mom came with this alliance. he was against marriage after seeing his parents daily arguments. Thinking about his parents he was again reminded of his Dad his blood boiled again. he got from bed was goning to break the vase kept near the bed when his eyes went towards geet's pic. he kept drooling over geet's photo. his anger calm down and a smile replaced his anger.


It was next day during breakfast from Naina he got to know about geet's pregnancy. geet he just hugged her as tight as possible. he could feel geet's body stiff. geet stood as if she dont have any happiness.she came out of hug.
I am feeling tired. Maan felt something fishy but for time being he kept quite.
then let me give my wife a lift. he was going to lift her.

Maan..mein koi choti bachi nahin hoon...I can walk. Maan felt geet was annoyed. may be he did something wrong. though he was sure he hadnt done anything wrong but was ready
to monafoy geet. he always loved pampering her. As you wish my queen.
Naina felt geet's behaviour weird. geet left to her room.
Maan..Naina called Maan from back. did you do or tell anything annoying to geet.
No mama. I even didnt speak to her after yesterday morning..I was buzy in office works.
wahi to..Maan spend some time with her beta...atleast during this time... though Maan wasnt convinced he decided to take a leave today and spend time with geet.

Maan went to his room. geet was standing near the window with silent tears. Maan came from back and hugged her....I missed u yesterday night very badly...
he bit her ear and kissed her nape. geet was struggling to get out of hug. At last geet was successful and pushed Maan with all her force. Dont touch me...
Maan was stunned. he would have fallen if he hadnt balanced himself. geet...
I said Dont touch me...Dont touch me..geet sat down murmuring not to touch her...
Maan was shocked. he was unsure what was his mistake. he again went towards geet.
geet started shouting alerting Naina. she ran towards maaneet room.
geet kya hua.. asked Naina standing besides geet. geet just cried her heart out. Maan stood their numb. he was not able think anything. Naina alast asked Maan to go out. she closed the door and tried to pacify geet. geet stopped crying then went back again to silence. Naina tried to ask her the reason. After lot of pressurizing geet told about yesterday's incident... Naina was shocked but didnt believe geet.
Beta let me ask him first...their will be some MU. I'll ask him..
no mama I heard right...Mama I hate him..At least papa was same as he was in real in front of you but Maan..he cheated me...geet cried more loudly...
Naina didnt know what to say...Maan cant do this..A mother inside her screamed out..but geet cant be wrong.. she decided to speak to Maan. Naina opened
the door only to find Maan standing there waiting for Naina. Mama she is fine na..kya hua use..woh..
where were you yesterday?
office aur kahan...
Naina closed her eyes..tum office mein nahi thai Maan...geet had come to KC yesterday...
I went to site for inspection in between.
Naina told whatever geet told to her. Maan was shocked but didnt know what to say. Naina was trying to find an answer in Maan's face but she couldnt understand whatMaan was thinking. Maan went into their room and closed the door.
get out geet screamed. Maan ignored her scream and went towards her. Maan caught her two hands and brought geet closed to him. geet was struggling but Maan didnt give her
a damn. geet was screaming not to touch her and leave her.
chup bilkul chup...
Maan geet whispered
Maan left her hands and cupped her face. Do you really think I can cheat you? Maan asked. geet could clearly see pain in Maan's eyes...but what she saw cant be a lie.
Did you see me? Maan's voice had rage. Maan asked more loudly Did you see me? geet almost shivered. Maan all time was trying to find a little trust from geet's side.
but found not even a bit. he pushed geet towards bed and left the room. Maan didnt come back whole day even geet didnt step out of room.

It was almost a week Maan stayed in outhouse. he never came to KM after that day. geet was not ready to believe other than what she saw. though somewhere her heart still denied her own conclusion. she decided to meet Maan once. At leat he has to deny or accept.
geet went to KC with some determination. she went KC in Maan's cabin. she heard some giggles from Maan's cabin. her BP shoot up so high. she just barged in only to find two in a passionate kiss. Man facing his back to geet. she felt disgusting but she pulled Maan and gave a tight slap. but next moment got a shock of her life. Dad... geet said in low voice.
It was not her mistake. Maan was a carbon copy of his Dad. And even in his 50's Raj looked only 40+ from facial looks and had a well maintained body. One will easily get confused.
how dare you? geet almost got frightened with his voice. her legs trembled. she was going to loose her balance and fall down but Maan caught her from back. the touch itself said who it was. she turned and hid her face in Maan's chest.
how dare you slap me? Raj shouted again. Enough..Maan shouted in same pitch. this is my office and I cant tolerate these type of non-sense here. Maan said last words looking at the girl giving a disgusting look. she did what you deserve. you can leave.Raj couldnt argue back as all his shares were sold and he didnt have single pie for himself. he has to wait for money he is alloted from Maan every month. Raj left with his current girl-friend.



Maan tried to separate geet from her but geet cling to him. Maan tried few times but then left it and hugged her back. After sometime geet raised her head. I am sorry geet said audible to Maan. Maan just kissed her forehead, then her eyes and eyed her lips. geet looked at Maan with tears and kissed Maan which turned later a very passionate one.

thus cleared there MU and promised each other to trust even in worse condition.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
awesome...
shukar hai wo maan nae tha...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Awesome atlast maaneet mu got cleared . want maaneet moments and tq for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Fantastic Part

So The car Geet followed was Maan's but the person itself was not Maan .
Geet believed that her husband cheated on her and Maan at first could not understand why Geet did not want him near her and when his mother told him he tried approaching Geet and telling her the truth but her believe was strong and Maan stayed away from her until Geet decided to visit him at office and found again a couple kissing but this time it was not Maan but his father now she realized that her father in law was indeed at the Farmhouse and not Maan

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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Superb update
I know maan is not like this

Cloud clearness sky is shining
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
hehehehe... for once what I assumed was correct!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Nice update
so she has seen her father-in-law
Now all misunderstanding cleared👍🏼

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