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my dear friends 🤗

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The Myth

( Lots of thanks nd hug to cute-Aly for this beautiful banner )

The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 89

Part - 90


😃 Plzz play BG ,, while reading ..
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This was d day of Mahndi , nd many guests from both side wr gathering in Khuranas's FH , which was d venue marriage ,, all have to go there at eve ,, in mrng Reema called 2 beauty saloon girls for Geet's grooming ,, Geet denied bcoz of baby, but DM nd Reema insisted her nd assured that they wd take care of baby ,, helpless Geet stuck with beauticians for many hrs ,, DM nd Reema looking after Vivaan ,, they gave him bottled milk nd baby was playing nd sleeping ,, where as Geet felt heaviness in her b**** nd sent a girl to bring her son , but she came empty hands nd informed that d baby was sleeping ,, then Geet stuck again having beauty packs .

Maan was happy that Geet was taking care of her nd enjoying d marriage like other ladies ,, he was busy but , had an eye on his baby nd geet .

At eve all started getting ready ,, Maan dressed up viv nd informed Geet .

Maan : hello Geet I dressed up Viv nd u just pack his baby bag to carry with us .

Geet: Maan , wait I m coming , I have to feed baby .

Maan: Geet he just had his milk , how cn he take more ?

Geet: Oh no , I've to feed him .

Maan: Geet get ready 1st , then next when he need then call me ,, we have to leave for FH , so do it fast baby .

Geet: haan aati hu ,, kahan phasa diya DM aur mom ne ,, I m fed up .

Maan: Geet , it's marriage nd ladies love to dress up well ,, enjoy baby .

Geet annoyed : kya enjoy ,, I didn't see my baby from many hrs , I m stuck in all these .

Maan smiled: just few min ,, get it fast nd come , we r waiting for u beautiful lady.

Geet: enough Maan ,, aati h und I m saying clearly TM I won't do anything like this .

Maan: OK baba nahi karna , ab shant aur jaldi se ready hoker aao.

Both cut d call ,, Geet was in sep room which Reema kept for getting ready for all d ladies , d beauticians wr helping them ,, after half an hr geet come out all dress up in an off white lahanga ,, she rushed to her room which was empty ,, baby's nd maan's clothes wr scattered on bed ,, she kept them aside nd packed baby's bag to carry with her ,, called Maan to bring Vivaan.

When Maan entered in their bedroom nd saw Geet, he skipped many breaths ,, she was looking like a princess ,, he admired her nd took her pics in his phone .

Geet saw him nd gave him a smile ,, then she saw that he was alone nd Viv was not with him .

Geet: Maan where is Viv ?

Maan composed himself : aammm,, Viv ,, haan wo , wo dad ke paas hei , r u ready , we have to leave now .

Geet pouted : I m ready , but I want my baby for some time , plzz .

Maan came close to her: easy Geet ,we r going FH , now u cn have him ,, come .

Sadly Geet pick her nd baby's bag nd ,, both came out to go nd met with all in drive way ,, all wr settling in cars nd moving out ,, Maan nd Geet joined Reema nd Yash ,, both admired Geet nd praised her beauty ,, DM went with Dev nd her sis family ,, in car Geet held d baby , but she cdn't fed him there ,, she cuddled him close to her heart nd soon in travel baby slept in Geet's arms ,, they reached in FH ,, guests started coming nd DM nd Dev wr at d gate welcoming guests ,, DM nd Dev too admired Geet ,, Maan felt proud nd delighted standing next to Geet.

They entered in d FH nd few known families started meeting with them ,, time was passing nd it was going hard for Geet to bear ,, she was feeling hardness in her br***** ,, some time milk drip out of their own nd wetted her dress , but today that didn't happen ,, she felt slight pain nd hardness,, she knew that it was coz of not feeding baby from many hrs that is why she was desperate to feed him .

Guests wr coming nd meeting with them too bcoz they saw Geet nd Maan after their marriage , nd now with d Jr Maan ,, all wr loving Vivaan who was sleeping in Geet's arms ,, Maan was standing next to Geet nd talking to guests with a smile giving Geet admiring looks,, Geet too was replying guests with a fake smile .

When it went unbearable for her she gave a painful look to Maan nd whispered.

Geet: Maan cn I get a lonely place?

Maan: what happened Geet ?

Geet: I m not feeling well , plzz take me away from here .

Maan misstook that she was remembering their past nd feeling low ,, his face fall .

Maan: Geet , I cn understand ur pain , but plzz for all's happiness stay here with us.

Geet groaned in pain: M a a n , I cn't , I have to feed baby ,, take me somewhere .

