DARK TEMPTATION 2 #2 Updated LAST PART+EPILOGUE on Pg 135/ 8-12-2015 - Page 79

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Posted: 9 years ago
awsm updt...atharv is curiepie...maan brought gifts fr all by my Geet...Getcundrstood his feelings and gt to knw how much she hurts him in past...maan by reserved with Geet and Geet also not shwng any initiate nice...updtvsoon and thanx fr pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
maan is back from his business trip
he bought gifts for aatharav but not for geet... geet asked maan to Love her... maan met his friends... waiting for d next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 37
Simply Fabulous
Athrav missed his dad and he is also very possessive about his father
Maan bringing gifts for all except Geet as he still believes that he does not
want to force anything on her but now he should also think that years has gone by
and she is not doing any of the stuff she did in the past surely he is polite with
her but he does not involve her in his life .
Meera true she is his cousin sister but why can she not have a talk with Maan
or does she not care that her brother has no love in his life with his wife
Samrath seeing that everyone has gifts except Geet and Maan was not even sorry for
his act .
Maan and Geet goes and drops their son to school and Geet ask Maan to love her
he does not reply but accepts by his actions its almost as if he can do anything
so there is no problems yet he is cold towards her
Maan friends are back and came to see him
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Posted: 9 years ago
DARK TEMPTATION 2
PART - 38


"Uncle you are right. There is some thing going wrong between both, but we don't know what exactly troubling.", Adi glance at his stern face and told him about their conversation with Maan.


"Hmm." He leaned his head back on his chair. "Listen both of you, just behave normal with him and let me think." He scans both and asked them to leave. Both Adi and Vikram left his office.


Samarth got more tensed after knowing about the rift of his children. Glancing at the ceiling he waved his chair in a pace. He brought Maan back but this Maan was not his old naughty kid. "How can I failed to notice his tears behind those fake smiles. He pretending to make me and Atharav happy. Jabki sach to ye hai ki he was not ready to come here. His wounds are so deep and green. How can I forget once he get hurt by one, he will not able to accept that person again. His heart still scared of getting hurt again by her. He not trust her, like he don't trust me when I married to his mom. Damn it. How fool I am who think all is going well even after knowing my kid." Samarth was angry on himself more. He hit the table in frustration. "Now how can I correct this?" Now his main attention was to mend the issues between them but how he don't know.


Next morning Samarth called both Maan and Geet together before he leave for his office.

"Dad you called us?" Maan enquired.

"Hmm." Samarth glance at their dull faces. "Vikram's dad personally called me last night. So both of you are going for his engagement, understood." He stared both.


"Dad I know and I am going to." Maan assured him.


"Not only you. I said both of you and I am not asking. So no excuses. Geet bhi tumhare sath jayegi." He stared and left without hearing a single word. Both had no choice.

In evening both get ready for the party. As per Samarth's demand. Both left together for party and reached on the venue. They behave normal and Vikram introduced both to his fiancee. After ceremony done all couples are invited to dance floor. Vikram signals Adi and he pushed both Maan and Geet for a dance. He mafe excuses but he unlisten them. They don't show that they knew every thing about them.


Music starts and they to come together, so close after ages, that she could feel his every breath and raised heart beat. Maan's heart beating much faster, when he hold her so near. His rough palm on her bare waist sending a shiver which made her body tremble with the sensation of his touch. Her every dead fiber turned alive. Maan pulled her near.

Hai yeh nasha ya hai zeher
Is pyaar ko hum kya naam de
Hai yeh nasha ya hai zeher
Is pyaar ko hum kya naam de
Kab se adhuri hai ik dastaan
Aaja usse aaj anjam de
Tumhe bhuloon kaise mein
Meri pehli khata tum ho
Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho
Wajah tum ho
Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho
Wajah tum ho


He forgot gripping his emotions while dancing but not so long. Maan excuse her and stop dancing. "Geet I think we should leave now, Atharav wait kar raha hoga." He leave the dance floor, not even wait for her reply. He made same excuse to Vikram and his family, to leave the party. He drove fast to reach KM. When they reached Atharav was slept in his grand father's room. He informed both and they made a move to their room.


