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😃 Hello my dear friends ..

love this new look of DD in ETRETR ..



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awesome part
geet n vivan is pampered n getting the whole attention of family
geet n maan are welcomed inside as family
geet in maans room
n feeding vivaan
maan is lost seeing both
but geets behaviour brought him to reality
they cant stay alone too
sleepin in one room is hard for them
nice part

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😆😆 tapki beech mei..

😃 Hi Valli dear ...
how r u ..?




Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Hello friends ..
Updating ...



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Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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The Myth

( Lots of thanks nd hug to cute-Aly for this beautiful banner )

The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 86

Part - 87


😃 Plzz play BG ,, while reading ..
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Sometimes problems don't require a solution to solve them; instead they require maturity to outgrow them.


Both Maan nd Geet wr sleeping peacefully ,, though she had spent time with Maan in her FH nd in hsptl too , but here everyone was treating them as husband nd wife ,, d memories of their marriage nd aftermath wr haunting her ,, bcoz of baby many times their bodies touched to each other nd she felt a restlessness in that closeness ,, d hatred which she had for him she buried for d sake of her baby ,, sometime Maan's care nd concern made her weak nd she tried to avoid these situ ,, Baby's playful squeak broke Maan nd Geet sleep ,, Vivaan wake up nd started playing , throwing his hands nd lages , holding duvet's corner nd started playing with that ,, Geet nd Maan wake up with a jerk ,, geet looked at baby nd Maan rushed to bed.

Maan worried: what happened , is he ok ?

Geet smiled : haann, shayad ,, playing of his own so shouting playfully.

Maan left a sigh : thank God ,,badmash bacche u scared us ( Maan tickled baby's tummy nd viv squeak more)

Maan nd Geet laughed ,, Maan tickeled more in his tummy nd neck , he sat near geet on d edge of bed nd started playing with baby who was in full mood of playing ,, few min passed like this ,, Maan nd Geet forgot everything nd got lost in baby ,, both wr enjoying those beautiful nd happy moments of their life ,, these wr d moments for which anyone cd do anything ,, Geet nd Maan's hearts filled with immence happiness seeing their baby this much happy nd playful ,, these happiness r very precious for both of them nd didn't have courage to lose them .

Geet lost : hope I cn stop d time , it's so sweet to see him like this .

Maan: yes , of course ,, nothing cn be beautiful in front of this happiness ,, how a small baby makes life beautiful nd happy? I cn lose my life to keep him happy like this .

Maan's words touched Geet's heart nd she looked at him awed ,, Maan was lost in baby's antics nd Geet in Maan , d serene smile on Maan's face melted her heart ,, d genuine flow of emotions from Maan forced her to trust him ,, she was witnessing Maan's care nd love for baby , he was doing everything with pure love nd dedication ,, this love nd care she want for her baby ,, this was his birthright ,, a complete family with full of love nd respect ,, she cdn't snatch this right from her baby nd cd compromise nd bear anything .

Maan realized that Geet was not saying anything nd staring at him ,, he gave her a questioning look .

Maan: Geet , kya hua ?

Geet startled : hhaannn ,, aammm,, nahi kuch nahi .

Maan realized that he was sitting close to her on bed nd partially towering her to play with baby ,, he startled nd got up .

Maan : Oh,, I m sorry , I was lost in playing with viv nd didn't realize ,, sorry.

Geet : it's OK Maan ,, baby's happiness r must not our differences ,, u did nothing wrong .

Maan eased nd gave a smile: thanks , u didn't mind ,, Geet I want to request u something .

Geet : what ?

Maan : Geet , we stayed in same room for a week when u wr in hsptl nd in caravan too, cn't we share for some more days , I promise u , I won't truble u .

Geet : I know , but how'll u manage here ? where'll u sleep , there is no extra bed nd ...

Maan: u don't worry , i'll manage on sofa , but as u know we have to compromise for some days as few relatives nd guests will stay in KM nd in front of them we have to show ... ,, I hope u r getting what I m trying to say ,, plzz for few days .

Geet hesitantly : I know , but..

Maan: u need a help for baby too ,, I cn help u ,, plzz .

Geet : aamm,, but how u'll manage ,, it doesn't look nice that u sleep on sofa ,, it's not d matter of 3-4 days , nd what if someone see u sleeping like this ?

Maan: i'll manage , u don't worry.

