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"They lived in Chandigarh city but just gathered in their family of village for Brij & Meera marriage.

*Part-2 unknown Sparks*

Next day-the sun was shining brightly on 'Singh Khurannas & Handas' haveli where people were busy to made its each corner look like a bride.But instead of beautiful flowers & lights Miss Geet was determnt to put her own colours in her darling bhai marriage.Taking required cds she went to last room at da end of hall which was only empty for girls dance practice.She stopped at da entrance seeing girls quietly peeping inside.Geet in shock:tum sb yahan bahir kya kr rhe ho?mene kaha tha naa step practice kro.
They giggled while Tina dreamily:Mr.Hottie ka free show enjoy kr rhe hen..join us.
Geet gave her a look & went inside where Mr.Maan Singh Khuranna was busy in workout just in his brown morning tros & black muscles exposing vast.
Geet loudly cleared her throat in which reply he return her & her gang a look during his heavy weight lifting.She was dressed in orange patyala salwar & short kameez.Her wavy hairs proudly falling on her back:mene 15 minutes pehle bulvadya tha,room khali krden.
He kept da weights down,widout luking her started doing push-ups:ek ghanta lge ga.
Geet annoyed:dekhey Mr. mene pehle bol dya tha mujhe ye room khali chahey.
He replied wid equal irritation:kaha naa..smjh nhi aa rhi?
Geet in full stubborn mood,orderd her girls:music on kro,aur a.C bhi.
They tk out their sandals & tk their positions.He got up &luked in her shiny wid a challenge which she accepted widout a blink.He took his glucose drink bottle & drank it till end.Geet was happy as to her thought he was finally leaving but to her shock he dropped da big glass bottle on floor,ofcourse intentionly.
They gasped as da shattered glass spread on floor,all around their delicate feet.Naintara worriedly to Geet:ise to saaf krne men hi 4 ghante lge gen.
Tina snapped:is se to hum ek ghanta intezar hi krlete.
While she was quite,looking him in disbelief..How can some one be so rude,so mean,so ...Dusht Danav! He calmly walked out while she ran to her bodyguard bhaiya.She luked for him every where & finally heard his voice from her dad room.She immediatly opened it widout a knock but stopped at da entrance hearing da heated convo.
Brij:dad wo kitna badtmeez hai,dadu ka naam lya usne.manners naam ki koi cheez nhi usme.bs aap usko guest house men shift hone ko bolen,wo family men rehne k layak nhi.
Mohindar:mene kaha naa wo kahen nhi jaey ga.Meera aur Bii jii ko bura lge ga aur above all wo mere best friend ka beta hai.
Brij paniced:par dad mere lye.
Mohindar:jaise tum mere bete ho wese hi wo mera beta hai ,tum dono mere lye brabar ho.
On such unjustice reply he rushed out in anger,even didnt notice Geet.
She worriedly went behind him.Just one worry line on her big B face was enough to sank her heart.But before she reached him,their mom stopped him in way.
Rano:Brij?beta kya hua?tu itna preshan kyun hai?
Brij burning in anger:mom.. dad us badtmeez,sar phere Maan Singh Khuranna ka muqabla mujhse?apne bete se kr rhe hen? sb kuch unka bestfriend ka beta aur men kuch nhi?
Rano face colour changed into pale,after a long breath she replied:unhe apne best friend se kitna pyar hai wo mujhse zyada kon janta hai..unke dost is dunya men nhi rhe par unka pyar aur izzat ab bhi unke dil men hai.tum jitni jaldi smjh jao tumhare lye acha hoga.
Brij luked her in disbelief while she went away.Geet saddness had no limit to saw such tension in her loving family,on such happy ocassion.So she just follow her heart which lead her to Meera room"Meera se hi kehti hun,wo khud apne bhai ko kahe gi jane ka..sb theek ho jaeya.
She stopped at entrance of her room & da only thought came in her mind"why so much complications God?"
Meera was putting rakhis on Maan wrist,happily:hogai puri 12 rakhi.aese kya dekh rhe ho?tum nhi aaey,par tumhare lye rakhi to me hr saal hi leti thi.
Geet luked at Maan whose expressions were dry asusuall"Meera bhi naa aese hi apne emotions waste kr rhi hai,is sadu ko kya smjh aa rha hoga" They shocked when he tk out a shopping bag from behind(face still composed).Meera in disbelief tk out 12 wrapped gifts.Maan softly:men bhi har saal gift leta tha.
Meera wid teary eyes,hugged him.But he instantly stood up noticing Geet precense their which he not like at all.She stepped in on Meera calling.She excitdly:dekho Maan mere lye kitne sare gifts laya hai..tum mili Maan se..mere bhai se?
Geet wid a half smile:haan.nice to m...thoda sa Ajeeb hai.
Meera brust into laugh while Maan gave her a look:same here. & went out.
She sat next to Meera who was laughing hardly.Seeng Geet irritation Meera:acha dont mind.
Geet:wese ye tumhara bhai smjhta kya hai apne aap ko?ye itna ajeeb kyun hai.
Meera became quite,dn added:ajeeb nhi bs sari life hostel men raha hai to family men rehna nhi aata..Kumud aunty hr time business men busy rehti hen.Aur Rudr uncle ki death ko wo aaj bhi bhool nhi paya.
Noticing Geet sudden dropped face she exclaimed:plz tum ab rone mt lag jana.
Geet rolled her eyes:dont make fun of me.
Meera hugged her loving nand:mazak nhi uda rhi.men to tareef kr rhi hun hmari nanni pari ki jis ka dil sheeshe jesa nazuk hai.
Geet laughed:buht over buttering hogai.
Meera giggled & asked:wese tum zruri baat krne aai thi?
Geet sighed:nhi . .chodo hum tumhare ajeeb bhai k ajoobe gifts dekhte hen.
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They gasped in amazement when she stepped out of washroom dressed in black lacy lingere.Tina whistled: Geet u r looking damn sexy.
Simmi proudly:aakhr collection kiska hai?tumhe gift pasand aaya na Meera.
Meera wid a grin:haan buht hot hai,par ye men nhi lungi.kyunke ye to Geet par hi acha lag rha hai.
Geet luked herself in mirror,adjustng da net gown on her shoulders:kyun?men kya krungi iska?
Simmi:haan to tum apne un ko dikhane k lye rkh lo.
Tina teased:haan Geet sb so rhe hen,ja kr Dev ko apni ek jhalak to dikha hi aao. .bechara raat bhar so nhi paey ga.
Geet was like:pagal ho kya?
Meera too joined them:haan Geet wo tumhara soon to be husband hai itna to right bnta hai uska.
Geet argued:hone wala hai par hua to nhi hai.
Tina:oh come on,itne saal se uski Brij bhya se dosti hai,tumhare ghar aaana jana hai..3 months se tumhara rishta fix hua hai aur ek hafte baad tumhari official sgai hai.
Simmi:aur tum dono k beech kuch nhi hua aesa to ho hi nhi skta.
Geet rolled her eyes:par fact ye bhi hai we r still not married..aur wo meri values ki respect krta hai.
Tina drmatcally walked to her in a hero style & grab her wid shoulders:hero respect nhi krta wo sirf pyar krta hai.
They laughed while Tina continued:bolo senerita. .kya mere pass aane se tumhara dil nhi dhakta,mere chone se tum men aag nhi lagti. .kya mere dekhne se tumhari saanse nhi rukti?bolo!
Meera while laughing:haan meri maa use sb kuch hota hai,ab sb kuch tumhe btay kya?chodo use.
Geet laughed:ofcourse yes. but deep down her heart whispered:sch men aesa kuch nhe hota!par kyun?