Maan startled : Oh, sorry ,, Ok , come with me .

He took their bags , encircled his arm around geet's shoulders nd escorted her inside d FH ,, he checked few rooms but they wr locked ,, he called his mom nd asked about d key of his room ,, after few min a servant came there nd opened d room ,, Geet was suppressing her pain which was now increasing .

Maan scold him : ye rooms lock ku kiye hein ?

Srvnt: saabji ma'am ne bas guests rooms hi kholne ko kaha tha .

Maan: OK, go , ye proper clean to hai na?

Srvnt: ji saab ,, kuch chiye to boldena , mai yahin hu loby mei.

Maan : theek hei ab tum jao ,, Geet come .

They entered nd Geet rushed towards bed ,, slept baby on bed nd left a cry holding her chest .. ahhh ,, she slumped on bad .

Maan worried: G e e t , kya hua?

Geet cried again nd bent down holding her chest ... it's paining ,, ahh ,, M a a n baby ko jagao ,, pllzz .

Maan worried : Geet , why this pain ?

Geet: wo ,, I didn't feed him from many hrs ..aahh,, plzz baby ko uthao .

Maan : haan ,, haann ,, uthata hu .

Maan slowly patted baby's cheek nd called his name to wake him , but he didn't ,, he looked at Geet who was crying in pain , his heart ached seeing her crying in pain , then again he patted baby ,, he woke up , but feared with sudden patting nd started making face to cry ,, Maan lifted nd pampered him ,, brought him near Geet .

Maan: Geet ,, he is going to cry ,, hold him .

Geet's face nd eyes wr showing d effect of pain , but she held d baby with a cry nd turned to fed him ,, maan too turned his face nd moved towards sofa , but Geet's yelp made him to look at her ,, she tried but was not able to feed ,, her pain was increasing nd she felt that her veins wr going to burst ,, her b**** turned very hard , even baby was not able to suck d milk .

Geet didn't know what was happening ,, she started yelping in pain holding her chest ,, Maan panicked seeing her condition ,, he rushed to geet nd held her from shoulders ,, who cried out in pain in his arms .

Maan worried: G e e t , b a b y , what happen to u ? Why this pain ,, where r feeling this much pain ?

Geet: M a a n , M a a n ,, plzz kuch karo ,, ahh,, DM,, Dr , plzz .

Maan bewildered seeing her like this ,, she was yelping in pain ,, baby too started crying ,, he at once sat near Geet nd took baby in his arms ,, called DM with trembling hands ,, Maan's worried eyes wr at Geet , her every cry was piercing his heart ,, he was consoling crying baby nd replied DM .

DM: hello Maan, beta where r u nd Geet ?

Maan : DM plzz come fast in my room with Mom ,, ,Ge , G e e t is in pain , plzz DM jaldi aao .

DM worried: pain , kya hua usse achanak ? hum aa rahe hein .

DM looked around for Reema but didn't find her near by ,, she called her while rushing in , but Reema didn't reply ,, DM called Yash who picked d call at once .

Yash: haan maa , bolo .

DM: Yash where is Reema ,, Geet have some pain nd Maan is worried ,, he is calling Reema.

Yash worried: Geet has pain , where , how ? where is she ?

DM reached in Maan's room nd got a shock seeing d condition of Geet , baby nd Maan ,, Geet was yelping in pain nd seeing her she cried out loud which pireced her nd Maan's heart .

Geet : ahh D M , plzz save me , I cn't bear this pain .

DM panicked: G e e t mera baccha , kya hua tumhe ? Maan Dr ko phone karo .

Yash worried : Maa , kya hua Geet ko , batao mujhe .

DM didn't reply so he cut d call nd rushed inside excusing him from a guest ,, in mid he saw a servant nd ordered him to sent Reema in side ,, his heart sank listening Geet's cry near door ,, he went in worried .

Yash: Maan , kya hua ? Geet, kya hua beta , Maan gadi nikalo aur Dr ke paas chalo .

Till then DM got that Geet had br**** pain bcoz of blocking milk,, it sets in veins nd now paining ,, this was an unbearable pain ,, maan was searching d family Dr's number in his phone , but experienced DM came on toe at once ,, she knew what to do in that condition .

DM: Maan go nd bring some hot water in a big vassal ,, jaldi .

Maan: hot water .

DM : hann ,, Yash tum baby ko bahar le jao kuch der ke liye aur Reema ko bhejo.

Yash : Maa , she need a Dr too .

DM : haan , I m calling her.

