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Part 28


Dadi didn't see her face fully , she gave a " what is this " look to maan .. and maan in return swallowed the lump in his throad .. he didn't want this .. he wanted a nice meeting with dadi , where he will present her as his life partner ..

On the other hand , anni who was watching the scene from the stairs , gave " all is messed up" look to maan .. their eye talk ended when geet said ,

" oh !! maam , maaf kijiye " [ oh mam!! sorry ] , she said , when she looked at dadi's face ..

Both recognize each other .. how can they forget ?? she helped dadi as her anckle got twisted and in return because of dadi she entered maan's birthday party

( FROM PREVIOUS PART , WHEN THEY MET )..

( savitri devi ( dadi) stepped out of the car , she had to park her car at a distance from mansion coz of long queue of car ahead , as she started walking , she stepped on a stone and ankle got twisted , " ahhh ," she held the car ...

geet was hiding behind the car , so that the coming person don't see her but hearing her plea she came out quickly ...

" what happened ?? are u alright ??" she came and asked in a concerned voice ... seeing her concern dadi didn't doubt her ..

" my anckle , it got twisted and paining .."

Ahh she knew it pains a lot ... in the beginning many times in jungle her anckle to got twisted

" tum , mera matlab hai aap , car main baithiye , main dekhti hun .."

" hum yaheen se doctor ko call kar lete hain , I coldnt walk "

" nahi ,yeh abi theek ho jay ga , aap bethiye to sahi " ..

Geet could see the royality in her persona and way of talking ... she insisted her to sit in the car .. as she sat on passenger seat , geet bent down to hold her feet , she moved away quickly ...

"nahi aap aisay ")

Dadi : " arrey aap !! .. " [ u ..]

Geet gave one of her beautiful smile , and she forgot that she had to settle some scores with anni

Geet : " main wo , jaldi main .. " [ i was ...in hurry ]

Dadi : hum ne pehlay hi kaha na .. koi baat nai .. par aap yahan kaisay ??" [ i told u already .. its ok ... but u here?]

Geet : aap??? [ u ??]

Dadi : sab btaatay hain , pehlay ander to aao .. sub yahan khaday khaday kaisay bta dain , aap ko sorry aur thank u b bolna ha .. [ i will tell u everything , first come in .. i have to say sorry and thank u too]

Now maan and anni shared " whats going on " look , as maan lifted his brows and so did anni ... so much confused with the situation they waited for the next ..

Both dadi and geet settled on sofa , while anni and maan felt ignored ...so joined them

Maan : dadi , hum b hain .. aap hmain to bhool hi gayi .. itne din baad aai aur achay se mili b nai [ dadi , i m also here .. u forgot us ]

Dadi : maan beta , aap ko kaisay bhool saktay hain [ how can i forget u ... ].. she got up and hugged him.. " kaisay hain aap ?" [how r u ?]

Maan : main bilkul theek hun dadi .. [ i m perfectly fine dadi ]

Anni : aur main b theek hun dadi ... aap ne to poocha hi nai [ i m also fine dadi , u didnt even ask me ]

Dadi : hum abi aap k kamray se hi aay hain anni , aur aap bol rahi the k maan kisi important meeting main hain ??[ anni , i just came from ur room ..and u were saying maan has an important meeting ]

Anni : haan dadi wo .. important ... dat .. I mean meeting

Maan : haan !! wo meeting time se pehlay hi end ho gai .. [ dadi !! meeting ended before time ] giving a disappointed look to geet ..

Dadi : acha ha , hum aaj hi aay hain .. sath main thoda time spend kar lain gay ... [ its good , u will spend some time with us ]

Geet was silently watching the trio drama , she liked the way they all were interacting just then Raj also joined ...

Raj : maan bete ..

Maan got up and hugged him ..

Maan : dad !! how r u ... ??

Raj : all fit beta .. how about u ?? and whats going on maa !!

Maan : everything fine with me dad !! ... Just having little chat ..

Raj who already met anni and now maan , noticed the different face , geet ...

Raj : maan bete yeh ??? .. he pointed towards her ... geet got to know he is asking about her .. she got to answer ..

Anni , Maan : dad yeh ...

They said together , looked at each other and got silent for a second .. but before they speak Dadi said

Dadi : raj bete , I told u , in the plane , about the girl whom I brought in the party ...

Raj gave a confused look

Dadi : same girl who helped me too as I was unable to walk ..

