Maaneet ss : My Shona ~~Epilogue2 pg-126 on 14th March - Page 48

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awesome update..
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lovely moments in between maaneet 😃
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Beautiful update..
Lovly momnts between maaneet ..
THey almost kiss uf that stupid sasha not barged in the cabin.huh..
Maan realized his love n want to confess soon...
Oops ..ram heared his last sentence..letsee will maan told him about his love or npt..
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Thank you so much for likes and lovely comments...😃😃


Part 19

"dad " maan wispered seeing his in front of him" nothing dad was just thinking about a very important project...of my life... that I should do soon thats it nothing else"he stuttered at the end, his dad eyed him but then agreed to his reasons and smilled.

maan also smiled and asked" do you want something dad ?" he asked seeing hid dad coming and sitting in front of him.

Ram:"no nothing I just came here to saay I'm going home as geet is also not there in office" he said

maan:" oh where did geet..."but his sentence was left incomplete as adi knocked and maan allowed him inside.

adi:" sir the abc project site is ready will you visit it tomorrw ?" adi asked maan after greeting both.

Before maan could reply Ram piped in" I will visit the site waise bhi I'm bored. you are coming with me na adi?" he asked. Adi looked towards maan for permission and on getting a nod he happily agreed and both left.

maan was thinking where geet went and so he called the peon and asked "where is geet?"

peon:"sir geetji said something like 'dadima... call... angry... home' and ran away sir".

maan was worried hearing it, he asked "when did she leave?" peon said"sir almost two hrs..,sir wo ek baat kahoon?" he asked scaredly.Maan nodded to continue usse to geet ki koi bhi info chalegi.

Peon"Sir geetji bohot achchi hain..wo the day you came na previous night I saw that sasha madam broke the CD and tore some papers of file and took those pieces of papers with her.I sawthat file with Adi sir and geetji before then I called adi sir he was busy and I couldn't say him any thing.Then I called geetji and told her every thing. She only said not t say about sasha mam to any one but you are boss na so I said to you."

Maan thought this is too much sasha should be thought a lesson.He then dismissed the peon took his phone and called geet it was ringing and ringing but no one picked up he tried again it was same case , he got really worried now and tried caling on landline of KM Nakul picked up maan bombarded him with qustion as soon as he picked the phone, "Dadima kahaan hai??Geet wahaan hai kya??" he answered scaredly"Dadima , Priya memsaab aur Geet bibiji ke saath bahar garden mein bethi hain, unhone Geet bibiji ko ander bhi ane nahi diya" he said as if complaining(nakulji kaise ander aa sakti hai geet before marriage).Maan cut the call and called his dad a he was on his way to home ,he would safve geet from dadima''s wrath.He thought that dadima is angry on her as she scolded her and is not letting her in to the house and taking her class at the door step itself.

Maan: "Dad did you reach home?"

Ram:"No, not yet why? what happened ?you sound worried"

Maan:"Wo Dad ..Dadima called Shona home two hrs ago , she is not picking her phone too Nakul said she is out side our hme and Dadima is not letting her in.She was angry since evening you saw na..I was just worried what happened could you just see??" ( Bechara can't say directly that he is worried for his Shona)

Ram:"O.K I'll see to it" Ram cut the call and he became worried for geet because he knew how Dadima's anger is and he didn't knew why she was angry.(If only he knew).

Here in KM dadima, priya and geet were laughing on some thing funny(even I don't know what)when Ram entered, he saw wemen of the home appily chating and laughing, he saw dadima eating muffins in front of priya and she is saying nothing(He didn't see geet yet as she was sitting on a chair larger than her which could hide her easily).He was angry he poutingly went therer and asked priya"what is this tum ma ko kuch kyn nahi kehti look in front of you only she is eating sweets,SWEETS " he said streeing sweets,"this is so unfair sirf mujhe he dandti ho,huh!!" to which priya said "toh aap bhi khao I'll not stop you from eating this" Ram was first tunned to hear this then looking at muffin greedily he was about to take it when he felt his hand snapped by force then he saw his mother glaring him angrily he gave a nervous laugh to her dadima said"ye sirf hamare liye hai".

Ram then was looking longingly at those muffins and scowling at glaring dadima whern he felt a tap on his shoulder shrugged it first two times then he felt it little harder he turn around anoyedly he saw smiling geet handing him a basket and said "ye aap ke liye hai I know you are on dieting to yeh dieting muffin hai"(I really don't know wo hte hai ya nahi but suits this story).Ram gt a big smile on his face and greedily dug in to the basket.priya was laughing seeing his antics.

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super cute part tq for the pm
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😛 v v nice cute but short update...


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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...
geet ne toh har kisipe apna cooking ka jadu chala diya hai 😉
maan is worried for his shona ..😳
ram ko muffins ke agge aur kuch dekha hi nehi 🤣
continue soon. .
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gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Lovely update
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Awesum update...
Dadi aur ram k to maze aa gye yummy muffins khake bt udhar bechare pareshan hua ja rha h soch k dadi geet se gussa h aur dantegi 😆
Bt use kya pta ki uski mishty unsabki princess n they can get angry on her 😉

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