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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...geet is blooming in love... She is too much happy... Jey hugged her as a friendship token but shifali was heart broken... Maan in rage of all the injustice is playing with her feelings... He admitted that his heart is in no control of him... Waiting when he actually falls deep in love with her before its too late... I don't want any separation ... It's better if maan realizes ... Saleel is NT with him and feeling bad for geet too but still he knows everything but can't help her either... In his weakest moment geet never left his side and console him.. Maan was frustrated to show his weakness to her as may she will uses it but nahh... Her love is everything to heal his wound.. And soon their will be sparks of love in him..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear.. Geet is very much in love.Maan please don't playing her feelings. Saleel is so carrying. Geet n jay bonding is very strong. Feeling scared for geet .waiting.for next.plzz update soon. Thankxx for Beautiful update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update dear ...thanks for updating .. saleel tried to put some sense in maan ..but till now he is not ready to understand anything ...geet care and warmth taking toll over him ...lets see when will he fall in love with her ...update soon dear ..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Last two parts such a twister.

maan being a big player n for him,geet is just a pawn,whom he trapped n she willingly gave in.

but his dad telling him he is wrong. Jus seeing a dream he is so disturbed,so weak. Wat will happen if geet leaves him.


conti soon.

i lov d way u express their emotions. Such deep dialogues yet so simply written.

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Posted: 10 years ago
dear its part 14 nor part 15
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Posted: 10 years ago
fantastic update ,.. really touching to heart ,... ab dekhthehaoi maan kaise geet ko dhoka de paayega ,..
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!! Love this ff!! I hate what maan is doing! Geet is so cute and innocent! I hope maan realizes and doesn't do it!
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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely emotional update..te way geet ki happiness and shyness thinking abt they relation took to next step was lovely..but she dont know tat her happiness going to crushed soon..te way my maan even tough his heart fallen for his innocent beauty but his mind was loaded with revenge for handas tat blockng hs sense was lovely..te way geet innocently ask my maan to tie te mangalsutra omg very emotional..te way saleel feeling sad for geet and warning my maan who was not only betraying others but his heart too..te way my maan ki nightmare and geet trying to console him and he snapping her but geet soothing his pain and my maan pouring his pain was lovely emotioanl..te way my maan cursing himself for losing his sense but geet making ease was lovely..i love te update yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous Update

Now Geet has meaning to wear her Mangel Sutr and in her every gesture her love just bubbles over for Maan and it seems he been a businessmen yet he is very much crooked in his ways stealing to get to the top if he is after the Handa fine let it be but this property that he wants is in Geet's name and it has nothing thus relating it to Handa's
Saleel his friend and lawyer knows what Maan is doing because he has to prepare all the legal papers so yeah he is trying to make Maan understand that he is selling his love short while Maan tells him that in his life there is no time for love
also Maan has never told Geet that he loves her yes she told him
thinking she can trust him and she was getting effected by him and even him too but everything that he did was all a game and when Geet finds out she will be devastated

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part-15 (last updt was pt.14)
His gaze shifted hearing her melodious voice"hmara sapna ek din zrur pura hoga"In reply of his questioning eyes she pointed at the sample of his hotel project where he was staring early"tum mere..to tumhara sb kuch bhi mera naa?"

Like daily she walked in with her invitable lips stretched in beautiful smile.He watched as she pushed away da heavy curtains & each corner of his cabin glowed by da shining sun light.She slipped her arms around his neck from standing behind.Her dreamy tone filled wid innocent excitement:ye India ka hi nhi,world Best resort hoga.wese kuch socha bhi hai?mtlb Delhi men hi hoga na?koi area arrange kya hai?

Maan lost in his thoughts:haan hai mere dad ka,jahan mere dad ye project start krna chahta the..tumhare dadu nhi de rhe.

Her arms losend & she became quite,not on his bitter words & harsh tone but because she KNEW her dadu.Only her heart knew how much she was praying for a ray of truth which could clarify all da messes between her two most beloved people.

Moving away from behind she sat on table infront of him:aaj hum lunch yahan office men nhi kisi ache se resturant men kren ge.