Raj : oh yes , I remember ,,

Dadi : she is the one who helped me , I brought her into the party but couldn't give her time due to guests .. but now she is here we will surely talk

Raj smiled ... maan and anni shared " all is set " , look ... while geet to smiled ...

Maan (ST ) .. so junglii has already settled the cards .. I don't have to do anything ... that's y I love u dear ...

Raj : maan bete y r u smiling ??

Maan quickly hid his smile : nothing dad !! just met u after so long that's y .. I m so happy

Geet examined his face and muttered ''Jhoota'' [ liar] under her breath ..


Raj : hmm .. I m also very happy .. We will have family time after long duration

Maan and raj started their own business chat.n discussed about upcoming party which would be thrown by their business assosiate.. dadi n anni too participated in between .. While Geet was all bored , she wasn't at all interested in business thing ..

...

Just then her phone rang , probably the first call on her new phone , which bj gave her before going ... She checked .. It was bj ...thanks to her stars , she was out of the business chat ..she excused herself and went upstairs ...Maan noticed ... Dadi gave a mysterious look ..how she was roaming in mansion .. Anni cleared her doubt abt her being brij handa's sister n her friend ... Dadi was happy as she liked her ...

After few minutes , raj has to go out ..so he went off .. Maan wanted to talk to Dora , he made an excuse n went upstairs ..

Anni n dadi were left .. Dadi noticed how eagerly Maan wanted to go ...

Dadi : anni what's going on ???

Anni ; what dadi ??

Dadi : what going on in between these two ??

Anni : dadi u r so fast ... I thought would give u surprise but u already noticed ..

Dadi was excited now : so I m right .. Tell me ...

Anni : what can I tell , let's go , n capture their private moments

.. ,...

Here ,geet kept talking to Bj for few minutes , she was in anni's room .. maan kept waiting , as she finished the call , and was going down , maan held her elbow and dragged her in his room ... dadi and anni saw that but to their bad luck maan shut the closed the door

Dadi : uhh !! bad luck

Anni : no problem I have much recording for u .. lets go ..

Inside the room )

Dimag kharab ha kia ??

Maan : What ????

Seedhe muh se nai bol sakta mere kamray main aao .. assay koi lata hai kya ?? [ cant u say straight , that come to my room .. is it the way ]

Maan : tumhain seedhi baat samajh main aati ha?? [ do u understand straight things ?]

Kia matlab ha tera haan ?? [ what do u mean ??]

Maan : wese ho to tum badi smart .. [ u r very smart]

Haan wo to main hun .. [ i know that ]

" dadi ko badi asaani se impress kia ??" [ how easily u impressed dadi]

Impress ??? main yahan koi drama wali bahu banne to nai aai k teri dadi ko impress karun haa ?? [ impress? i m not drama bahu who came to impress ur dadi ]

Kia karun main is pagal ka .. [ what should i do with this mad girl ]

Tu ho ga pagal .. chalti hun main ab [ u r mad ..i have to go ]

Suno to ... [ listen]

Haan suna ??? [ yes !!]

He came close .. ..

Har waqt mujh se dur kun bhaagti ho haan ? [ y u keep running away from me always ?]

Aur kia beth k tuje dekhti rahun ?? mera chand sa hero ... boht kaam ha muje , bj aaj wapis aa rha ha .. muje mansion jana hai abi [ hero i cant see u whole day , have lots of work .. bj is coming back ]

" abi ?? tum chali jao gi ?? [ now ?? u will go back ??]

" haan .. she gave him confused look ... he looked sad .. she felt something parting inside ?? .. his question felt heavy .. she understood him so well that his one expression could make her understand everything ...

" muje drop karne jay ga ??" .. though she decided to go with anni but don't know y asked him suddenly ...

" hmm !! " .. he said half heartdly ... she spent whole three days in mansion and maan was around her almost all the time .. and what can be better then having quality time with ur loved one ??

Both came down .. geet told anni about bj and her going back .. while dadi exchanged greetings , with the wish to meet her again ...

Anni : I will say driver to drop us , I will also go ..

Maan : its ok anni I will drop .. that was straight .. he didn't make excuse ..

Dadi : maan bete aap ?? dadi pretended that she don't know anything ..

Maan : hmm I have to pick some important papers from brij .. so I will drop her too ..

Dadi ( st).. good excuse ... .

Ok beta drop her carefully . maan nodded and both went off... dadi and anni smiled ... both were happy as he finally found someone as his life partner ...

