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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely teaser! will b waiting
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nice teaser...
waiting for an update ..
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PART 2

Part 2

Wanna dance ? She asked a handsome hunk who was gazing in her direction , she was bored with all the flirts around her and she was also getting the meaning of their talks , most of them were already bewitched by her And she was least interested , she knew that most of them were waiting for a chance so that they could take her to their bed but amidst all the talks of the town where she was tagged a flirt she never let any guy play with her femininity .
Geetanjali rajput was not an easy catch. She loves to make them run , she had fun with many but she was not ready to get hitched right now . All she wanted now was her name spread like fire all over the business world and that was happening with all her efforts and hard work .

Geetanjali was busy talking when her gaze went upon the bar and she saw the guys there , some were drunk and her eyes caught a single pair of eyes which were looking like stuck at her.. His hands were moving and the way he was sipping the drink , she could easily say that he was not even having anything but was just looking at her.

The guy was wearing a black tux but the westernized look along with his smirk on his M-shaped lips made her feet to move in his direction..

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aabhija aabhija mere do bhi bacho ki ma.. .


mere sare zakmon pe tu jaise mirchi lagake gayi...

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Maan's trance was broken when he found the lady in black standing in front of him and her lips carved in a simple smile. The smile meant for him or someone ?
He tried to question himself but seeing her looking at him , he heard her asking the same again..

wanna dance.. she asked looking at him , his hands were holding the drink that he was actually not drinking but his eyes were on her and he knew that she sensed that he was looking at her and he was caught but still she she herself approached him confused him , still he gave her his hand and like he expected she took the lead and took him to the dance floor..

The other two Arjun and veer were looking at maan and the girl who was supposed to be the difficult catch had herself lead maan to the dance floor .

Was she actually here ? Asked Arjun seeing maan and geet who were now dancing closely and most of the eyes were on them .


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So you are.. she asked as he swayed her along with the tunes , though she had known most of the business tycoon here in the party but seeing such a sober natured man in front of her she couldn't help to ask him , she was familiar with malhotra's , singhania's and even ranaut's but she was still to meet with khurana's . they were the best and she couldn't manage till now to arrange a meeting with them .

MAAN.. MAAN SINGH KHURANA , the words were enough for geet and the next moment she was in his embrace and he hands were on her waist and his hold was neither firm nor soft , the authority he was having just with the hold was mesmerizing..

So , maan why you were gazing at me.. Wanna try your luck , she asked proudly and with a hint of disgust that was till now not observed by anyone but maan sensed the tinge of bitterness with her words..

He brought her hand that was on his chest and kissed her knuckles replying

Just wanted to take you on a lunch date. Maan with a due purpose chose his words he knew that she might take him wrong and he didn't wanted that while he could see the small smile playing on her lips she took a step forward and took the lead..
Her lips touched his and she very softly held him by his neck while they were still in the middle of the dancefloor with the eyes on them and spotlight was focusing them. Their lips were so perfect and maan nibbled her lips making her groan within the kiss , she thought him to be a gentle one but the next moment the intensity of the kiss increased as geet bit his lower lip making maan to surrender with her demand..

There were oohs and aahs and the media was just capturing the pictures , it was a good ten minutes , they left each other .

I never had this amazing kiss in my life , said geetanjali

I never had kissed anyone until now , he responded to her and this was one of the genuine reply she got from any guy she was with ..

you are two sweet and genuine maan.. she winked as she once again pecked his lips. their first meeting was itself marked with a
kiss that too she initiated left maan with a sweet shock as she left the dance floor..
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Next : soon

Dearie's i wanna clear something
If this didn't end in 4 parts then parts will be in blog for sure
Though I will try my best to complete this in 4 parts

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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fab update! well written! Geet asks Maan 4 a dance! he is shocked! Maaneet dance! Geet gets 2 knw his name! Arjun n Veer stunned! Geet kisses Maan! update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice update
Geet approach maan n shockingly kiss him

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Posted: 9 years ago
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First meeting and kiss.. Good going
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HiIi !!!
Suhana Di...
Nice update ...
God.. Lines of Maan aabhiJa mere Do Bachon Ki Maa ..
Mere zakhmo par mirchi Laga ke Gayi ...
Tooo Funny ..
Hahaha ...
But I am still confused If Geet is so impressed with Maan then ..
What is all her Hitlar avtar ...
Update next soon ..
and If you shift this story to blog .. then pm me the Pws ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So MSK ka jaadu Geetanjali pe bhi chalgaya. Pehle mulakhat pe hi kiss. Very interesting... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update
Maaneet dancing and kissed
Waiting for next update

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