Picking up random file he instantly refused:mujhe kam hai,chli jana driver k sath.

Geet made face on his weird suggestion:par aaj mera kaam krne ka bilkul man nhi hai..baki sb smbhal lenge.chlo aaj hum kahen ghumne chlte hen.

He couldnt hold himself any more when she stood up & snatched away file from his hand.

"kahan naa mujhe kaam hai,tumhe smjh nhe aati?Go right now..leave me alone"In da result of his harsh words & scolding tone she rushed out wid wet eyes.
She quickly wiped her tears as Jay approached her.Jay narrowed his eyes:whats wrong Geet?

Before she answered Jay taunted:rehne do tum ne konsa sch bolna hai?

Geet:to mene kb jhot bola hai tum se?

Jay:to sch bhi to nhe bola. .ye sch k u r married.

Geet eyes wided & her hand instantly raised to check the sacred thread around her neck which was nearly visible from her scarf.Geet looked her angry friend wid guilt:Jay. .wo



Jay worriedly:kb ki tum ne shadi aur kis se ki?is men chupane ki kya zrurt hai.tumhare husband ne tumhe chup rehne ko kaha hai?Blackmail kr rha hai?dhmka rha hai?

Geet smiled on his friend care & holding her mangalsutr she spoke da truth:haan men married hun.3 mahene hojaeynge meri shadi ko.Kuch reason tha chupane ka.

Jay:kuch mt btao,men tum se kuch nhe pouch rha.but i hope tumhe jb bhi meri help ki zrurt hogi atlest tum tb to chup mt raho.

Geet:aesa kuch nhi hai jesa tum smjh rhe ho.he loves me alot.aur bs mujhe thoda sa time de do,men tumhe sb kuch khud bta dungi.

There was no any specifc reason for hiding from Jay,but she knew hearing his boss name will raced his mind wid countless doubts.Both friends were busy in their conversion unaware of da fact dt Riya da gossip queen had saw them & much more!



She ran to her gang:girls ek buht hi hotest news hai.Geet ne shadi kr li hai.

All jaw dropped"kya,kb,kese" was the words echoed around.Tina sadly:mere Maan Sir. .

Riya shook her head:sir se nhi. .Jay se.

All stood up in their cubicals expect Shefali who had fall back on her chair hearing da disaster news.

Mina:are u sure?

Riya breathless:haan mene khud dekha,Geet ne apna manglsutr Jay ko dikhaya phr kuch baat ki.phr Jay k kehne par wapis andr krlya.

Tina confused:par wo ye chupa kyun rhe hen?

Simi:take wo sir ko aur bewakuf bna ske.Tum sb chup raho,men Sir ko khud btaungi.Dekhna men inki kese band bjati hun.
~*~

Hours were passed but Maan state was similar.He gulped down the whole glass of wine but nothing was giving him peace.He wanted to gt out of-- trap of his thoughts,storms of his memories,black hole of his inner questions & answers. .HE want HER.Finally he picked up his cell & dialed her no.The only object on earth who can numb his stressful mind wid da undefined pleasure.

As she cut his call for 3rd time he walked out looking for her.She continued to help Jay in printing instead of noticing him standing wid his waiting gaze.

"Miss Geet come in my cabin,Right now" he comanded in his usuall bossy tone.She lazily pin-up papers about to walk behind him but Jay grab her wrist for asking about some random file.Hand in hand dy laughed on some silly error,unaware Maan & Shefali had not missed da FRIENDLY action.

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She stepped in the cabin:kyun bulaya hai mujhe?

Her blue silk dress molded perfectly on her curvy figure reaching her knees.Leaving her silky legs & creamy shoulder tempting.The pout on her full lips & anger on her face adding da spark.

"i am the Boss,isnt it?"he stated da fact simply.

She folded her arms across her chest wid worst chessy smile questioned:kya kaam hai aap ko SIR?

She patiently watched as he lock da cabin door & walk to her.Trying his best to remember what she had asked:tum kahen lunch krne ka keh rhi thi?Lunch bhi bahr krenge aur dinner bhi.

