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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 24

City Hospital

Maan, Dadima along with Sunaina and mohinder were waiting for doctor outside the ICU!
Dadima looked at maan , who was just sitting there , she couldn't guess what's going inside him, was he worried , was he regretting what he did or what, she have lots of question inside her mind and she wants to clear it too but not right now !
Right now her main concern is Geet!, the poor child is suffering without any fault , hope she comes out safe and sound ...

Sunaina and mohinder too were worried for their daughter, they were not able to believe that their daughter who always tried to be happy in life , has become this weak to quit her life..
were they wrong to let her live without them but they never thought that it will lead to all this..

all were immersed in their own thoughts analyzing where they went wrong , when they heard ICU door opening...

Doctor how is geet?? it was maan who asked first..

Mr. khurana, she is out of danger now , she was lucky enough that her body's metabolism is not so strong due to her weakness so poison didn't dissolved in her blood that quick and it was easy for us to just washout her stomach!

r u sure doctor, i mean then why she fainted??

its was due her low bp, anyways now we have shifted her to another room, i would say u all to just take care of her, i'm sure she is suffering mentally too , her body is too weak ! she needs proper care , i hope u r understanding what i'am saying!

Dadima- thank u doctor , can we meet her now?

Mrs. khurana she is under sedatives now and sleeping , u all can see her but please don't disturb her...

dadima beamed with happiness, thank u doctor!

Mr. khurana come with me , i have to prescribed some medicines for her..

hmm..

Maan and doctor went away from there...

Dadima along with sunaina and mohinder entered inside her room..

tied with few wires , geet laid on bed.. , dadima's eyes filled seeing geet like this..

sunaina went to geet and caressed her face...

Geet .. why u did this this..,
Sunaina please control urself.. she is okay now and soon will be back in her old self... AND He turned towards dadima..
Mrs. khurana, i don't know whether ur grandson love my daughter or not, seeing our daughter happiness which lies with him we allowed maan to marry her but we.. but dadima interrupted him..
i know what are u hinting at , but don't worry i'm there for geet and promise u both that till i'm alive i will never let anything harm geet and even if i have to go against maan , i will go!
thank u Mrs. kurana after what u did for geet we can fully trust u, thank u! sunaina i think we should go now..
But geet..
no sunaina u know ,already she is in pain and we being around her will affect her in wrong way too..so..

sorry to interrupt u but u both are her parents then why r u leaving her..

Mrs. khurana its a long story leave that.. we should leave now, take care of our daughter please... sunaina come and he dragged her with him outside the room..

Maan saw this from outside , he didn't understand why her own parents were leaving her like this .. what he was feeling right now he don't know he was confuse, he was still not able to digest that a girl can love him this much! was he wrong for pointing the faults in her ? seeing her condition now he was considering himself responsible , he want to apologize to her with these thoughts he went inside ..

Dadima was sitting beside geet and was caressing geet head, maan sat beside her silently without uttering any word...
Maan- dadima she..
Dadima- she is okay now maan, just sleeping!
Maan- dadima i am feeling guilty, i didn't know my words can effect her this much, i was just trying to..
Dadima- maan giving this explanation to me will not do any good , so there's no use, leave it!
Maan- but dadima..
Dadima- Maan why u married geet?, i was there to handle the situation , then why u came in between?
Maan- dadima they were blaming u unnecessarily and that was not acceptable to me..
Dadima- oh so u married geet for that, what kind of logic this is maan??
Maan- no dadima i didn't married geet for that i married her because..
Dadima- because u were guilty! her this word shocked him,
Maan- no...their this conversation disturbed geet a bit and she just moved a bit which both noticed.. dadima commended maan to come outside, maan followed her
Dadima- u r again denying maan, anyways okay tell me the reason why u came Handa house at first place? and i want honest answers!
Maan- woh.. after what u said that my words can effect geet in wrong way , i felt u can be right too, and from that day it wanted to apologize to geet but never got any time and then today i got free soon so decided to ...
Dadima- so decided to say sorry to geet!
Maan- hmm..
Dadima- okay then why u married her when we already have all the proofs against dev, why u came in between?? and please don't repeat the same thing again!
Maan- i was already feeling guilty dadima and after knowing that geet is marrying dev , i felt more guiltier, i was feeling somewhere its all because of me and seeing that brij supporting dev that boiled my blood, yes i was sure that u will stop this marriage as i already met adi when u were stopping the marriage and he briefed me with everything.. but dadima what guarantee u have that the next groom which they will select for geet will not be like dev , i mean that brij can do anything for his benefit and that was the main reason i thought to end this uncertainty for all and i decided to marry geet!
Dadima- oh that means u love geet?
Maan- no dadima i don't love her, i just, just i don't know.. i think its just..
Dadima- a guilt maan, accept it ! u married geet so that the guilt u r feeling can be eased right! and i know after marrying geet u must be at peace and thinking i saved her , i didn't let anything get wrong with her, right??
listening to dadima , maan just bowed his head down, he knew somewhere his dadima is right but he also knew that i was not 100% his guilt that forced him to marry geet , it was something else, what he felt when he saw geet sitting beside dev , i was jealous somewhere too much jealous he can't see her with anyone else, but he can't name that feeling as love , it's not love for him..

