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heyaaa Guys.. Suprised???? to see me??
😆 😆


I knw i wasnt active here from sooo lonng.. But today i had to come...

today is very special day for me...and for my readers too...

I dunno how many of u guys remember But today is first anniversary of this story...

yes its exactly...One year to this story...

I want to thank each and every reader of mine who has been supportive...towards this story..

its just your love...which has made this story...

This ishqiya is my baby and thanks to u all its his first Birthday... 😳


So as a celebration...i will update this story... with a twist..in the tale...Hope u all like it...


Once again guys Wishing u all happy ishqiya Anniversary


And yes special thanks to priya for making this beautifull and stunning banner ...






Part 32

"Maan take care... and drive safe.." Vihang said... as Both of them escalated down the staircase. Maan had received their client invitation...for a business party in London.. Which wasn't possible to avoid.

So they decided that he will attend the party.. Vihang suggested Maan to take geet with Him.. since he did not want to miss Shilpi' s Sangeet ceremony today.

Maan nodded his head... he was dressed in black white white Jacket...(Kurban Hua dress code) ...

Both were waiting for geet... And then she arrived...

As soon his eyes fell on her.. his heart nearly stopped... she was appearing like a angel..descending down from heaven...in her White sari..

Maan blinked his eyes...to capture her image in the farthest corner of his heart... eyes on the floor... rosy cheeks...and trembling lips... She seemed Divine !!

Since she wore lenses he was able to glimpse them clearly ...

Shlipi..and geet...stood next to Maan and Vihang.. She started cribbing to maan about not attending her sangeet... He maan was in his own world...

Vihang seem to notice this trance look...he cleared his throat to gain his attention..

"sorry...umm...' Maan uttered. Looking away..

Both bid bye to vihang and shilpi and drove away ..

The journey was a awfully silent.. Geet was apprehensive attending the party with with...Him she couldn't deny Vihang when he pleaded her ...

She was lost in her own misery... Maan's behavior to the previous incident...and then the morning one

Flashback..

Geet was passing by the corridor when she heard maan's angry voice...

She pushed back her glasses and decided its better to leave...

But before she could exit...she heard him say " Yes...Sam bas kuch months aur"

Her head shook up hearing those words... Unnecessarily her mind framed his words...and connected them to their divorce..

Tears...rushed in her honey brown eyes...making them blurry...

FlashBack Ends

Maan peeped sideways to glimpse her... She had placed her head..on the edge of the window...lost in her thoughts..

Maan sighed... The more he tried to loosen things between them the more it got complicated... yesterday's incident was still fresh in his mind...

He still couldn't dig out his true feelings for Chasmish...though his heart... Was at peace only around her...

He knew he had made umpteen mistakes..in the past... But he was ready to redo everything for her sake... Just to gain her forgiveness...

But he wanted to be sure on his part... and he almost knew..Now that his feelings for chasmish were real..

Today when samira called him up regarding...one modeling assignment she wanted to purse..with his influence... He just said..it will be done it few months... And that's It their call ended..!

He could now understand the difference in his relationship with samira and with geet ...

Lost in their thoughts...both...looked forward nevertheless to the party...they were heading ..

They arrived at their destination... And both got down..

As maan was walking with chasmish on his side.. he could feel himself getting nervous... The Great MSK who was King of business he owned... Was nervous..to have her by his side.. It was officially first time.. they will be attending a party as MR.and MRS.Khurana

Though he dint inform geet about it.. the client had called up and first congratulated...Him on his marriage... He requested him to get his wife in the party along with him... thus he made so many fake reasons..to bring her with him today.. Moreover it was his selfishness to have her as his...for a night..

Geet got startled with the warmth of his fingers with...settled between hers... She looked up at maan who was looking ahead...But tighten his hold...

Her mind went..blank... she was confused, jumbled with his behavior... Maan dint say a word..because he dint feel to give a reason to her ..

As they entered the party...the client greeted them... And he made the announcement.

