Just a mirage? Maaneet Poem

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

OMG!! it's urs poem? I voted for it...

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Jasmine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

thx 4 voting

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
OMG!! it's urs poem? I voted for it...

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

It was a beautiful poem of falling in love only by seeing someone in the painting...Maan was mesmerized when she saw the beautiful woman in the painting...his every single nerve of his body wished that the women was real and not some imagination...His desire to feel her was so intense that he forgot the thin line between his figments of imagination and reality...he dreamt about the lady and kept on imagining how it felt if he could touch her in reality...

P.S. when I saw geet's painting and Maan craziness about her , I remember the song dream girl starring hema malini and dharmendra...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

hi thanks 4 da pm beautiful poem! lovely painting. Maan was enamored by the painting! Maan js wanted her!

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Thanks for PM.😊

It was Awesome Poem.😊

The Whole Poem was so Nicely explained.😊

Please write like this.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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pinky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

lovely poem ..keep it up👏👏

ty for pm

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SRK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

it is a beautiful poem..👏

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

lovely poem

thanks for pmn plz keep em comin

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ramahesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

beautiful poem dear
loved it
write more dear

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Zuriah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Hey Jazzz..

This is the first ever poem of urs which I read and let me tell the only word left my mouth was FANAATIC👏

How easily u wrote maans emotions in few words melodioisly...emotions can be expressed the best in poems coz these few lines lets in the soo called mystery..

Maan fell for her painting...he was soo engrossed there that he felt she is calling him..looking him with immense..

He couldn't control his emotions n eagermess to know the feel of her soft skin thus touching her painting ..caressing it soo tenderly like he is carresing her own face..

And then she is there infront for him to feel n love..just like a dream come true..he was in heaven really coz she touched him but...she aint there then..his imagination😉

The first look on the beautifull painting of geet made maan fall for her hard..hope he gets united with her soon for ETERNITY..

BEAUTIFUL WORDS..I WAS JUST FLOWING WITH IT..👏⭐️

A hug to u for ur lovely words and an amazingly painted picture of geet🤗

Loved every bits of it

Loads of love

Zuriah