She was about to went for change bt stopped in way noticing Naintara book.Geet:ye to Naintara ki book hai.wo preparatn kese kr rhi hogi?
Meera:wo study men dhundh k preshan ho rhi hogi,jao use de aao.
Geet:acha men ek minute men change kr k aati hun.
Tina irritated:jao,tumhare saiyaan nhi jaag rhe honge is time..aur Naintara ko bhi bolna jaldi aaey,buht neend aa rhi hai.
She walked to study room soundlessly,unwilling to mk any noise.She slowly opened its door.Her act was so silent dt even Naintara ddnt feel her precense.Geet became frozed at da sight.Instead of studies Naintara was lost in laptop:men ek raat kya,sari zindagi aese hi tumhe dekhne k lye guzar skti hun..men tum se buht pyar krti hu
Her words stopped in her mouth when her eyes noticed Geet.In horror she stood up.Her face became pale,her throat became dry.Geet walked to her & turned da laptop to her side.Naintara paniced:plx nhi. .i am sorry Geet.
Her eyes opened wide recognzng da room on skype..one of da room of haveli.
She leaned down & angrily called:kon hai wahan?samne kyun nhi aa rhe?abhi aao samne..kon hai?
On her warning tone,he moved da laptop to his side.
Her shock had no limit to saw Maan Singh Khuranna.His hairs & jaw bone still had wetness because of his just taken bath.But in features of his handsome face,only his eyes had her attention.His shining brown eyes seem so familier.The grew darkness in them,the intense look in them reminding her...Electrifyng shiver ran inside her when his gaze made her realize her own position.She had bent down more dn she shud in dis lacy attire

she shut da laptop & almost ran from there.
Maan luked up at da man standing infront of him.The only man who was talking wid Naintara & just went to tk charger.The real owner of da laptop Dev Sinha.
Dev worry,depression,tension of exposion of his & his soon to be sister-in-law affair was clearly written on his face.But to his surprise Maan pushed da laptop to his side of bed & lay to sleep.Not because he didnt knew how to play but he realy well know When to play!