Pushing his hand away from her arm she snapped:mere pass in sb k lye time nhi hai.aap ko jo kam hai wo btaeyn.

Instead of her kadak tone he slipped his arm around her waist,in his husky tone:to phir kaam smjh kr k krlo.

"men married hun" was da only line dt came out of her mouth.Pushing his hand away she stepped back till her back hit wid wall.Her delicate heart only knew how she was controlling her throbbing cell under heat of his intense gaze.Countless knotes borned in her stomach as his fingers lazily moved up on her silky arms.Leveling his mouth to her he replied:tum mere siva kisi ki ho kr bhi kisi ki nhi ho skti.

No doubt remain when he tasted corner of her lip.But pressing her lips together she moved away her mouth as far could possible"phir bhi men apne husband se buht pyar krti hun"

Before she could walk away from him he pulled her again by grabbing her wrist.Bumping in his chest she looked up in his intense eyes.Maan:kitna?

"itna k uski maafi mangne se hi pehle men use maaf kr skti hun"

Love is strange!Isnt it?He thought luking in her deep lovely eyes.Placing his hand on her hips he pulled her more closer.He asked raising his eyebrow:mtlb no need of Sorry?

Wid fake pout on her lips she demanded:ek shart par..aaj ka lunch se dinner tk aur sunday mean kal ka bhi sara din tum mere sath guzaro ge. . Meri marzi,Meri tareke se.

The feeling of her skin just from da fabric & her that unique scent had already drive him crazy.Getting a Nod from him she happily hugged him.Her mind raced for planning. .planing da moments which can make him happy,relax,alive.



She felt her figure huging dress slightly lose & dn feeling his hand on her bare back.Realization sudden hit her & she broke da huge wid a flushed face.

Tryng to hold her dress in place she stared him wide eyes as he threw away his coat & started unbuttoning his shirt.

In the next moment she was in cage of his arms & his wicked mouth was pressed on her.His lips played,his tounge danced. .sending shivers to her each cell.

Still dazed in effect of his kiss she tried to remind him dt they are in office.But furniture of office witnessed he didnt listnd to her.?
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She impatienly waited for da waiter to bring her desired menu.He brought her Noodles bowl along his cheese sandwich.He watched as she tried to eat it wid chop sticks,using all her super woman effort.Noticing her attics he couldnt stop his chuckle which made her lips too stretched in smile.
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She made him walk wid her on cool sand,bare feet.Instead of his protest she sat down enjoyng cool breeze & pulled him down too.She pushed him on his back & rested her head on his chest enjoyng rhythm of his heart beat & da beautiful sun set.
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Because of her continuous demand he had to parked his car infront of ice-cream parlour.Holding cones in her both hand she made him to take too.Instead of his annoynce she teach him to lick it.Embarrased on his action he luked around.Lost in charm of his cute face she touched his both cheeks wid her ice-cream than lick bx plantng soft kisses.
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Her eyes grew in excitement & she shook hm to made his sleepy eyes open.1st ray of sun peeped through da curtains of sky pushing away da darkness from everywhere.She was continuously rubng her hand feeling the morning breeze which were feeling like ice in her sheer fabric.Unable to bare da chillness she hold his hand in between her freezing palms.His eyes lost on da beautiful view which he had not witnessd from so long while his arm pulled her in his warm embrace,rubbing her soft hands.
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He made face as she picked up a yellow T along a pink
shirt.Holding 2 dress in her hand she asked him to chose one while he ended da shopping session by picking a black male shirt for her which made her blushed.
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Even after a movie & spicy dinner she didnt let him to take sigh of relief.She stepped out of car noticing a group of school boys playing football.He called her again & again but she started playing wid them.When da ball came at his feet the memory of his happy childhood too came wid it.He cudnt stopped himself anymore. .
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She watched him wid a big happy smile as he cherised his childhood hobby.
~*~
Ringing cell broke his heavenly sleep.Natasha voice made his sleepy eyes open.Natasha:thank God tum ne phone to uthaya,kahan busy the.
Maan tried to end da conversion:men aaj papers sign kr dunga.tum office aa jao.
Natasha:finally! office nhi.mere farm par aaj party hai aur tum aa rhe ho.Ok? aur haan wo apni P.A Geet ko bhi le kr aana.
Maan:use kyun?
Natasha sighed:Rishi ne kaha hai.please usko le aana.
The call was cut but he was layng still wid increasing frowns on his face.He luked at da beauty sleeping in his protective arms wid eyes which were turning red in anger.