After a long time both get a chance to come closer but their past just not let them. Geet is changing when he come out of washroom. Maan quickly turn his eyes. "I am sorry." He apologies and ready to leave but she stops.


"And for what? You are not looking me like this for a first time. Maan you are my husband." Geet's patience was loosing every second.

"And that is your bad luck." She swirled him to face.

"What you want? Neither you showing your anger nor you interest in me, then what you want?" Her voice trailed off in a shaken whisper.

Maan looked away. He thought for few seconds. "Geet I don't know what made you live this faded life but I know you to have some desires. So please don't suppress yourself. You are free to live your life like before. Trust me I will not fuss if you go to someone else." Maan's voice was inflexible and he was in some other state of mind not even know what exactly he want and what he just said to her. Only a hard slap brought back his senses.

Geet's body was shivering not with disgust but with anger. They openly talk about casual sex but today his words pierced her like a sharp arrow. She left that life but still don't know why. She herself asking from herself several times but today when Maan asked for the same her anger towered and she slapped him.


"Get out of my sight." She screamed louder and pushed him out of the room. Maan left and she banged door In anger. Both are sitting alone far away from each other, gripping in their own sorrows.

Sun dawn but last night's rage not yet over and Atharav become prey of his parent's rift. He act stubborn before Geet and in fit of anger she slapped him hard that he falls down on floor. He cried louder and unleash the beast suppressed in Maan. He glared her dreadfully while lifting his son. Maan was about to slap her but Samarth stopped him.


"How dare you? Tume mujhpe gussa hai to mujhpe nikalo. Atharav pe nahi." He gritted his teeth in anger. His muscles turn prominent and jaw clenched hard. Maan snuggled Atharav firmly and left the mansion. Atharav was so restless and cried a lot which no one can bear. He clung to Maan firmly and sobbed that chocked his throat. Samarth to left her room with out saying a word because he knows this time Atharav only become an easy target of their rift.


But Meera was angry on Geet. Her behavior always gave pain sply when she don't show any emotional bond with Maan. "What you want ha? Why you slap that small kid? Just because Maan not ready to give you attention. Why you want his attention when you don't feel any thing for him? Geet I really don't want to interfere between both of you but you forced me. I agree that Maan is not saint. He was like you. But he never treated you like a shit like you treated him. What do you think that you give birth to Atharav to tumne bahut saha in 5 saalo me. I tell you the truth why you give birth to him. Just because all left you alone. Even your own uncle par tab b tume konsa farak pada. Tume farak pada jab business doob gaya. Tab Samarth uncle ne aake sab sambhala. That's why you take care of him because he save you from a beggars life. Bolo agar ye jhooth hai to." Meera burst on her and Geet don't have any words to defend herself. "What you bear tell me? You got everything. Your son' s love. Father like father in law. His care and affection. You caged yourself because you to know that you are guilty. But Maan he was dead now. He doesn't feel any thing. He was there beacuse of his son and you punish his last source of life. Why Geet why? Kis baat ka Itna gussa hai tumhe? Expect karne se pehle ye dekh lo what you give to him." She taking her words silently because she didn't had a word this moment. Samarth also left she saw his eyes having a complaint of hitting Atharav


Samarth and Meera constantly called Maan to know about his whereabouts but he didn't replied to any one. First time ever he saw his son so scared and restless who not ready to leave him for a second now. Late night he came back when he slept in his arms. Maan silently moved with him into Atharav's room and made him sleep on his bed. He sat near his head and brushes his hairs softly.


Samarth to came inside. He wants to talk with Maan. "Maan I don't know what happened between both of you. But I don't let my grandson became target of your rift. You both need to sort out your issues. Whatever had happened today I don't forgive you both." Maan hears him silently not giving any reply.


"Aap jo chahenge woi hoga dad." He leaned over his son and kissed him.


"It's not about my wish. It's about you and Geet. I know she hurt you but Maan she is changed now. Trust me. You both need to sort out your issues. Maan like you she to leave her past life. She to leave her all bad habits." Samarth said with conviction.


"Maine kab kaha dad she won't. I know she left all habits and love both of you so much. But not me. I am only a forced relations. But I promise jo aaj hua wo firr nahi hoga. I will give time to her. You want us to go for a holiday. I am ready." Maan knows whatever his father said was right. His behavior ultimately cause effect on Atharav so he decided to give what she want. Let her use him and carry a normal life. "Dad I am tired and want to sleep." He demands and Samarth left.