Maan dropped her at her mansion and left saying

" come for the party tomorrow with brij "😛



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Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Part 29


Party was at full swing ... geet convinced brij to accompany him for party and he didn't refuse too . he wanted her to go out , meet people and enjoy herself ..

But both were waiting for their special someones ... bj for anni and geet for maan ..

Just then maan entered, he has his own aura ... people seek his attention ... once everyone would stop doing their chaos and will give a look .. He looked handsome ... geet saw him entering and the hall and murmured " hero " ... a smile crept his lips as he spotted her instantly as if heard what she said under her breath ...

Geet noticed bj smiling as anni approached them .. maan was stopped by some business associate ...

Anni : dora !!! kaisi ha ?? [ how r u dora ?]

Geet : bilkul pehlay jaisi ... bht pyaari .. aur bj b bht handsome ha ..hain na ?? [ i m very pretty as always ... and bj is also handsome right ?]

Anni : haan !! .. then she paid attention on her question

Geet tiptoed and whispered in his ear

" dekha she too thinks u r handsome " ... and Bj knew he couldn't hide anything from dora .. she left them both alone and went to maan ..

maan had his own plans today, her girlfriend question shook him n he spent whole night thinking what if she don't love him ?? .. he remember how she missed him , how she respond to his hugs .. how her eyes shine when she see him .. with all this he came to the conclusion that she too love him , but didn't realize that yet ... so he decided to make her realize ...

The first thing came to her mind when he entered the party was to make her jealous and check how she reacts ... so he did the same ... he started talking with his PA , sasha ... geet saw her in the office .. as she approached them , maan said a bit loudly

" sasha it would be really nice if we go there together .. "

He was actually referring to the project site .. but what she heard was going with someone else , somewhere , not the full details

Sasha got a call and excused for a minute ... geet came and asked him

" who is she ?"

Maan smiled inwardly , his plan was working .. without asking anything she asked about her ...

" girlfriend " ... he just said a single word

" yeh teri girlfriend ha ??" .[ is she ur GF?] . geet gave her a mysterious look to her back ..she was standing at some distance

" haan , gf hai .. acchi hai na " [ yes ...is she good ?]

" haan !! ... " [ yes]

Just then the announcement for dance was done ... sasha was back and was standing with them right now ... she asked for dance and he accepted .. he wanted to make his plan work .. geet saw them going towards dance floor and then anni brij ...

As maan left , vivek nanda another young business man approached her for dance ..

" hey pretty lady !! dance ??? "

" nahi .. " [ no ] she replied straight .. his ego was hurt ..

" y ??"

" kaha na nahi to bus nahi " [ i said no means no !!] ... he got angry and left without saying ... now maan was on the dance floor with sasha , and adjusted himself in a way that he could see her

She saw him dancing with sasha who was throwing herself on him ... somewhere inside she felt broken ... something broke without creating any sound ... she didn't like seeing him close to anyone else ... but she couldn't complain ... she don't have the right to complain...something was creating a deep pain , but she learnt not to show her pain on her face ...

Maan saw her blank ... there was no expression ... he was afraid of this ... he wanted some expressions ... Jealousy love , anything but not this ... while dancing he twirled around , now facing his back towards her ...

she was not in good mood now ... she had the keys of bj's car so decided to leave and wait in the car ..

she left the main door and walked toward the car ... vivek nanda saw her leaving , and he decided to take his revenge as first he lost the bet from his fellow , coz he told him that any girl would dance with him and she refused bluntly ... secondly his ego was hurt ...

as she reached near the car he approached her

" why u said no for dance ?"

" meri marzi , tere ko kia problem ha ?" [ my choice ..whats ur problem ?] .. this was not the time someone mess up with her ..

" Problem ha , u refused vivek nanda .. what u think of urself haan ?? u think MSK will come and offer u to dance with him ??"

This hurt her .. her hero didn't offer her even once ... She didn't know whats hurting her , his not offering dance or him being dancing with other girl ... but right now she had to deal with another shi*

" tera problem kia ha ??" [ what is ur problem ?]

" tum ... tum ho problem .. u spoiled my day " ... he harshly grabbed her and pinned her to car

" leave me " .. she looked at him with blood shot eyes

" and if I don't ??"

" main ne kaha choro muje " [ i sad leave me ]

" nahi chorunga to kya karo gi haan ?? tum jaisi ladkian kar b kia sakti hain , ronay k ilawa " [ i will not leave ..then what will u do ?? girls like u cant do anything except crying ]

That was it ... she pushed him back ... it was so sudden that he stumbled backward ... she lifted her right leg and hit on his chest ... she was in bad mood , really bad mood and he messed up at wrong time ...

