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Posted: 9 years ago
Shocking update. Maan proposed Geet and she accepted it. She wanted to tell him her past but Maan refused to listen. Than she told him about her being mother of a child. Maan told he don't care and will help her to search her baby. Maan took Geet to his home on Diwali. Dadima is happy. When Geet saw Dev she is shocked as he is father of her child. Dev requested her not to reveal this truth to Maan.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic update with a shocking twist.. Maan proposed to Geet and she accepted it. Maan refused to hear about her past. Whole family is happy to meet Geet except Dev who is the father of Geet's baby.. Dev requested Geet not to disclose to anyone about he being the father of her baby but someone overheard their talks.. Superb.. Can't wait for the next update .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi
the up is really good
So Mann took Geet to a date and he confessed his love to her which made Geet emotional .she got drawn into it later the reality which she cant wipe out strike her .She revealed about her past life to Maan to which maan fully denied to hear as he wanted to accept Geet solely and her past doesn't matter to him .He bought Geet in his house to introduce her to his family but the past of her came in front of her in the form f Dev
What a twist and who the person is
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan proposed geet
She is drowning in his love
But she tried to say her past
She has a baby
N dont know about it
Maan doesnt want to know about it
He took her to his house n geet got shock seeing dev
Who doesnt want anyone to know he is father of geets baby
Is it maan who heard them
Nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!! this secret will be a problem in maaneet's life...I swear...but I want maan not to be affected by this at all...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago

The blooming rose Part 4


Dedicated to Ajay who is eagerly waiting for the update.Happy Valentine's day to all of you and this is my Valentine's treat.
















It was Maan.He was shocked.He grinned his teeth.
M:Bhaiyya...you only cheated Geet and put her in this condition?
Hearing him Maan shout Naintara,Savitri ,Adi and Sasha who were there to attend the Diwali celebration came in.
Naintara was shocked to see Geet:Geet!
Savi:That is Geet Rose whom Maan talked about.
Naintara was shocked:Geet is the girl Maan found for himself?
Maan:Dev bhaiyya...you have such a nice wife.But you cheated Naintara bhabhi ?You cheated on both Geet and Naintara bhabhi?How could do you stoop so low bhaiyya?I always respected you.But now I hate you.

Dev wept.
Geet wept:Maanji...please...
M:You keep quiet Geet.
He held her closer and told Dev:Now whatever you say I will always support Geet.

Geet looked at him.
An emotional eye lock...
Mahi..Mahi...

Without knowing anything Savitri cried:Dev and Geet?What is happening here?
Maan:Now tell me bhaiyya.What did you do to Geet?Did you trap her in your fake love?Did you do fake marriage with her?Or did you rape her?


Dev could'nt take it anymore.
Dev:Stop it Maan.How could you even think that I cheated Naintara?You know how much I love her.Still you doubt my loyalty towards her?
M:Stop it bhaiyya.Don't try to fool me again.If you have not cheated Geet how did she carry your child in her womb?
Savitri was shocked.
Naintara cried:Dev is saying the truth Maan.He has not cheated me.
Maan was stunned:Bhabhi,you still believe your husband who cheated you?
NT:I told you Dev has'nt cheated me.
Geet:Maanji...they are right.Devji has not cheated me.
M:Then what did I hear Geet?
G:That is also true.
M:What?I don't understand anything.
G:I will tell you everything.
Maan looked at her,so as Savitri.
G:My parents and I were a happy family though we were not financially well off.My parents used to call me Rose.My dad was a mechanic.He gave good education.Suddenly storm arrived in our life snatching our family happiness.Mom was diagnosed with cancer.Dad became paralysed due to that shock.
Geet's tears rolled down her cheeks while narrating her parents' health condition.
Maan really felt sad hearing it.


G:Money was essential for their treatment.Money came my way through Devji and Naintaraji.I became a surrogate mother for them.

Maan and Savitri were shocked.
Sav:Surrogate mother for Dev and Naintara?But why?
Naintara burst into tears.Dev was in tears.
NT:Because doctor told us that I can't be a mother.
Maan and Savitri were shocked.
NT:Yes I was pretending to be pregnant.

Maan and Savitri were shocked.
Dev:I did'nt want anyone to ridicule or taunt Naintara for not able to be a mother.So I only asked her to pretend to be pregnant.Surrogacy was my option.
NT:Doctor shocked us by saying that I can't produce a baby.So normal surrogacy was not possible.So artificial insemination was opted.Dev's sperm was introduced into Geet's uterus to produce a baby for us.So the baby became Geet's and Dev's,not mine and Dev.
G:As days passed since it was my baby naturally I got attached to my baby.But I knew that I will lose the baby to them.But still I requested them to allow me to come and see my baby whenever I wanted.They agreed.But...
Geet's tears rolled down her cheeks.Dev and Naintara became guilty.

NT:Unexpectedly Geet got attached to the baby.We got scared whether Geet will claim her baby.I could'nt imagine losing my baby.But I knew that I had no right on the baby as the real mother is Geet.

Dev:So after Geet gave birth to the baby we decided to be away from her forever.Because we did'nt want Geet to visit the baby frequently and there by claiming rights on the baby..

G:I never thought of claiming my baby.I just wanted to see my baby.After delivery when I opened my eyes I craved to see my baby.But I could'nt...
Geet wept.

