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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream

I read the whole FF Must say its amazing, fabulous. U r an excellent writer.

Wat a concept. Very innovative n creative. Hats off to u to write this.

Starting was dhamakedar. Geet living in jungle, all alone, that's sad. But how she managed. She was very brave.
Helping Maan a lot. Maan amazed to see her lifestyle, clothing, diet. She is a pari. But understands she brings misfortune in other's lives.

Maan beginning to like her. He can't stay one day without her. the jungle romance was awesome.

Maan giving her gifts. Geet coming to see him. Their cup ke chup ke meetings , Maan's possessiveness n care all were bliss.
Maan ko special bday gift bhi mil gaya. it was passionate.

N Good that geet got her brother back. I m so happy for her. Maan restless as Geet not in jungle Kidnap kar liya.
Then had a tough time explaining to Brij n let her go.

Both are hiding from everyone. Chalo Annie ko bata chat gaya then she could help them in getting privacy.

Once again thank u for writing such a wonderful story, Exams going on is liye coudnot write much

thank u so much ..this is awesome review. .
Such reviews make me write more. .thanks alot 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank u so much for likes😉😉
reviews dena band mat karna , i cant reply all .. but i try to , if there is any question 😛
Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part : 26

Early morning maan got up as it was his exercise time , but his vest and tracks were in his room ,so decided to take them .. he entered his room and saw her sleeping ever so peacefully on his bed , hugging a pillow ... she was early riser , but as she slept late last night so couldn't get up ...

Morning cant get any better for maan ... his love was sleeping on his bed , hugging his pillow ,though he envied the pillow too ... it was his place .. "control maan " ..

Unknown of his own self he started walking towards the bed , and the other moment he was sitting beside her , tucking the hair strands behind her ears , which were blocking his view .. he saw a smile playing on her lips .. she stirred , tossed around and slept again

Maan didn't seem to get enough of her , but he had to control ... he was getting up up when she woke up n sat with a sudden movement , looked around suspiciously and then towards him

" kya hua ??" [ what ??]

"tu ?? itni subah mere room main ??" [ u ?? what r u doing in my room early morning ? ]

" yeh tumhara room nai ha baby , its mine " [ baby its my room , not urs]

then only she looked around and realized that , she is in his room ..

" y did u wake up ??"

" wo muje laga koi aa gya ha " [ i thought someone came to my room]

Now if she is awake maan was in a mood to tease her

" wese aaj raat bht achi neend aai " [ i had a peaceful sleep at night ] .. he said stretching his back on the pillow ...

" kun aisa kya tha aj raat main ?? " [ y ?what was so special ?]

" tum jo thi mere sath " [ u were here beside me ] saying so he winked ...

" kya ?? aik minute .. hum to ..wo raat ko kitchen main ..aur wo .." [ what ,? we were in kitchen last night .. and ..then ??]

" main btaata hun ... hum raat ko kitchen main the , and then u hugged me and u didn't seem to let go off me ... wese I don't have problem with that too "

Saying so he hugged her side ways .. and she was trying to recall when she didn't let him go ...

" but kya ha na , I couldn't stand there whole night , so tumhain yahan le aaya , and then I had a veryyy peaceful sleep here , WITH U .. " ... he stressed last words to check her reaction ..

but he got totally opposite .. she looked at herself , then at bed and then got satisfied ... didn't question him .. not anything .. he expected some reaction , but nothing like that came ... he wondered if she is ok sleeping with him like that ??

" theek ha , muje jaana chaiye anni ko main bed pe nai mili to wo pareshan ho jay gi ".[ ok i have to go now , if anni didnt see me beside her , she will be worried ] ( beta wo pehlay dekh chuki ha 😆😆)

. she tried to get up ..

" suno ... tumahin koi problem nai agar main tumharay sath so jaon ??? [ dont u have any problem if i sleep with u ?]

" hero !! muje pata ha tu ne kuch galat nai kia , na hi tu kuch aisa kar sakta ha .. " [ hero !! i know u wont do anythign wrong ]

Now his male ego was satisfied ... she trusted him .. that much ,even he slept beside her , he will not do anything wrong ... he will make sure not to break her trust ...

" aur wese b pehlay b to ..." .[ and earlier too ..] . she instantly cut it off , what was she gonna say ?? .. but maan heard it ..

" pehlay b ??" .[ before this ?] . he don't remember sleeping with her ..

" nai kuch nai .. main chalti hun ... " [ nothing i have to go]

She got up but he pulled her with a sudden , pull and as a result she landed on him ... he removed her hairs , which were covering her face ...

" pehlay b kia ?? muje nai btao gi ??" [ what ??wont u tell me ?]

" wo main ne ..." [ i ...]

" bolo na ... kya btana chahti ho ?? kia hua tha pehlay ?? [ hmm tell , what happened before this ?]

" tu muje galat mat samajhna ... Par wo , us raat jab tuje goli lagi to .. " .[ dont misunderstand me ,but that night when u were shot] , ..she looked at him for a brief moment ..

