MG : KUCH PYAR KA PAGALPAN BHI THA teaser pg 18 march 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Maan-Geet love each other but both families are against their affair...

Nandini pestering Karan to support his own brother for good but he can't go against his father...

very emotional...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update!!Maaneet are madly in love each other but their parents not accepted their love...they meets secretly...Geet worried about Maan's wound..he pacify her...Karan loves his bro Maan but he is coward in front of his family..Nandini supporting Maan and she is angry on Kiran...Loved it so much...waiting eagerly for the next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Nice update
maaneet scene was awesme..
Maan family is against his love...
Maan was spoiled brat bt becz of geet he left all his bad habbits..cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story.
Superb story. Maan and Geet are in love but their families are enemies. Even than both did not care for anything and meet. Geet came to meet Maan wearing a burqa and teased him. Maan's hand is bleeding. Geet thought it was due to his family and started crying. Now Maan teased her and told her that he got this wound in his gym. Maan's brother Karan is tensed about him. His wife Nandini asked him to take his side but he is afraid that if Maaneet will keep on meeting they will be killed.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
part 1-3
nice start but emotional as it proceed ...
lol that was geet in burkha 😲😆😆 god she irritates maan so much with her premnagar...
maaneet's banter is cute ...they are secretly meeting!!
grrr maaneet's family...they rather kill them than the marriage!!wow
geet is crying so much seeing maan's wound though maan pacified her still she thinks all wrong happens with maan because of her...
nandini is right for geet maan left his all bad habits and here karan is saying geet is just a handa!!great...
but nandini is with him now...karan loved his brother but infront of their father he cant say anything...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow lovely emotional update..te way geet ki tears seeing my maan ki hurt and te way geet worry abt their family and cursing herself but my maan know how to calm his misty and both are in pain was lovely emotional..te way karan worrying for his brother and nandini trying knock some senes, abt my maaneet,how geet change a spoiled maan into prefect msk was lovely..i love te update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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when you going update torn realtion


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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 4

Maan I am hungry , geet said shaking him.. They were going towards the unknown destination that she couldn't even guess , her tummy growled and he laughed while she made a cute baby face...

Jaan I love this puppy face of yours a lot. Pata hai I want to kiss you right here , right then jaan , he said kissing her wrist that he was holding. His lips touched her wrist making her shiver. Even after being together for four complete years , maan still had not even kissed her , he loved how he maintained the dignity of their relationship and the first feel of his proximity on her wrist that moment was evoking a new feeling within her..

Maan.. She moaned.. Her milky white wrist were looking so beautiful..

Jaan , I don't like your wrist , maan said suddenly halting the car and she looked at him shocked..

Maan .. Before geet could proceed . maan shifted a bit and leaned towards back taking a parcel and he gave her..
Her eyes were looking expectantly at him..

What is this.. She asked with a curious face and maan smirked as she was about to grab the packet from his hand he dodged the packet..

Na.. Na.. Itni jaldi nai.. He smirked and she quickly opened the seat belt and pounced on him.. She held his one hand and was trying to get the hold of his other hand..

Let me get your hold once.. She tried but he flipped and now she was beneath him..

Jaan , itna gussa he touched her red nose and shifted a bit took out a box.. He opened that and she sat on the seat , now maan was on passenger seat and geet on driver's seat , geet's eyes twinkled as she saw the contents of the box..

Chudiyan , she said excitedly and maan took her wrist and made her wear one by one.. His eyes were on her face while his hands were slipping the bangles..

Maan see , they match my suit.. Geet exclaimed as she saw that he was making her wear the green glass bangles.. Maan kissed her wrist once he had done with one hand and geet looked at the packet again.. It had two more boxes..

One had red bangles and the other was having the diamond studded bangles , that were looking so expensive and as maan was about to make her wear them , she didn't let him..

Maan , no.. I can't take this , waise hi meri family mere against hai aur aapki bhi toh ise lene ka koi matlab nai banta.. Her words were seeming practical and the next moment he took the glass bangles too and said in a sarcastic way..

Let me take them too then geet , I think it is heavy for you to bear , I know our relationship is nothing more than a compulsion isn't it geet..
So , don't feel any kind of pressure now.. I don't want you to feel anything now.. Let me take them too , maan was roughly taking out the bangles when she pulled her hand and one bangle broke and the glass pierced in her wrist..

Ahh.. She cried and he immediately wiped the blood and tied his handkerchief on her wrist..

Why did you have to invoke me jaan.. You know I am short tempered , I get angry easily and see what I did.. He was blabbering and she immediately hug him feeling him , maan felt her shivering and he she could feel him getting stiffen..

Maan , I am sorry , I always do this.. I always provoke you.. You love me so much.. Kitne pyar se aap hamare liye ye lekar aaye aur humne..
She was having tears and she parted a little and he wiped her tears..

Phir se ye aansun.. He said with a mocking face and she kissed her life , her maan..

Maan parted her and he laughed as the next moment her stomach growled..

Itni bhuk lagi hun jaan..

She made a baby face and nodded.

How could I eat when I knew that you didn't have anything , maan shyad me apse utna pyar nai karti jitna aap karte ho , dekho isliye aap itna kuch laye mere liye..

Maan nodded in a No..
And this time he gave her the big bar that he peeled and gave her. He knew that how much she love chocolates and maan had specially brought a box full of her favorite chocolates ..he forwarded her the bar but she first made him take a bite and then had herself..

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I think you ppl r not liking this concept
Seeing the response on this , I am seriously thinking to conclude this .


This was an inspiration from a regional movie and name is taken from fawad khan's show (as I love the title track of this show a lot)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update loved maaneet's cute romantic moments😊 they are simply adorable and so much in love. Hope soon their families will realize the depth of their pure and true love and instead of separating them, they will unite them forever😊 eagerly waiting for more😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Maan brought bangles for Geet. Some glass bangles and some diamond studded expensive bangles. Geet accepted glass bangles but refused to take diamond ones as their families are against them. Maan got angry so Geet accepted them.

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