He was starled with sudden action

" how dare u " .. he moved forward to catch her shoulder ...

" btaati hun main tujhe , how dare I .. " [ let me tell u !! how dare i ]

She had enough karate practice , being sports girl and now was more smart in these things living in jungle for years .. and secondly he was alone ... as he moved towards her , she punched right on his cheek , second came straight to his nose making it bleed .. third one was in air when she heard

" kia ho raha ha yeh sub ???? [whats going on here]

Maan who didn't find his dora at her particular place ,left the dance floor and checked the full hall .. but didn't find her .. he wanted her to stay ..to realize her feelings and confess ... but that didn't happen ... giving him blank expressions ,she disappeard .. he finally asked his guard , who told him that madam went outside ..

But when he came to parking area , the scene was worth watching ... she first attacked and then back to back punches , if third one fell on his face , his nose bone would have been broken ...

So he shouted " kia ho raha ha yeh sab ?" [whats going on here]

He looked at her , she had blood shot red eyes , as if gonna eat someone alive ... as he came near ,vivek touched his nose and saw the blood wetting his fingers ...

" Mr khurana , don't interfare ... I will deal with her myself , I can deal with the girls like her in better way "

But maan paid no heed to what he said , he attention was towards her .. holding her shoulders , he asked " kia kar rahi thi tum ??" [ what were u doing ?]

" is ka dimag kharab ha , to socha zara setting kar dun " [ i was giving him a piece of mind]

vivek was gonna attack her listening to that , when maan's guard caught him .. maan ordered his guard to take him away ... and thought to calm her down

"he is a business man" .. he thought to explain her that such behavior isn't good at this place

" to kia karun main ?? jo wo kahay wo karun ?? [ so what can i do ?? i cant do whatever he says]

" aisa kia kaha us ne ??" [ what did he say ?]

" kia kaha , he held my shoulders tightly and was telling me that I m weak " .he was so angry .. how dare he misbehave with his love ... he would take great care of him ... but first calm his dora down ...

" ok calm down !! "

" haan ! main theek hun .. ab ja teri girl friend tera wait kar rahi ho gi " [ i m ok .. u must go .. ur GF will be waitng]

" aur tum kaha ja rahi ho ? [ and where r u going ?]

" Main car main bj ka wait karun gi "... [ i will wait for bj in car]

Sasha spotted them and came near ...

"MK , I need to leave .. if u allow me to ,... " she was asking as a PA , but geet thought she is asking as a GF ...

" hmm " maan nodded and sasha left ...

She became more sad .. it was hurting her to see him interacting so casually with someone else ...

" Muje laga tu sirf mera hero hai ,... sirf mera " [ i thought u r my hero .. only mine ] ... she whispered , in a low tone ..like talking to herself ..while maan heard that .clearly ... ??

Before he could react ,bj n anni came .. party was over and they couldn't talk anymore ... both left to their respective mansions .. but what she said , left a mark in his mind ...

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Thats all .. 😛... hope u guys like 😉...dont forget to hit like and comment 😉

Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Ab beech mn aagyi hn...toh edit above post or res again

Srry
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Originally posted by: vandy28

Ab beech mn aagyi hn...toh edit above post or res again

Srry

u r first for 😆
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Originally posted by: crazydream


Exams hai Tuesday tak..😭

best of luck 😛
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Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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Loveddd... Both the updates...
dadima as usual very much in her detectiveness ... Got the hint that something is between maan and geet... Maan tried to make her jealous... And as it was new foe her she felt something broken in her but couldn't get it but then she said it... That and maan too heard it... So obviously he will manofy his baby too... Waiting for more more maaneet scene..
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Originally posted by: abba12

u r first for 😆

haha...by mistke frst again😆😆
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Originally posted by: vandy28

haha...by mistke frst again😆😆

😆😆 chalo ab galti se hi first aa jaya karo 😆
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Originally posted by: doll.12

Loveddd... Both the updates...

dadima as usual very much in her detectiveness ... Got the hint that something is between maan and geet... Maan tried to make her jealous... And as it was new foe her she felt something broken in her but couldn't get it but then she said it... That and maan too heard it... So obviously he will manofy his baby too... Waiting for more more maaneet scene..

how to u find geet in action 😉???

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