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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
Kaash mein pv par first update ke time se hothi... tum logo ne mere bina kitni masti ki hai... especially valli... i havent talked to her much in gf... time cannot be rolled back... so its ok... uske kai guna masti hum ab jo karthe hai...our life in gf starts and ends with maaneet... but u dared or should i say successfully dared to bring yash arpita here... how u made me love yash i still wonder...u have made me fall in love with punarvivah se pehle waale updates bhi...this story is definitely going to be one of my favorite... pdf banaake dena mujhe...vivaah... punar vivaah... falling and accepting love ... bache... reincarnation... i have enjoyed all the stages of PV... Yash who was in love with geet couldnt convey his feelings to her before his death... nor he was lucky to get geets love too... wishes adhoori rehthi hai tho shaanthi bhi nahi mili hogi... and he came in the form of geets son... but i should say this track was a bit scary... i was thinking what u have planned... what will happen... sunne mein thoda ajeeb haina.. punarjanam and all... aur yahaa tho its yash who is maans bro too... but u handled it so well... readers ko jhatka bhi diya... aur baatein normal bhi hui without much tension...i loved the part where yash called geet mom... it was really touchy... as a mother it was geet who was suffering the most ... yash was not calling her mom and his reincarnation just added her difficulties... but both maan and geet handled the situation very nicely... yash calling mom is indication that he accepted geet as his mom and his flashbacks of past will diminish slowly...maaneet here is such a perfect couple... like any real couple they did face many problems and hardships ... but they faced it together and stood as a strength of the other when the other one weakened at any point.. this is what a couple should be.. and u shown us the real meaning of couple so beautifully...last part tha but u didnt disappointed me ... u gave that beautiful maaneet moment...haayee kitne sweet and cute hai wo saath mein... maan asking for a kiss and geet blushing like a new bride and their khatta meeta takraar... i loved it...though am sad that pv is ending... but am happy to be a part of such an awesome story... and am sure u will come up soon with a new concept of maaneet... but usse pehle will be waiting for epilogues...
Lakhuuu🤗
Koi na der aaye durust aaye,,
tum aayi to sahi.. der se hi sahi
that was a time jab sab yahaan masti kiya karte the
Thanks u so much that you liked my daring for bringing Yash and Arpita in Maaneet story😆
actually when I started the story I thought that it would end in 10 to 20 parts..
par wo kahte hain na- musafir aate gaye aur kaarwaan banta gaya.. reades started to put their thoughts about the updates and was getting more and more ideas from their comments..and see the result-It completed the centuary😆😆
This story is actually very close to my heart..The comments of readers kept me on my toes..they related themselves to Geet..and story kept on gong on and on and on..I m really satisfied that i could give such story to this forum.. saw so many phases of Maaneet life-From marrying to some other partner to losing their partners..Then falling in love from one side Then their punarvivah,,then other partner falling in love and their hiding of the emotions from each other..t
They have crossed so many stages but both stood together..when they were fruends and even when they were married..and this s the success of their love
abhi thoda aur bh baki hai ..wait karo
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