Whole night passed in hospital for khuranas, Doctor have asked them let geet be under observation for whole night then in morning he will decide whether to discharge her or not!
After seeing her reports in morning he was satisfied and discharged geet...

Geet have woken up now.. Dadima wished her good morning sweetly but didn't discuss much but geet's eyes were continuously searching maan..
Dadima- geet beta go and fresh up after that u have to take medicines too..
Geet- ji, geet half heartedly got up and went in washroom.. at the same time maan entered inside, seeing bed empty he asked.. Where is geet?
Dadima- she is in washroom, u tell what doctor said , can we take geet home??
Maan- yes dadima, geet reports are okay now , we can take her home but he also said to take proper care of her as she is still very weak..
Dadima- hmm.. at the same time geet came out of washroom , seeing maan a happiness covered her face, maan glanced geet , both looked at each other.. maan tell nurse to bring her breakfast so that i can feed her medicines and ready the discharge papers too.. this disturb their staring session..
Maan- ji and he left
Geet wanted to ask maan something but now after facing him , she was feeling shy.. after seeing herself in mirror for the first time after her marriage with maan she have noticed her filled maang and mangalsutra adoring her neck, these marriage symbols were giving her some different feel altogether..

after having breakfast and medicines , dadima asked geet to get ready as they were going back to home, geet was in dilemma as what to wear as first she was in hospital gown and she doesn't want to wear that leghana again which was given by dev's side , but dadima solved her this problem too by giving her a simple salwar suit to wear..
Geet- dadima ye..
Dadima- i asked maan to bring this as i knew wearing leghana will not be comfortable for u..
Hearing that maan brought this for her, she was double happy now.. after thanking dadima , she happily got ready ..

After their first encounter in morning maan didn't come inside her room again he avoided her completely whereas geet , she was eagerly waiting to talk to maan..

In the car too Geet sat along with Dadima at back seat whereas Maan drived the car... she wanted maan to glance at her for once, wanted to know how she is looking in his given dress but nothing happened like that.. in her wait she didn't knew when she slept!
Soon they reached KM, geet was already asleep so dadima asked maan to pick up geet..
they entered inside KM , maan moved towards his room along with geet in his arms but dadima stopped him..
Dadima- stop maan!
Maan just turned back and asked her why she stopped him..
Dadima- maan i don't know whether after knowing the truth that u married her out of ur guilt not out of ur love, she will accept this marriage or not , so till then i myself don't consider this marriage its on geet to decide!
Maan- dadima there's no use for this as u know geet loves me so there's no point that she will not accept this marriage..
Dadima- maan let it be decided by geet only, till then please let her stay in guest room, i don't want to force anything on her..
Maan- as u say..
So instead of his room , maan took geet to guest room and placed her on the bed...
Maan- dadima i think now u should rest, geet is safe here and resting ,i will ask nakul to keep eye on her..
Dadima- hmm..
Both maan and dadima left from there..

Few minutes later geet got up, finding her in new environment she got confuse , she got up from bed and moved outside ,soon she recognized that she is in KM..
Nakul saw her, geet mam u got up?, do u need anything??
Geet was already feeling bit awkward so she just nodded her head in no..
oh , then u should rest mam ..

