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Posted: 8 years ago
finally u updated! thanks 4 completing this story! terrific update! well written! Geet knows who killed Maan's Geet! Maan makes a deal with her! she agrees 2 leave him! plan in motion! it was Maan's dad! Maan stunned n shattered! Geet tells Pari nt 2 cry n get angry with Maan! she keeps her promise n leaves! Maan upset! he looks 4 her n gets 2 knw her whereabouts! Maan elated! he goes 2 get her! his dad is with Geet! he has cancer! he breathes his last breath after speaking 2 Maan! Geet shocked seeing him! she tells him she will keep her promise n says she gt her reason 2 live! she implores him nt take her child! Maan surprised! Maan confesses! Maan reunite! Geet has a baby boy! Maan sees the taweez n Geet's mom explains! so his Geet left this 4 him! Maan realises wt she meant! lovely end! pls update debarred temptations! thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi...


loved the update...
Maan told geet every thing about him and Geet..
and he was blaming himself for geet's death..
and Geet consoled him and comforted him..they moved ahead in their relation as Maan was not in his sense and Geet wanted to make him calm.. But Maan avoided her next day and geet told him her doubt that there was someone very close to the family who killed geet..
and then she played a game ..but Maan only took a promise from her that she would leave after that..
and geet agreed though her heart was crying...
Everyone at home was shocked to see Geet_the old geet ..and she told them that she was Geet and now she remembered everyhting...

you wrote beautifully mahi as everyone was under the suspect for once I doubted even purvi and salil too...but the actual culprit was Rudra..Maan's father ..and he confessed too .. he confessed to geet that he did not want to kill her ..he just wanted to scare her..
maan wa sangry onnis father and chut himself in the room...
But when he came out geet had gone.. and then he searched for her ..and he knew about her..
He reached Shimla to take her and there he found his ding father...and he came to know that she was carrying his baby ..he confessed his love and brought her back..

Everyhting was npw happy in their life maan found Diseased Geet's tawiz in pari's neck.. and he remembered geet's last wprds that eh would get her nishani to trace her..
he knew that His Geet saved his this Geet by that tawiz...
and it was the happy end of this story but not of their love


lovely story it was Mahi..

Thanks alot for your lovely feedback throughout the whole SS.
Thanks for reading.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely ending..that was unexpected rudra killed geet there maan was blaming himself but past came open and truth out ..happy that maan realised his feelings and went for her loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome ending
finally truth is out..
its shocking and he got punishment too
and maan happy with geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful story dear liked reading it...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 19 ..so geet got to know fom maan about him & his wife geet. But I could not get how she got to know about who killed geet.? How she suspected that rudra killed geet.? So she came up with the plan to get the real killer come front and accept the crime.

So she was acting like real geet. And as expected rudra came forward accepting his crime. Why he hated geet so much.? Didn't he see how selfless she was.? Why he suspected that she was not right for maan.? Only to save maan's property he kidnapped geet. But geet got to know everything and called maan and tried to escape from there. But in haste rudra killed her.

But the promise maan took from geet to leave after knowing the culprit was heart wrenching. She really left him. But god gave her precious gift of their child. She was really a selfless woman who took care of rudra who suffing from cancer.

He finally found her in shimla and brought her back. Liked cute pari getting pissed on geet for taking such promise from her and leaving her.

The scene with geet's mom & geet and then geet & pari was funny. Girl changes when she becomes mother, starts caring of their children. Loved the same dialogues repeating with both of them.

So finally maan was contended seeing his wife's tawiz coming back to present geet and then pari. B'coss of that tawiz geet was saved and came back to man's life.

Lovely story Mahi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow wat to say omg speechless emotional shocking painful fantastic update yar..te way my maaneet in simle and my maan ki pain remembering every memories with his geet and his heart was crying even though geet and pari asked him to go but he stay for his daughter's happiness..te way my maaneet and pari living as complete family and enjoying themselves,my maan once living normally with them was lovely amazing..te way my maan ki pain wen he see te place where he propose and sharing his pain to his geet who consoling him was lovely emotional..te way geet wants to find te culprit and te way geet accepting my maan ki condition which breaking her was lovely painful..everyone's shock seeing geet as old geet who portraying herself as my maan's wife and trying to find te culprit and te way her each day was like sleeping in throne bed was lovely heart winching..omg rudra was behind everything he is one who killed old geet omg my maan ki shock and anger thinking his dad is te reason behind his pain was lovely shocking painful..te way geet left my maan as per her promise and te way my maan was searching her like mad man missing his life was lovely emotional..te way my maan found his geet and shock to see rudra who asking his sory in his death bed..te way my maan confessing his love and hugging his geet like he got his life back and took her into his world was lovely blissed..te way my maaneet ki complete family with pari and raj was lovely..yes geet can crib for her mom's words but wen it cums to her pari she became mother he he he tats motherhood..te way my maaneet ki love made them one and his geet too gave him his angel in form of another geet..i love te update so much yar

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Posted: 8 years ago
maan told the past
how geet was kidnapped n how she died in his arms
geet asked him a chance to prove the culprit
she is ready to leave him n go to prove
maan is broken totally seeing rudr
geet left maan
maan searched her n got to know she is in shimla
he saw rudr at her house
rudr asked forgiveness to maan n asked not to say anything to geet
geet shocked seeing maan
n maan shocked seeing her preggy
finally maan told he loves her
nice part

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Posted: 8 years ago
so it was Rudra behind it..he did not think even once for his son's happiness and took away one innocent life..finally the guilt and regret consumed him till his end,
Now I get it when he was insisting Geet to be there for Maan, and get married to him..but then that does not relieve him from the crime he did..

Maan's emotional and vulnerable side again came out with the memory of Geet, but it was this Geet who could control and calm him down like every time. she is such selfless character to leave his life to keep him at peace and out of his guilt..they say the distance make one realize their love and so it happened to Maan, it made him yearn for her..
Well, all well in the end.

loved the part and their exchange of words for each other with that - bas, itni hi mohobbat hai..and of course Pari with her innocent acts.

Thank you Mahi for such a wonderful story..
hope you get time to continue with your other stories :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just started reading this one it's an amazing story

I love your all stories quite unique they are 😳

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