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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awesme ending
finally maan got his geet...lovd it alot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific TS! Loved it! superb update! Wonderfully written! Awesome end! Geet goes 2 see him! she is shocked! she questions him! he says its abt business! Geet goes n KM! she meets Sanmaan! he knows tht Maan is single! she confesses! Maan refuses 2 let her go! he explains! Sanmaan is adopted! She teases him! Maan upset! Geet explains! can u pls post epilogue! Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific TS! Loved it! superb update! Wonderfully written! Awesome end! Geet goes 2 see him! she is shocked! she questions him! he says its abt business! Geet goes n KM! she meets Sanmaan! he knows tht Maan is single! she confesses! Maan refuses 2 let her go! he explains! Sanmaan is adopted! She teases him! Maan upset! Geet explains! can u pls post epilogue! Thanks

well maybe... but i am busy currently writing another story... in meanwhile i might post epilogue... but cant promise... 😳 thnks fr d comment 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CookieMonster.

wow awesme ending
finally maan got his geet...lovd it alot

thnks fr d comment dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovepoo

Wohooo loved this story so much
Light hearted cute story

thnk you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Final Part
Exceptionally Awesome
Maan actually adopted Sanmaan and he had always thought him that his mom is Geet
Maan telling Geet that he loved her from a long time and now they will finally be together
I liked how Geet just rattled out that she likes Maan and when she realizes what she said
she wanted to leave that was different felt good
Maan explaining Geet his plan to get her and now she feels its also her time to play him
and she tells him her marriage is fixed and Maan possessively shows her and tells her
that she is only his
I really enjoyed this 3 shot Awesome Indeed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Wow ridzi...it was awesome 3shot...
Soo hot😳
Kerp writing sweet heart .every shot had its own essences of surprises within it...
Ab aur likho aur likes samaito...
AAJ KAL TERE MERE SAATH KE CHADCHR HAR ZABAAN PAR..
IF KO MAALUM HAIN AUR KISKO KHABAR HOOGAYI..
KEEP WRITING SHONO JI👏
Hugs n kisses to u..n cake to me .coz I m a bhukkar of sweets. .lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nelokulood

Wow ridzi...it was awesome 3shot...

Soo hot😳
Kerp writing sweet heart .every shot had its own essences of surprises within it...
Ab aur likho aur likes samaito...
AAJ KAL TERE MERE SAATH KE CHADCHR HAR ZABAAN PAR..
IF KO MAALUM HAIN AUR KISKO KHABAR HOOGAYI..
KEEP WRITING SHONO JI👏
Hugs n kisses to u..n cake to me .coz I m a bhukkar of sweets. .lol

galat comment 🤢
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Final Part

Exceptionally Awesome
Maan actually adopted Sanmaan and he had always thought him that his mom is Geet
Maan telling Geet that he loved her from a long time and now they will finally be together
I liked how Geet just rattled out that she likes Maan and when she realizes what she said
she wanted to leave that was different felt good
Maan explaining Geet his plan to get her and now she feels its also her time to play him
and she tells him her marriage is fixed and Maan possessively shows her and tells her
that she is only his
I really enjoyed this 3 shot Awesome Indeed

thnks fr the comment dear... i thought to write a short scene showing possessive Maan... as its extremely hott... when men get possessive 😆 well again thnks fr d comment dear

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