Maan slept besides him. Geet came to saw her son but not courage to went inside because Maan was with him.


In morning when Maan awake, first he saw his son who was in deep sleep. Man kissed him and his beats paced. Maan check him properly and panicked. His body was burning like a lava. Atharav got a high fever. ...





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Posted: 9 years ago
wajh tum ho
guys song sunn lena
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hehehe me first..😛😛😛😛😛😛👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


Yaar Maan kuch jyada hi gussa dekha raha hain. as i said he was the same like geet only time changed him and he fears to get hurt now just like he did when samarth entered his life as his step father but tat does not mean he forgets his dirty life and bring out his anger on geet.. yes she is different not able to show her emotions to anyone coz all she did was live such a life.. even sanjay could not break tat wall in her life and she turned into a stone but wat meera said... yes it is right but not the truth na.. she did not give birth to her son for saving her life and money.. she did coz she felt something but she does not understand it.. geet is far from such things and even though she loved aathrav and samarth she does not show is openly.. she has never done such thing and her silence in only her love and today maan's words hurt her so badly tat she does not understand why.. its like the life she lived earlier has forced her heart to stop feeling anything...

kehte hain na ki when you dont feel anything you will never feel coz you have lived a life like tat and this neither Maan nor meera nor samarth understands.. maan and meera can only see her as stone but samarth did see but he too fails to understand her state and this will only bring more pain to her.. slapping her son have affected her so much tat no one will see and trust me until maan understands her it will be too late coz he says he loves her but he does not take a step to understand her real self.. he always seen as a b***** and a selfish girl who slept with many and thinks about herself but the truth is neither earlier nor now he has tried to understand and make her understand herself... yes she is different but he too is different and showing his anger and indifference like this and letting her use him for sex.. god how can he forget tat she live like a monk for 5 years dedicating her life for her son and his father then why such words.. can't he see the life she lived or can't he understand her or is he so lost in his fear to get hurt tat he only feels for himself and not her... and in reality both Geet and Maan are wrong coz one is saving himself from hurt and pain while other does not understands and feels anything and in this only their son will suffer...


Yaar bahut lambha bashaan diya maine 😆😆😆😆

Edited by sdlife19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part
maaneet r trying tobehave normal
Arthrav got hit from geet just because of her anger
felt very bad for athrav
hope maan break the ice between them or he giving time to geet only for his son
Meera convo with geet super... she was correct
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Posted: 9 years ago


wow lovely emotional update..te way sam was worrying for his kids and cursing himself for not understanding wat his son going thru and planning to bring them close was lovely..te way my maaneet in party and feeling each other after a long time, they barrier slowly erasing but before tat my maan stop thinking tat he will lose himself was lovely..opps te way geet want to know my maan's silent but his words pirecing her heart and she slapped him was lovely emotional..yes she would have not know wat she want but her heart cant accept those words from her husband, tis shows geet have changed and want to live a normal life as my maan ki geet..te way geet slowing her anger on arthav and my maan ki gussa was lovely emotional..te way meera bursting on geet who stood like statue as she herself searching answers for herself,te way my maan heart winching seeing his son and consoling him and ready to give wat his geet wants was lovely emotional..i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update maan came back from his trip aathrav was so very happy to see his dadda back he was all over maan not leaving him maan got presents for all loved his and meeras cute spat made all happy even geet was happy to see them smile but it didnt last long as maan hadnt got anything for geet she was expecting something form him but he didnt she was hurt samarth requested to buy something for her though tried to deny but couldnt do much she was accusing maan for punishing her for her deeds maaneet went to drop aatharav to school trhey had a spat when geet asked him to make love to him to prove he respects what she did to get aathrav back in the world they were abt to make out but geet denied it both r acting like a complete strangers towards eachother maan met his friends after a very long time when vikram invited maan for his engagement when maan said he will come not sure abt geet which made them shocked and doubt that something is wrong between them maan ignored and left
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Posted: 9 years ago
really pissed off with geet how could she skap her own son just because she is angry on maan why should aatarav suffer???

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