~*~
They stepped out of car reaching their destination.His eyes again went on her...da darkness of night & glow of golden lights increased her beauty.Her blue silk dress leaving her shoulder & creamy back in V style falling down on her legs wid only a shining belt around her perfect waist.Her hairs tied in a stylish bun,few hairs strands falling around her face.And her lips coated wid cherry gloss luking so irrisistable specially when he was aware of its taste.He instantly luked away as she caught him staring.Wid da guide of her handsome man luking absolutely hot in his grey suit,went inside.Her smile disappeared from her lips when she saw Natasha approaching them.Wid her usuall flattery way she wrapped her arms around his neck in a welcome,ignoring Geet like she never exist.
And as she what expected,Natasha dragged him along wid her.She tried her best but da aching feeling in her stomach didnt let her beautiful eyes moved away from them.
"Hey Beautiful"Her tensed face glow up hearing the comment because she had recognzed da voice.She turned & her smile grew wider seeing Saleel:tum yahan?
Saleel:men Maan ka legal adviser hun,mere bger uska koi kaam nhe hota.Wese ye sawal mer hona chahey.tum yahan?
Geet giggled:to men uski P.A hun.
They both laughed & dn their eyes settled on da sight.Natasha & Maan busy in convo & her hands more dn necessary touching him.Saleel stole a glance of Geet & her expressions were like what u can expect from a wife.Noticing Saleel eyes she instantly forced a smile.Saleel worriedly:tum theek ho?
Geet taken back on his sudden,open question:ofcourse i am.
Than she added:ye project Maan ki company k lye buht important hai..
That innocent tone of her!Saleel smiled:mujhe nhe pta tha ladkia itni understanding bhi ho skti hen.
Geet:mujhe bhi nhi pta tha. .par is pyar men sb kuch hojata hai.
Saleel:buht pyar krti ho.
Geet:buht se bhi zyada.
Saleel:aur wo?
Geet luked at him wid a grin:wo tumhara best friend hai u better know.
Saleel heart filled wid guilt,giving her a hopefull smile he excused himself as Wikram signalled him to show papers.While on his odd behaviour Geet remain confused.She checked her cell at da beep of msg from Maan"STAY IN MY SIGHT"
Her lips stretched in beautiful smile.She luked up at Maan who texted her even in gathered by other busnsman.For a moment his brown eyes met with her & she found herself melt in intensity of his gaze.She dreamily whispered:you love me alot!

Music was playing,glasses were clinking,chatters were echoing,flitrous gazes,fake smiles. . .a perfect buisness gathering.Her thoughts broke because of her ringing cell.Noticing India no. Flashing on it she immediately picked up:hello daddu?
She walked away from da noisy surrounding.The breathing from the other side made her eyes filled wid tears:bhai?
She walked to da other deserted side of pool:bhai mujhe pta hai ye aap ho,please kuch to bolo.
She added:kya aap mujhse ab bhi naraz ho.bhai mera yakeen kro men bilkul theek hun,buht khush hun.I miss u bhai.
To her disappointment da call cut.Brij threw away his cell & let his tears fall:i miss u too Geet.par tum ne aesa kyun kya?meri wja se tumhare sath sb galt hua men he sb theek krunga.men sb theek krdunga!