NT:Geet had Cesarean.She was unconscious after the delivery.That time we took the baby and left from there to keep the baby away from Geet.
Dev:Luckily Maan and Dadimaa were on Canadian trip.So no one could find out that Naintara did'nt give birth to the baby.
Savitri wept:That means our Kavita is Geet's baby?
NT wept:Yes Dadimaa.
Geet shed tears:My daughter's name is Kavita?Where is she?I want to see her.
Kavita ran towards Naintara
and hugged her:Mumma...
Naintara hugged her back crying:My daughter...
Geet became emotional:My daughter?
Geet walked towards Kavita and kissed all over her face:My baby...
Dev and Naintara wept.
NT:What we feared has happened.
Dev became upset.
Dev:We know we did wrong.But think from our point of view too.What could have been done?We were scared of losing our baby.
Savitri:Dev and Naintara did a big mistake. But Geet...please forgive them.They did it for Kavita.
Maan:Yes Geet.Bhaiyya and bhabhi hurt you a lot by separating you from your baby.They became over possessive about Kavita.


NT:We wanted our own baby.That's why we did it.Please forgive us Geet.
Dev:It was my plan.So I have to be blamed.Please don't cure Naintara.
NT:No,it's my fault too.Don't take all the blame on yourself Dev.
Dev:You all can punish us.But please don't take away Kavita from us.
NT:We can't live without our Kavita.I can never be a mother again Geet.
Savitri,Maan and Geet felt sad for Dev and Naintara.
Geet:You people misunderstood me.I agreed to produce the baby for money for my mom's treatment.Because of Devji and Naintaraji my mom is alive now.I was and I will always be grateful for that.I just expressed my wish to see my baby as I fell in love with my baby.But trust me.I never wished to snatch the baby from you both.That's why I suppressed my pain of losing my baby after delivery and never tried to search you guys to get the baby from you both.Because I could understand your emotions.So the fear you have about losing Kavita because of me was stupid.

Dev and Naintara became emotional.
NT:Sorry Geet.We failed to see your great heart.
Maan:But Geet...it's true that you long for your child.
Geet looked at him painfully.



Savitri:That's obvious as she is a mother.There is a solution for that.
Everyone looked at her.
Sav:Geet and Maan should get married soon and Geet can stay here.Kavita is so lucky that she has 2 mothers.Naintara and Geet.Like Lord Krishna ,Kavita has Devki and Yashoda.
Geet,Dev,Naintara became very emotional.Maan smiled.
Geet and Naintara hugged Savitri,then they hugged each other.Geet and Naintara hugged Kavita together.
Maan smiled.Dev became very happy and emotional seeing it.He hugged Maan and Savitri in happiness.
Dev became sad:I am very sorry for fooling you both.Won't you both forgive me?
Maan:Bhaiyya...
Savitri:You did it out of complex.Now you got a second chance to correct your mistake.Utilize it.
Dev:Yes dadimaa.I promise...
Dev looked at Geet:Geet...you did a big favour for us by letting us keep Kavita with us.
Geet:No Devji.Kavita is your daughter.So I did'nt do any favour.
NT:That's your big heart Geet.But we can never forget what you did for us.
Dev:So in return I will give you a gift.I promise you that I will put my best to cure your father.
Geet became very happy and emotional.Everyone smiled.
Maan wiped Geet's tears:No more tears Geet.Your tears are going to be stopped forever.
They looked at each other emotionally.
Adi was stunned to see tears in Sasha's eyes.
Adi:Sasha,you are crying?I can't believe it.
Sasha:Who can't resist crying seeing all this?
She turned towards Geet wiping her tears..
Sasha:Geet...without knowing all this,I took your pregnancy wrong and became one among the others who gossiped about your character.I am really sorry Geet.Please forgive me.
Geet:Sasha Ma'am..please don't ...
Sasha:Tell me if you forgave me or not.

Geet smiled nodding her head.
Sasha:If you really forgave me stop calling me Sasha Ma'am.Call me Sasha as now we are friends.
Geet smiled:Sasha..
Sasha hugged Geet cheerfully.
Everyone smiled seeing their friendly hug.
Adi:Hey everyone...since all the problems are solved and there is only happiness here why don't we celebrate diwali now?

Everyone smiled.
Sav:You are right Adi.Let us start our celebration with sweets.

They all fed sweets to each others.
Then they all started dancing.

Adi went towards Sasha:Shall we dance together?
She put attitude and said:Ok..
They started dancing together.
Adi:To be frank the first time I am seeing you as a good girl.
Sasha:What?
Adi:So i feel a little liking towards you.
Sasha:Only a slight liking towards me?Means you don't love me?How dare you?
She gave a kick on his stomach.
Adi screamed softly:Ahhh...I mean..I love you.
Sasha smiled:Really?My cutie pie.
She pulled his cheeks cutely:I love you too cutie.
The overexcited Adi lifted her up in his arms and twirled around.
Everyone especially Maan and Geet were surprised to see Adi Sasha together.Adi and Sasha became shy when everyone looked at them.So Adi put her down softly.
Maan:Why did you drop her down seeing us?Adi..be a man and keep your lady in your arms.After all you are Maan Singh Khurana's closest person.
Adi smiled and carried Sasha in his arms.
Geet:Maanji..you advised Adi bhaiyya to carry Sasha in his arms.But you did'nt carry me in your arms.
Maan with a smile carried her in his arms.
M:Now alright?
She blushed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Loved it thoroughly
Sogeet is surrogate mother
Now all confusions come to an end
Adi and sasha!! Wow that's unexpected
Geet is so cute in demanding on last
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb part geet is so good by heart & loved the family bonding ..now waiting to see maaneet marriage so update soon

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