Beauty and a Dusht Danav (4) MG, Ch 22, pg 127, new thread link pg 1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments and likes.

Do come back to read the concluding part next.

Before you ask for epilogue let me remind you that epi's are for FFs not for SS's.

Hope you enjoy it.

I sure enjoy your comments😃

Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago

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namita25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Part 17

Arghhh that Daman and Nandini are good for nothing...

Geet still needs time to come out of her traumatic past...

loved Maaneet scene...

Maan is in full majnu mode...

he won't let Geet go offf easily...

waiting for the next part...

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tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

hi avi

waiting for you ..

this suddenly been inactive status is just making me sad ..

why r u inactive ..

plz make ur stories available for others to read ..plz

i want to read teri umeed ..i had read up to 30 parts and commented for them ..ab how i will read rest

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maansi25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Sorry for the late comment
Part 17
Past of Geet is revealed to some extent
How she happened to be in Delhi not clear
Coming to the dearest two
Geet trying to avoid Maan
But Maan taakhir
MaanSing Khurana hai
Jo khaate nimbooda se mishti ban gaya hai
Aur jiddi bhi
Use mana kar hi manega
Aur hamari jhalli
Chahti hai
Par accept nahi kar pa rahi
Should she trust him?
Han baba han
Kab tak sochegi
Maan ja...

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harshu...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Lovely update.
Geet told maan about her past.
Ufffooo it ws so so so sad.
Koi itna bura bhi kaise ho Sakta hai.
Loved Maan for promising her to be with her always.
Haiye! ! The best thing is maaneet r happy together now.

I am so happy for dev nd meera also.
Soory for late comments.
Thnx for pm.

Edited by mskfan - 9 years ago

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Alamelu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

beautiful, amazing...so glad maan confessed and so does geet in her own way...also she told maan about her past...that itself is great...now she can make sure to punish those people and live with maan and dadi..

loved this nt...waht a way to give dev's mom and aunt a shock and take care of things...

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LM1991

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Avi,

Lovely update! Finally Geet's true story is known. I hope Maan gives Daman & Geet's family a befitting punishment. Plz Avi, Daman & Brij "ke chakke churado"! 😡

Why ending the story so soon? Abhi to romance shuru hone ka time hai. Plz don't end it so soon. 😒

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maansi25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Supet update
Geet has told about her past
Maan has assured her that he loves her
And will be with her in every walk of life
He is ashamed of himself
Geet has accepted his love
And
The ending lines
Ab jindagi ki har subah tumse shuru
Aur har shaam tumpe khatm

Aur baaki ke to haal behaal hone hi hai

Here
Happy for Dev Meera
Very nice of Tara
Loved the update

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Lovely update just loved tara her plan worked well lol now maya will give focus in her figure atlast she will stop come between dev n meera maaneet part was lovely maan confess n finally geet also ready to accept maans love i really maaneet give painfull punishment to daman n her so called family nice part thnx 4 pm

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suni_104

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Posted: 10 years ago

#170

Wonderful update
Meera jealous seeing tara dev
Finally meera dev going to marry
Geet told her story to maan
Maan so angry
Their going to start new life
Happy to read last bit