ahh..where is maan?? wo..h i want to see him..twisting her dupatta's end she asked nakul..
Nakul- sir is in his room , should i call him?
Geet- n..no..i will meet him myself and she went upstairs to see him and asked him what she wanted to ask for so long..
reaching outside his room , again the previous memories haunted her but she shut her eyes and assured herself no geet may be he have started loving u that's why he married u or else why will he do.. don't thing negative now..
and with all courage which she have in her , she touched his room's door and pushed it but didn't entered inside..
Maan was in front of mirror buttoning his shirt when he heard the door sound , from mirror he saw geet..
Maan- geet and turned and look at her.. both were staring at each other but didn't uttered anything.. some sounds from downstairs disturbed them ..
Maan- ahh.. geet u..a.do u want anything??
Geet- n..no woh.. i ..wa.nt to ask u something..
Maan- geet come inside first and sit , u r already weak and..
Geet- nahi..first answer my question?
Maan(st)- this geet always loves to argue with me, and when i become rude she takes extreme steps , huh!
MAAN- OKAY ASK!
Geet- Do u Love me??
her first question itself was a shock for maan , he didn't accepted her to ask this , he was accepting her to ask why he married her and other questions and he have well prepared himself for all that but not this..
not getting any reply for long again the hope which have raised in her was starting to break..
Geet- answer me..
Maan-geet i won't lie to u but no i don't love u yet.. geet i know till what extent u love me, u showed that with ur previous action but geet...
Geet- u don't love me then why u married me, why didn't u let me die in peace?
Maan- yeah right i should have let u die and have burdened myself with the guilt that someone died because of me, no never!
Geet- that means i'am a burden on u , this marriage is burden on u??
Maan- geet u r taking me wrong now..
Geet no Mr. khurana no.. enough is enough now if this marriage is burden for u then i myself will free u from this and with that she clutched her mangalsutra and pulled it harshly from her neck , it left some scars on her neck but she didn't care..
here take it Mr. khurana, it might be burden for u but for me now its nothing , this marriage is nothing for me, i reject this marriage Mr.khurana and free u for this marriage! with that she threw that mangalsutra inside his room and left from there...


She was just going to put her foot outside the main door when dadima stopped
GEET!! where are u going??
Geet- dadima now i don't belong here, the relation which bonded me with this house i rejected it, so now there no point for me to stay here..
Dadima- oh ..okay! good! so where are u planning to go.. i hope not HH , as for the outer world u r married and a girl getting back to her house even before 24 hours of her marriage doesn't give a good to sign to others! and u don't have any money too so no hotel will allow u to stay!
Geet- dadima i know what u r trying to do by saying all this but how i can stay here when i.. geet voice choked while speaking..
Dadima immediately cocooned her in her embrace shh.. geet u don't have to cry , just forget maan for a while and come with me..
Geet- no dadima, i don't want to be burden on u..
Dadima- geet shut up now, u r my responsibility now i have promised ur parents to take care of u..
Geet- they are not my parents!
Dadima- GEET!! okay leave it stay here as a paying guest, cool enough!
Geet- but i don't have any money??
Dadima- u have ur jewelleries right, there are with me i know they are worth of lakhs , u can keep them on rent with me and whenever u have money , pay me and take them!
Geet- but..
Dadima- no geet enough , u have forced me to talk like a businesswomen , and u don't have any other option too, think carefully!


precap- new beginning..
How was it ??
how many of u accepted this???
waiting for ur reviews now..






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Posted: 10 years ago
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I dint expected such boldness from geet

I loved this geet

The way she snapped back maan is fantastic

What maan thinks about himself is he bhagwan?? or some what??

I loved that part when maan felt jealous seeing dev sitting beside geet

Wonderful update

I loved new twist

Edited by Asheley - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank God that Geet is well. Geet came to KM . When she asked Maan that he love her or not , Maan said no. Again rejection . Poor Geet. Now she will stay as paying guest in KM. Let see what happen next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb ...
Yay !!!!
Good that Maan did not accept Geet completely...
baad me Geet ...
ne band Jo bajani hai Maan ki...
Waise Dadi did right not letting Maan decide for Geet ...
and Dadi will take care of Her ...
I just can't wait for Geet to be independent ..

waiting for next update ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update maan did care for her but dont love her yet also he was jealous seeing her with dev i liked dadima she supports geet poor girl still hoped may be maan love her so married her but again her heart broke she did the right think by not accepting this marriage last part is awesome now maaneet will live in same house n geet wont be run after him nice part thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update!
Dadi is a very worldly - wise & practical business woman. Enjoyed the update. Loved it when Geet said she rejected the marriage!
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
geet is totally fine now...maan was taking her to his room wen dadi stopped him..she wants geet to decide for herself..geet talks to maan & rejects this marriage..dats gud..want to see a strong geet n maan running behind her..geet vl b living in KM as paying guest..dats cool..waiting 4 next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
really amazing... plz continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update
I really loved how Geet rejected Mann. She was very happy seeing him in the hospital. She was very eager to talk to him. Hos room reminded her of their previous encounter. She asked wether he love her or not? Mann said no. Geet is really angry and throwed that mangalsutra to him. She was leaving KM but dadi stops her. She asked her to be there as a paying guest. Geet have to give her ornaments to Dadima and she will work and pay dadi to get those ornaments back. Awesome update. I really wanted this sherni Geet not that puppy lover girl Geet

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