Yash took Vivaan nd went out calling Reema nd Maan run to take hot water ,, he was losing his strength seeing Geet in this pain ,, her every cry was hurting him deep ,, he called d srvnt nd went in kitchen ,, looked around nd got elec kettle ,, pour water in that nd started warming water ,, srvnt too came there nd Maan asked him a big vassal ,, he pour hot water in that nd rushed to room .


Precap --- Maan caring Geet nd baby .. some Maaneet moments ... 😛

Part - 91


sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

OMG!!! tum aa gai Dona..😃

i was waiting for pm reply so checking that ..😆
tum theek ho na..?

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Originally posted by: singh24


OMG!!! tum aa gai Dona..😃

i was waiting for pm reply so checking that ..😆
tum theek ho na..?

hey bhabwan di main to kab se idhar hi hu😆 arre mera IF problem kar raha hai di wahi jo pehle batay tha na recent posts wali problem...so recent pm bhi nahi dikh rahi
m fine di..aap kaise ho??kal post kiya tha k main nahi aarahi nahi dekha??
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Originally posted by: CrazyEyes

hey bhabwan di main to kab se idhar hi hu😆 arre mera IF problem kar raha hai di wahi jo pehle batay tha na recent posts wali problem...so recent pm bhi nahi dikh rahi
m fine di..aap kaise ho??kal post kiya tha k main nahi aarahi nahi dekha??


mera net to total dead hei 2 din se ..essiliye to 2 din pahale update nahi de pai ..
kal phone card mei net dalwaya aur hot-spot se connect kiya hei ..
nahi dekha yaar ,,sorry ..
ye tata wale mera sara dta kha gaye ,, mai kuch use bhi nahi ki aur band, ki full use ho gaya.😡
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Originally posted by: singh24


mera net to total dead hei 2 din se ..essiliye to 2 din pahale update nahi de pai ..
kal phone card mei net dalwaya aur hot-spot se connect kiya hei ..
nahi dekha yaar ,,sorry ..
ye tata wale mera sara dta kha gaye ,, mai kuch use bhi nahi ki aur band, ki full use ho gaya.😡

no problem di maine bhi aapke net ke problem wala post next day dekha tha aur waise bhi maine post iss id se nahi ki thi so koi na...
kuch use kiye bina full use ye kya musibat hai aaj bhi mobile card se online aaye??
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Originally posted by: CrazyEyes

no problem di maine bhi aapke net ke problem wala post next day dekha tha aur waise bhi maine post iss id se nahi ki thi so koi na...
kuch use kiye bina full use ye kya musibat hai aaj bhi mobile card se online aaye??


haan,, nahi to kya karu..?
hubby ka mail bhi aata hei daily aur hume bhi reply dena hota hei,,
net is must for us..,
ye sab tel co wale ek jaise hein,, kuch mnth ke baad kaminapan dikhane lagty hein..😡
pahale mera plan change kiye , fir speed slow ker di aur ab dta hi gayab ker kiya time se pahale..😡 sat ko band bajati hu inke office jaker..
cable wale ki to abhi wiring hi chal rahi hei,, dekhti hu ess sat tak kuch new plan..🥱

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awweee
Gol gappe made maaneet closer :)
Geet hugged maan!!! :O
Thud!!! Maan r u alive?? 0_0
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Originally posted by: singh24


haan,, nahi to kya karu..?
hubby ka mail bhi aata hei daily aur hume bhi reply dena hota hei,,
net is must for us..,
ye sab tel co wale ek jaise hein,, kuch mnth ke baad kaminapan dikhane lagty hein..😡
pahale mera plan change kiye , fir speed slow ker di aur ab dta hi gayab ker kiya time se pahale..😡 sat ko band bajati hu inke office jaker..
cable wale ki to abhi wiring hi chal rahi hei,, dekhti hu ess sat tak kuch new plan..🥱

ohhoo tab to aapke liye net must hai...ha band bajao ache se ye log khud hi plans change karte hai users ko bhugatna padta hai...
ye aaapka cable wala bada hi lazy hai lagta hai kab se wiring hi chal rahi hai
singh24 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyEyes

ohhoo tab to aapke liye net must hai...ha band bajao ache se ye log khud hi plans change karte hai users ko bhugatna padta hai...
ye aaapka cable wala bada hi lazy hai lagta hai kab se wiring hi chal rahi hai


😊 nahi kar raha hei bechara.. society badi hei to time lagega hi..kuch buildings mei boxes lag gaye sabhi floors per..
dekho ye bhi kya karta hei.. baten to badi0badi ker raha tha jab pucha tha..😆

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