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Part 3

Camping and yet Geet and her memory surface; ofcourse it had something to do with Hoshyarpur. I'm glad though he is asking the right question, cause in the show he still seemed unaffected of why's and how's which is stupid considering how affected he was by the woman so naturally one would like to know why would someone, out of all people her own brother want to kill her. So I am glad you're doing all the thinking on behave of the CVs lol

Part 4

What Dev did was inhumane on so many different levels, though you did an exceptional job of trying to change views and I do feel a certain pull for him and Naintara but still haven't managed to forgive them. They spoilt a girls life, had Maan not been there she would have been dead, so regardless of the pain and suffering they suffered that's no excuse, well I don't buy it anyway, sorry Bing

Her dreams both integrated with hope and despair, how sad? I like how you're showing the mental side, because in Geet she was changed overnight, I mean there was a scene here and there, as if just remembering she's been chested to the worst degree, that too at 18, an age of innocence I believe.

To know she reckons shes lost that chance with Maan is disheartening, so I was so glad when Maan pursued her and she wasn't exactly a hard task either lol

Part 5

To read of her everyday life, her life which was so spoilt yet shes trying to make ends meet. The confusion of falling in love yet somehow knowing you're not worth it. Its unfair, shes undeserving of it all. Shes trying to find that piece of mind, and change in place helped, I suppose

Part 6

I love that the rain comes with Maan, I wonder how he absorbed her reality, what where his thoughts, his actions; was he broke, was he disheartened to not be her first like in the show but I doubt it here since you've kind of established it already in later parts. But I really wanted to see how he deals with it first-hand though I know he was angry like you stated. But im happy his this man of steel for Geet. Its like nothing affects him other than Geet that is lol

After a month they hug again, aww and now the eyes she saw on the photograph are for her, those emotions and those feelings, she deserves it all. He kissed her hand, that's a cute gesture and a slow advancement towards the her

Part 7

Shes absorbed into him, though I don't blame her. Her minds a muddle atm and he coming after a month with a slight different look couldn't have helped. Shes lost and thankfully Rishi helped, he sounds nice btw. Fear or lust, it's a mix of both lol

Part 8

More coffees, I mean come one man! Lol. Was its due to Geet avoiding or Geet hugging, one can only wonder lol. Living in the same house as her, feeling those feelings and yet trying to maintain a safe distance must be hard, and all the more hard knowing she was wronged by some creep. I love the emotions you have brought into both of them

Part 9

Heavier conscience, I had hoped and we sort of saw in Geet too, but he in the show he didn't have that graph which you have created. I found it easier to forgive, maybe not entirely but to see Dev and Naintara as humans when in Canada compared to criminals, I suppose you brought about that change. At first I was left wondering whats between the two, Dev obviously likes her yet shes at distance but then she was apart of the ploy, I wonder who came up with the plan but both enacted their role and fooled an innocent teen. It must be hard to measure upto Maan, he seems remarkable and not everyone is destined for greatness and some are plenty happy with just the good. I suppose Dev's downfall was pre-destined and hence the bad decision making on his side. In wanting to mark up to his sibling he committed an inexcusable crime.That being said, i really dont get how Naintara didnt allow her mind to leave Dev or atleast stop him from the crime, both dont seem like that then why? why really? and how?

I am really trying hard to get them but the pain and hurt on Geet's side is making is really hard for me

And you should know i love my Geet lol

Part 10

Room relocated to the sun itself lol, why drink then? And so much? I liked there was none around, atleast now Geet can't hide from Maan and allow space for growth, their relationship that is lol. Their very interaction is pure bliss, I love it. I really like this Maan, I'd probably tell you later too, but I love his sarcasm, the man sure can kill with that attitude lol but it's the way he delivers, makes one forget her hues, her because I know he is like that only with her lol. It was a tough game indeed

Part 11

Is that a tell-tale of how she feels, at first I wished Maan stumbled upon her journal and then figured they did just fine without it. It is indeed weird how humans can find home anywhere as long as the heart is in peace, look at her who would have thought a different town, far from city life (it sounds like the country side to me), oh sorry not home, home is in his embrace lol. But peace and the rain follows, with rain comes romance I see lol

Part 12

Pinky is a much needed friend in her time of need but then it was kind of shocking that they left just like that, but I liked pinky's father, he really did treat Geet well and tried also to wedge that gap between father and daughter. He is a man of heart, I loved that about him, in the show and your tale

Part 13

Guilt isn't that strange really, it's a microbe that slowly eats away the being inside. Very hard to live with, almost toxic for which he'll need meds. In this case a closure, only then would it leave him alone. He needs to know what happened to Geet, what consequences he brought about in her life due to his stupid and selfish actions.

Though it must be hard to give up a life and life another, and then I suppose he also knew what his mother and father did were wrong on Maan and his mother. Which I reckon is the cause of this relationship, there was respect, admiration and even love but no connectivity, sad really.

Part 14

I know her life needed exposure, the tale of Geet is so close to my heart. Honestly before Geet I didn't even know it was happening. I mean I live on the other side of the world, where girls (some) marry men from abroad, bring them over and then those men leave them once they get their citizenship usually leaving the woman with a broken heart and a family, its horrible really to think of the girls, everywhere going through grief. That being said not all are like that, but most are, even if some if not most were married to relatives from abroad. Anyway im just glad the Asian families have now gained a better understanding and aren't forcing or even thinking of marrying their young children off to their relatives, a lot has changed with time. I'm glad it has, most of my eldest sisters friends are married to people abroad, and now when I see all my friends married to people from here or there loves form here, it makes a pretty picture. It must be hard to adapt, to accept and then he just leaves. Thankfully my family weren't the same, although my eldest sister ended in a broken marriage it was still with a man she could connect with and with no language barrier. Anyway sorry for the waffle.

Ahh so that's how she ends at the outhouse, I think this prospect. Dadi's identity is still unknown but she knows how to invest in that lol. An unwanted occupier, I wonder how man would feel about that lol. Oh dear, here comes my fav scenes, I loved the outhouse so much, it was pleasure to reread it all with a different view. Maan's a thief, I wonder how'd he take that lol

Part 15

A soccerpunch landing in a scratch, why am I not surprised? Lol. SO the eye lock is there I presume, shall I insert the mahi, should I take that initiative lol. Like the first time I was reading this with one hand on my face, like I was watching through my finger, I was all sqeezy hearing or reading Geet make the folly of calling it her house and the whole contract thing, blimey if only she knew Maan was Dadi's grandkid lol

Oh btw I loved this sarcastic Maan, he should knew how to turn to its end, totally in his favour. I loved him, slightly even more than him in the show, like how lol.