Geet : Maan I m feeling bad , in ur home u'll live like this .

Maan: Geet this home belongs to u too nd I m doing this for my happiness ,, it'l not only shut relatives mouths , but give me ample time to spend with my baby .

Geet looked at him with a weak smile ,, this time a father was pleading to get some time with his baby , which was her baby's right too then how cd she deny?

Geet : Ok , but I don't like it that u live in discomfort .

Maan beamed: living close to both of u is imp not discomfort ,, don't worry about me , i'll manage .

Geet: let's see how'll u manage ? 1st tell me where I kept my nd baby's stuff ?

Maan : thanks nd there r 2 cupboard here u cn use one ,, i'll vacate that , nd see there is a small chster where ucn keep baby's belongings .

Geet noded in yes nd got up to open her bags ,, Maan opened his cupboard ndfind his clothes there , then he opened other cupboard , he shifted his stuff in one cupboard .

Maan: Geet this is for u nd baby , happy ,, mom renovated d house so I m not getting what is where ,, have to check .

Geet passed a smile ,, she was satisfied getting d space for her stuff ,, d chester was enough for baby ,, she lifted baby nd made him sleep in baby cot ,, that corner of room was arranged as small nursery with beautiful baby stuff .

Maan looked around nd find a door ,, he opened that nd that was a surprise for him ,, it was his study ,, all his books nd study matirials shifted there ,, it was very spacious nd furnished,, his nd Geet's all prob solved ,, he smiled nd called Geet .

Maan: Geet , come here nd see, it's awesome .

Geet entered there nd she too was awed seeing that beautiful study,, there was a comfy single bed where Maan cn sleep comfortably ,, she felt relieved .

Geet; it's fantastic , Maan now u cn sleep here comfortably ,, all prob solve , I like it .

Maan : yes , it's really helpful for us , now come nd unpack d stuff ,, Viv is sleeping nd we cn do it easily .

Geet : hummm,, come .

They unpacked their bags nd then went to freshenup ,, Geet was in washroom when baby woke up in ,, Maan sat near him nd started playing with him ,, this was what he desired .

Geet came out nd find them busy in their world ,, Maan was talking to baby in babytone ,, a smile crept on her lips this was what she desired for her baby .

When Geet was lost in father-baby's lovely moments , Maan felt her presence nd looked at her ,, his heart had a somersault seeing that serene beauty ,, he felt an urge in his body ,, he lost in her fresh wet look , both came in real world listening baby's squeak ,, their eyes met for a sec then garnered themselves .

Maan went to WR , get ready nd both came out from their room nd joined d family in living hall ,, all wr waiting for them nd when they saw d bundle of joy gave bright smiles ,, dev rushed to get baby from Maan .

Dev: bro u get lots of time to spend with baby , so stay away , it's my turn to play with him .. hai na my sweet kiddu ?( he took baby nd started playing with him )

Yash : O sahabjade ,, hum bhi usi ka wait kar rahe hein ,, tum akele nahi ho ,, idhar lao mere mere chotu ko .

Reema: aur main , tum dono hi nahi ho line mei mai bhi hu ,, idhar la dev, I was dying to have my baccha in my arms .

Geet nd Maan wr smiling seeing d eagerness for baby ,, all wr showering their love on baby ,, he became d soul of family ,, Geet felt a peace nd satisfaction in her heart that her baby got his right nd family love ,, where as Maan thanked God seeing his happy family , that lil baby filled KM nd everyone's heart with happiness .


Precap - Marriage prep start ,, sweet nd sour feelings of Maaneet ...

Part - 88


sorry for mistakes ...





Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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139 is in # 13..n not pw protected..link Part139 Page 119
singh24 thumbnail
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

139 is in # 13..n not pw protected..link Part139 Page 119


😃 thanks , but i already read it ..
i thought u give it on new trd...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update . geet was happy after seeing that her baby getting family love specially his father's love . for her baby's happiness she was ready to compromise . another side maan is happy too cos he get the chance to spend his time with baby & geet . maaneet sharing the room . cos of their lil baby , maaneet relation is changing slowly .
precap is interesting
waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice part
geet awed seeing dm ,reema, nd yash welcoming her nd her son in km
geet's luggage r kept in maan's new room ..but
geet does nt want to share d room wid maan

waiting fr nxt
Edited by Rashmi234 - 9 years ago
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😃😃 Updated...Pg..10

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