"Welcome... Mr. and Mrs.Khurana..."

Her eyes widened...hearing the announcement. And she clutched his arm..in fear..

Maan smiled...to the client.. and caressed her palm.. She almost took back her hand...

"Maan...Sir...yehh..yeh...Maine...nai...who.." She mumbled... When the client left... She thought he must be...considering this to her fault...and will definitely..burst out in anger... She looked down...and tried..removing her hand from his hold...

But Maan tighten his hold... He leaned in closer...to her...Making her heart pace wildly..

"I knw..Mrs.Khurana..." His whispered huskily...in her ear...before...Wrapping his hand along her waist..and pulling her closer..

She looked up at him in pure bewilderment...

"Maan...sir...yeh..." She muttered... Trying to pull out of his hold...

"Mr.Khurana..there is some one I want you to meet.." their client interrupted...Them..

Maan cursed his client inwardly...while geet thanked...him... Once he let out the hold loose...she slipped away.. Maan knew she was...bemused and confused...So he let her go..

She went to a lone corner...trying to digest everything that happened...Mrrs.Khuarana this word...gave her goosebums...

Maan kept one eye on her...while talking to his clients...

After a while..he noticed...geet missing... He excused himself...and rushed to find her..

" yeh chasmish...kaha chali gayi...'

He was very worried now... Its been 20 minutes..since he is searching her...but she was no where to be seen...

He found this fishy..his gut was telling him something is wrong...

He decided to go back in the car park and hunt her ...

While he was going he heard someone's murmuring...

Inquisitive to knw..to source...he moved in that direction...

He reached a lone dark corridor...and could view...Something shimmering in white... He probed ahead...and saw...geet... His eyes widened..seeing her..

Two goons had captured her...and she was struggling...

"geeettt" he roared... And marched towards them...

Geet looked at him with teary eyes... One goon had...tied her hands and mouth with a cloth...while the other was holding a knife..to her neck...

" Maan Singh khurana we were above to find you..." They smirked...

Maan gritted his teeth...and attacked...them...But all of a sudden..A third goon came and attacked...Him..

" leave.me..." he violently struggled...But they had captured him too.. He was boiling in anger...

One goon asked the other " Should we leave this chick...she isn't our look out..we just need MSK" geet looked at maan fearfully... Maan struggled...once again screaming" dare u touch my wife... U don't knw who you r dealing with " He spoke arrogantly... His eyes turned more angry..

"Just shut up" one goon yelled... He held his finger...one her cheek...and smirked..." she is good..i guess we should have some fun with her...and then Kidnap Msk" Geet closed her eyes in disgust... She wasnt in a state to make out their words... she was trembling in fear..

" no wayyy" he groaned...His emotions in addition to the anger...coursed through his veins and he couldn't take It he kicked...The third goon holding him... Kicked him soo hard that he landed on the floor...

Geet too hit the other goon holding her..and began fighting him,..

The second goon attacked maan...but this time..Maan punched him...He was furious...so he...kicked him...real hard...

His hand raised to punch him again...but his actions paused..hearing the bullet roar...

"ummm" geet mummed..

His eyes...widened..hearing the Gunshot

Maan left the goon...and turned...

"geeettt" He screamed...and dragged himself..towards her..

She held her waist...feeling blood oozing out ...

"geeet" Maan captured her in his arms...as her body fell...

The goons...ran away ...taking this opportunity..

She blinked...again and again trying to keep here eyes open..." gettt" Maan patted her cheeks..." no..geet please...look at me..." His voice trembled...as he held her fragile body in his arms...

maan maaan..." She murmured. Before...her eyes closed on their own...

"geet..." His eyes watered..finding her eyes closed...His hands cupped her cheek...

"geet open your eyes..geet" He hugged her to himself...before her picking up and running towards his car...

He called for taxi...got in immediately...

"geet geet I promise I wont let anything happen to u "

He kissed her forehead... And closed his eyes...