" to kia ???" [ then ?]

" ... u were shivering ... and ... and I slept beside u , "

Ohmmm!!! She slept beside him to provide warmth , for whole night ... and he knew how she was in her hut ... only in inners ... but he don't seem to have an image of that moment in his mind ... He felt someone beside him when he was unconscious but now he so wanted to feel her presence ,along with the memory to cherish ... there he wanted to tease her but now it was getting out of control for him only

Seeing his expressions , geet thought he is angry at her ... ...

" I didn't know what to do that time .. so I did that ,... ... but promise I .. I ... didn't mean to ... "

" shh !! main ne kuch kaha ?? " [ shh! did i ask anything?] ... maan didn't like it , that she felt he will question her dignity ...

" as u didn't question me , I will never question u too ... I TRUST U .. "

She beemed with happiness , he trust her ..there was another relationship named "TRUST "built between them today ...

thank u ..she muttered slightly

Just then anni barged into the room , as the door was slightly open , coz maan didn't close it while entering ... looking at bed she quickly tunred around and said

" main ne kuch nai dekha " [ i havent seen anything]

Its when they realized , what an awkward position they r in ... She was completely laying on him , with her legs entangeled with his , and half of her hairs were on the front side covering maan's face , giving the view to the on looker , that they are kissing ...

Their eyes met and then she quickly got got up , feeling embarrassed ...

" sorry ... I will come later " anni said , and was about to go when geet called her

" anni ... " .. then she turned , having a mischevious smile on her face ... looking at their faces trying to point out , the signs of kiss ... but there was no one ...

" seems like bhai has been really gentle to her ... no mark ... ... thats so sweet ... but they r going so fast yaar " she thought to herself ...

They both looked at her confused ... whats the reason of her mistery smile ?? both knew her well !! maan being bro and she being friend .. there must be the reason beind this ..

" anni why r u smiling " both spoke in unison .. and then looked at each other

While anni's smile widened ... " wow , they think same too , awesome ... they make a fab couple ... so now dora will b my bhabi ...huff !! how will it feel calling ur childhood friend bhabi ?? no no .. I will call her dora only ... "

"anniii !!! whattt ???? " maan shouted to bring har back to senses ...

She walked towards the bed and sat leioursly " bhai !! mana k main ne ap ka PRIVATE MOMENT kharab kar dia ,, but that doesn't mean u will shout at me " [ bhai !! i spoiled ur private moment , but that donot mean u will shout at me ]

Maan noticed the extra stress on private moment ... he didn't know what his sister is actually thinking ... but geet was in action ... ...

" anniii !!! ... Hum ne kuch nai kia " .[anni we didnt do anything] .. she screamed and threw a pillow direct on her face , which she caught in time ..

" calm down dora!! .. main ne kab kaha tum ne kuch kia ?? sirf morning kiss hi to ki " [ calm down dora ! i havent said u did something .. it was just morning kiss]

" morning kiss ??" ... both shared an intense gaze ...

Geet's jaw dropped open ...

"anniii !! tu to gai ,, " and this was it , anni ran and geet behind her, in the whole room , jumping and shouting like kids ... and maan admired both girls lovingly ...

...


lo chota sa update ..abi format karti hun , 😉 .. next wala thoda bada kar lun gi hain na 😉 , wese my episode bank is decreasing , m left with 68 pages gotta type next ..


Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
🥳aaj vandy ko peech chodke main aagay aagayi🤣 yeh cheating bilkul bhi nahi hai..
haaye haaye trust bhi aagayi inodno ke beech..that's the really sweet relation they have.. they both are totally different in their own world.. hero feeling happy to see his baby sleeping on his bed.. poor hero kya kya socha tease karne se pehle.. par usko ulta jawab mila😆yeh annie tho indono se bhi bohut aagay horahi hai... dekho kya kya sochne lagi hai indono ko dekhkar.😆

ab next part lamba wala zaroor dena😉
Edited by priya111111 - 10 years ago
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baad mein hassna dil kholkar.. pehle update dedo😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
sachi tujh se 2 min contrl nhi hota nah...tu chahti hi nhi mn frst aau...
sachi u r save from me as u away frm me else my mukka would love to meet ur face😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vandy28

sachi tujh se 2 min contrl nhi hota nah...tu chahti hi nhi mn frst aau...

sachi u r save from me as u away frm me else my mukka would love to meet ur face😆

i just res the post after telling u ... 😆
and didnt even mention that m updating ..
phir b priya frist aa gai 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



baad mein hassna dil kholkar.. pehle update dedo😆😆😆

u made me laugh 🤣
updating in 5 minutes
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

i just res the post after telling u ... 😆

and didnt even mention that m updating ..
phir b priya frist aa gai 😆

ohh toh wrtr res kyu krta h post...
n bas mesg drop kiya n bhag li udhr se...u know i was writing nah n not chkn mesg...

bhagwan tubelight kyu di mujh...

ab toh mn kabhi b nhi aungi teri stry mn frst n mn apne mn b nhi aane dungi😆

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