aaj hai sgaii..sun ladki k bhai
zra nach k hum ko dikha

Maan gave a look to group of girls who were on mission of teasing him.Sangeet function was on peak.Every corner was echoing wid music & filled wid preety girls.Maan:Saleel tumhari awaz clear nhi aa rhi,men ouper ja kr baat krta hun.
He went upstair,got irritated dt even his room was not free from guest:Saleel u just mail me all important information related to race.
Saleel:tujhe bhi naa sakun nhi hai! haan 4 din baad hai bike race
chandigarh men..to phir kitne ki batng* krni hai?
Maan:pehle ye btao any constant winner?
Saleel:acha ek minute,let me check.
He stopped when Geet blocked his way.No doubt all girls were luking like models there but he didnt knew why his eyes found only her attractive.She was dressed in fish-cut skrt & midrif choli which had decent work of white beads on it.Her silky hairs tied in simple but stylish bun,leaving few hair strands falling on one side of her beautiful face.She hesitatly:mujhe zruri baat krni hai..kal raat k bare men. .His eyes changed like he could still picture in her last night attire.Oh god she hate dt glint in his evil eyes which made every inch of her tingle.He looked away,not liking her effect on him.In his whole life he didnt gave his precious time any of girl even instead of their begging but here charm of dis Miss was haunting him.Maybe its her untouched glow or challenging stubborness in her innocent eyes. .dt was driving him crazy.He instantly wanted to gt rid of it because she was not just Miss bt Miss Handa.
Ignoring her,he walked away.Saleel on phone:Brij naam hai ..yehi last two years se bet jeet raha hai.Last year he won 10 lac.
Maan went up to terrace stair bcoz of signal problem,unaware she was still following him.Maan:pura name?
Saleel:..Brij Singh Handa.
So da grandson of Mr.Sukhvindar Handa-the man of values fond of such illegal activity?
Maan:done! ab to participate krna hai..jeetne k lye.
He cut da call & got surprised when he found her standing behind him on stairs.Geet:mene kal tumhe Naintara se baat krte hue dekh lya tha.
He replied wid equal dry tone:mere pass time nhi hai..stupid logo k lye to bilkul nhi.
She twisted her nose & blocked his way:tum aese nhi ja skte.She turned her back leaned down to gt view of downstair for da sake of privacy.Geet gave him warning:mujhe sirf itna kehna hai tum apni harkate bnd krdo.men sirf islye chup hun kyunke men Meera,dadi aur apni family ko preshan nhi krna chahti..aur Naintara meri behn se dour raho.Smjh gaey?
"tumhari zip khulli hai" It took more dn a moment to realize her his words.She worriedly moved her hand to her back.Got frozed feeling da skin of her back.She instantly moved backward:pehle doubt tha,ab yakeen hogya tum buht hi besharam,cheap,ghatya aadmi ho.
He folded his arms across his chest:aur agr chup chap nazare krta to shareef hota?
Geet snapped:shutup!
She tried to call bua,Tima but because of loud music got no response.He was about to walk away bt she instantly stopped him:ruko. .men is haal men neeche kese jaungi?He simply answered:tumhara problem hai.
Geet:neeche ja kr kisi ladki ko upar bhejo..zra jaldi.
He raised his eyebrow:i m not ur servant.
He was about to walked away when she again stopped him:tum ek ladki ko aese kese chod k ja skte ho?
He stepped toward her,finally to help her.
Geet instantly warned him:no..stay away.
He clentched his jaw in anger on most critical creature on earth.Giving him a cold glare he finally took down step on stair.
"Maan" he stopped hearing his name from her lips for da 1st time..For da 1st time his name touched his heart..felt so alive,so beautiful.He turned & found her beautiful face full of shade of innocence.Her lips had pout,her kohl eyes were showing her tension.She dint realize when he cover da distance between them.But dis time she didnt protest because she felt lost in depth of his brown eyes.Her
heart racing in unbelivble speed in precense of his masculine colonge.His patience broke its boundary when her pulmp lips parted to take breath.He swiftly removed da only clip holding her silky hairs.Which cause dm to fall da way he loved.
Heat rushed inside her when he moved behind her & touched her zipper.He was stranger,well a stranger in dislike category but why his closeness felt so righ.Why his touch ddnt felt disgust bt it made her feeling beautiful.
Because of her hairs he didnt saw anything bt touching her through da fabric was enough to drive him crazy.Her intake of breathing,her arousing scent..his hands just wanted to roam on his heart will.
She was frozed feeling warmth of hir breath on her neck.They came on earth hearing dadi calling.Like a wind she ran downstair while he remain dizzy in effect of her.

precap: she helplessly melt in effect of his lips on her(last updt of past)

thank u so much for reading...plz hit like..do post ur commwnts mean alot to me

p.s: updtng from cell... will change font & title later

love u all"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chap - 1
Fantastic update
he is a shrewd businessman and he hates handas
dadimaa wants maan to be married to geet but brij wants geet to marry dev
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Chap - 2
superb part
what is the reason behind maan's hatred for handas
maan is falling for geet
Edited by heemasomani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update
Why Maan hating handas
But he is falling for Geet's innocence
Beautifully written
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Their it goes
dev and naintara
but maan dint reveal it to geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi mahi
nice update
maan so arrogant and geet so innocent ..
nt and dev going around fooling all ..geet aaankein kholo apni
brij har saal race win karta hai ..iss baar maan ka chance ..
last maneet scene was nice ..

thank u for update
waiting for next

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