"please take me to the hospital" He pleaded...

He was feeling the end of the world... His hearth thumping out loudly...crying...

" I wont let u go...I wont " he kept ranting til they reached hospital..

Hospital

"doctor how is she..how is my wife??" maan questioned him...as soon as the doc came outside...

For the first time.. He felt..Blank..Like there was No universe..now world..existing for him..

"relax MR.khuarana she is fine..the bullet did not hit her she fine..she just fainted due to trama...she had a trauma attack she will be alright..."

Maan sighed... For once he thought he..nearly lost his life when he found her in his arms...

" Mr.khuarana..yes your lucky to have a wife..who loves u soo much.. throughout she kept uttering your name.. since she got a little stable...so please meet her she is sleeping though'

Maan's heart swelled in pride hearing that... he thanked the doctor and moved inside to meet geet..

He entered the room...and his eyes fell on the angel...lying on the bed..

He recalled the beauty which descended form stairs today... and now..she seemed so lifeless...

He wiped his tear...as he sat next to her on the chair...

He stared the lady lying before him..so lifeless... His hand raised on their own accord... . he traced her cheeks...which were wet..indicating she was still crying...

His throat was choked... He couldn't thank the almighty to have bought her in his life.. He later realized that she actually came forward to take to bullet for him...

What good had he done to deserve such a princess in his life?? His fingers shivered while...he traced them on her face...

He caressed her forehead...lovingly... " now I knw..why dad said I m lucky to have you chasmsish.."

He held her hand softly...and kissed it...

She was lying there with closed eyes...

" I have been such a jerk...to you..since we got married... I wont say sorry because I knw its not worth it..."

"But...chasmish" He placed his hand on her forehead.." I promise.. I promise...I will never let you go... Never..." He clenched his eyes...recollecting the ache his heart when through...in last few hours...The words came straight through his heart into a whisper...yet they were powerful...

" I wont let you go ever...ever..." He vowed...and leaned in to press his lips on her forehead... His heart was...blooming in love...he wished to shower on her.. But he knew..he will have to wait for the right time...


But now with his pretty chasmish in his arms..he could not just move away..

Unable to resist ...he leaned in once again and pressed his lisp lightly on her lips...silently sealing the promise with the kiss..

He sighed still kissing her lips... His eyes dropped close...feeling pure bliss. He moved his lips on her eyes...One by one..

He knew once she is conscious it will be impossible to make her understand his feelings.. but Now it was his turn to be patient ...She had proved her love to him.. he was blind not to see it.. But he wont let it happen again... he knew she is deeply hurt... But he will do all to redo everything again..and make her fall in love with him..

He held her hand...and adjusted on his seat ...

Smiling a little...he gripped her hand in his...continuing to glimpse the angel lying before him..


how was it??

Fingers crossed...Hope so u guys like it ..

waiting for your Comment 😳

Edited by crazy_sweta - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...really amazing...the twist is the most amazing part...finally maan has realised his love for his chashmish...i m so happy firm thm...geet was in so much pain due to maan...now maan will try to seek forgiveness from geet n thn there all gile chikwe saab khatam hojayenge...n everything gonna be all ryt...woohoo...just waiting for the nxt update...plz give it soon dont delay like before...i miss ur uodates...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
😲 u updated ...

great ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi sweta
congrats for the birthday of ishqiya..
great update
maan realised hislovefor geet ..after facing difficulties he accepted that he can't leave his chashmish who is his life now ..
love the way maan was at hospital ..confessing his heart to geet ..

thanks for update ..hope that u will now update it regularly

waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
firstly happy ishqiya anniversary swetaa... what an update yaar.. 👏👏👏now he realised his love towards his chashmish,,when he was going to loose her because of goons... its really tough time for maan to win his love ... geet totally lost the battlle and now she is in the verge of leaving maan... it will be difficult for geet to trust maan and his feelings... lets see how he gets succeeded in winning geet's love.

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