She wiped away her tears & noticed Rishi approaching.She instantly tried to walk away but he blocked her way:hey why r u ignoring me.ab to Maan k shares men mera bhi share hai.to celebration to bnta hai.
She luked him wid disgust & gave him final warning:look Mr.Rishi m not interestd in u & ur celebration.men yahan apni job ki wja se aai hun.Please mera peecha chod den.
Rishi brows knotted on her rude behaviour:tum yahan mere lye aai ho,mene kaha tha Maan ko tumhe yahan lane k lye.
Noticing sudden shock on her beautiful face he added:yakeen nhe aa rha?
He added wid a sacrastic laugh:dnt tell me u trust him..r u in love wid him.Maan Khuranna kisi se bhi pyar nhe kr skta.kis dunya men jee rhi ho tum?
Giving him hateful glare she started to walk away but he grabbed her by arm:tumhara problem kya hai?. .Maan k sath so skti ho to mere sath kyun nhi?I said naa i'll pay double.
Wid his cheap words his hand reached to her back.His touch broke all her remaining patience.She jerked away his hand & before he could reply her action..her delicate hand raised.
A hard,tigh slap stroke his face.She instantly regret her action as silence spread around da party.All shocked eyes glued on her including Maan.
She stepped back noticing da fire of anger on his face.He grabbed her arm which made her whinced in pain.Saleel stopped in his way & looked at Maan who was still rooted on his position.Than he decided to wait"aaj sch pta chl hi jana chahey. .mujhe apne dost ka,Geet ko apne Maan ka aur tumhe tumhare dil kaa"

Her eyes automatically went to him..her love,her life,her knight.But he seemed frozed,his hands curled in a fist,his eyes red in anger.
Rishi:how dare u..u bitc*.
Before her sob escaped from her lips Maan jerked away his hand from her.He was quite but his body vibrant in anger were visible to everyone.Rishi tried to recover his humilation:zbrdsti mere peeche pad rhi thi,mene mna krdya to drama krne lagi. .cheap sl*t.
Rishi fall on the drinks trolly near by in result of Maan hard punch.Terror spread around & Geet jumped back as broken bottles scattered around da floor.Rishi confused luked at him,wiping away his bloode lip:ye Geet..
He grabbed him harshly:naam bhi nhe lo ge ab!
Wikram,Natasha & few other people pulled away Rishi from his rib-breaking hits.Natasha yelled:how dare u Maan?tum is ladki k lye. .
"She is my wife" His statement open everyone eyes & mouth.
He roared:agr ab mene tumhara saya bhi Geet k pass dekha. I WILL KILL YOU RISHI. Go to hell..You & ur bloody contract!
Pulling her by arm he dragged her outside.All faces were tensed,shocked expect Saleel who had a full grin on his face.

On his harsh pull she spoke between sobs:Maan. .
"Just Shutup" Grabbing her both arm he barked in anger:Shutup,Shutup,Shutup.
Her delicate figure shook in his strong grip:tumhe kuch smjh nhe aata naa?ab aaya smjh men.
Her breath locked in her throat,her tears frozed in her big innocent eyes.Pushing her inside the car he drove away.

He unlocked da car & pulled her out.Still holding her arm he dragged her upstair to their room.Even dese passings minutes had not decreased his anger.Throwing her on bed he turned to walk away but his steps frozed in their way noticing blood stains on floor.
His heart sank,his skin turned cold,his eyes forgt to blink on da horrible thought.He turned to face her & found her still petrified.Benting on his knees he abruptly took out her sandal which was messed wid blood.Pulling up her legs she moved back on bed.While he desperately luked for da aid-box for her wound which she got from broken glass from party. Taking out da cotton & bandage he tried to hold her foot but she pulled away herself.For the 1st time he felt weak,weak enough to struggle wid words:t..tumhe mujhe btana tha. .I didnt knew
As he sat down on bed she hugged her knees closer to her.Still her eyes & lips silent to his madness.He couldnt state in words da worry her calm state in such pain was giving him."Geet tumhe dard ho rha naa?. .bolo.Why r u nt talking?"Holding her wid shoulders he yelled:speak up. .dammit.
It was not his loud voice which finally let her tears flow.It was warmth of his touch,worry on his face,fear in his deep eyes.With a loud hiccup she finally broke her silence:mujhse naraz mt hona..mujh par phir gussa kya to men mar jaungi"
Her little fists pulled him closer holding his shirt as his strong arms circled around her tightly.She cried in his protective arms which were translating his honest emotions;A truth dt the reason of his anger was not the lose of project but it was only for her...

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