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The Bliss




The simple things of life can be blissful, if you can take the time to enjoy it. There is love in the air, everywhere... you just need to feel it, embrace and enjoy all that life has to offer.

Every moment that is enjoyed, treasured and relished is a store house of memories, that you can draw out, enjoy and smile with love. It is bliss..


Oh sweet bliss how did you find me in the dark with all my troubles

collecting like copper pennies in a fountain,
under pain concrete form,
a flower breaks
through the crack of my once solid shell.

Stay with me bliss ,
never leave me again,
for my need is great and my patience is plentiful.
Oh lessons I need not learn again,
forget where I have been.

Let me walk in the sweet embrace of a Sunday's morn
and not forget it tender kiss of compassion
for God had granted me another day with you.
Hold me in the arms of your unfolding grace
and we will put back all the fallen stars in the sky...


.

Note..

This a fiction , all incident , medical terms , professional terms nd places r imaginary ,, plzz don't relate them with reality .


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 64



Part - 65 ( Last Part )

When we get small happiness after a long suffering that seems like heaven ,, our hard time taught us many things ,, it tests our relations nd bonding ,, showed us d real faces of ppl ,, make us tough to face difficulties in future bcoz time nd our patience taught us to keep faith in god nd ourselves ,, these things increase d value of happiness.

All spent a beautiful time in P,chery ,, visited beaches nd places ,, Yash showed d new plant of KC to all ,, it was almost ready , only machinery wr settling down ,, Yash was checking all d things personally nd having meeting after meetings with staff discussing on present nd upcoming plans ,, Maan was awed seeing his dad's stamina ,, he was managing all d business so well nd gave his full time in taking care of him too ,, his eyes turned wet seeing his Dad's hard work nd passion for work .

Yash was showing nd describing him all d things related to all dept ,, he introduced Maan to all his staff ,, every nyt at dinner time nd later Maan nd Yash had a good talk over business ,, Maan asked many Qs nd Yash replied happily seeing his interest ,, before coming back Maan expressed his wish to help his dad to give him some rest or help nd that was a dream comes true for Yash nd Ruchi .

Maan: Dad , cn i share some responsibilities of this proj with u ,, I want to help u ,, it's very near to nd I cn visit here easily nd not only this I want to settle down Adi here ,, he cd be a big help for us after learning work .

Yash nd ruchi beamed ,, DM nd Geet wr surprised .. Maan wanted to join business !!! Kamal ho gaya !!

Yash: Maan ,, It was my dream to see u besides me beta nd lastly God blessed me ,, I m so happy today ,, u r welcome in KC beta ,, I want to give u full responcibility of this proj , nd yes Keep Adi with u , it'll be good for u nd him.

Maan: Thanks , but I cn't handle it all alone ,, plzz stay with me , I need u ,, I want to give u some rest helping u in this ,, at least u don't have to run again nd again here .

Yash: don't worry , I m with u if u need ,, but what do u want after finishing ur research work ? r u not coming back Delhi ?

Ruchi: Maan plzz ab to aa jao ghar ,, I want a big Pooja to thank God , nd a big party ,, it was a happy time for d family after long.

DM: yes , Maan , I m too backing Ruchi.

Geet was listening their talks with smile but her heart saddened at d name of Maan's return to Delhi ,, she looked at Maan nd passed a smile then averted her eyes ,, Maan noticed d pain in her eyes .

Maan: Dad -Mom ,, u all know that I promised to help Geet which she asked me , but after coming here too she was only giving her time to finish my work nd lacking in her work , that B****** dev Malhotra was her mentor nd now she has to wait for new prof .

Yash , Ruchi nd DM: Oh !! .

Yash: Geet that BL**** was ur Prof ? , hope u got a good one this time , u cn aprocah to any other Prof Beta .

Geet: yes , but we r waiting ,, HOD Dr J assured us that he'll try to appoint a prof very soon .

Maan: in this situation I wanted to help her now , so that in these few days Geet cn cover up her pending work ,, that B****** was harassing her a lot nd she was lacking in her work dad ,, so I want to stay here ,, DM u cn visit Delhi if u r missing ur Gr8 G son ,, now I cn manage here nd Adi is with me ,, from here I cn look after this proj too easily .

Yash: hummm,, OK ,, for helping Geet I won't force u come right now ,, she gave her precious help to u nd now it's ur turn Maan to cover up her lose . ( Geet passed a smile mouthing thanku)

Ruchi: but promise me that u'll come Delhi with Geet when I'll call u .

Maan: OK, done , but keep ur settlement with Geet separately ,, keep me away from that .

Ruchi: haan -haan , don't worry , wo mujhe kabhi na nahi kahegi ,, ku geet .. na to nahi kahogi na ?

Geet bit her lip nd smiled : aunty , i'll try my best .

Ruchi: aunty ka dil tod dogi na kahaker ? nahi esa nahi kerna plzz .

Yash& Maan smiled nd whispered : drama queen .

Geet nodded in a No nd Ruchi gave her a side hug lovingly ,, after heartful talks all went to sleep in their respective rooms , but sleep was away from Maan nd Geet 's eyes ,, though Maan openly said to stay to help Geet ,but Geet felt bad that he was living here away from family bcoz of her , when all wanted to keep him with them ,, she was restless nd thinking ,, Geet came out from her room nd slowly walking in lawn ,, she was lost in her thoughts ,, not only Maan's but her life also taking a turn ,, she felt that her heart doesn't want to part away from Maan ,, d lil thought of going him to Delhi saddened her ,, she didn't know when Maan made his place in her heart , even he too have feelings for her nd openly expressed ,, she was amazed how time had changed .

Maan saw Geet in lawn from his window nd became worried ,, he came out nd find her lost in thought ... Geet ,, geet turned nd startled seeing Maan there .

Maan: what happened , why r u here , alone ?

Geet: aamm ,, nothing ,, wo I was thinking something .

Maan: any prob , looking tensed .

Geet: no, it's not like that ,, I m fine .

Maan: Geet if u r here alone , means there is deffo something nd bothering u ,, now come on nd tell me .

Geet: kya kahu ? essa kuch ...

Maan: cn't u share with me Geet ? don't u trust me ?

Geet: Maan plzz , essa nahi hei ,, I trust u a lot , I m sorry I hurt u ...

Maan : then why r u not sharing ur heart with me .( He pulled her close to him , lovingly adjusted her loose strends behind her ear ,, looking deep in her eyes with concern nd love .

Maan: bolo na Geet ,, ku nahi kahati mujhse jo dil mei hei ?

Geet : wo ,, wo ,, I m thinking about u .

Maan smiled naughtily : really ,nd what ?

Geet: wo ,, Maan all want to have u near them , but u r denying bcoz of me ,, I m feeling bad ,, plzz go with them ,, they all sufferd a lot nd now want some happiness having their son with them ,, u have to listen them Maan, they r ur parents nd love u a lot .

Maan: nd u ,,, don't u suffer for me Geet ? Don't u want me near u ?

Geet fumbled : wo ,, wo ,, I want to say that u cn come here to help me after spending some quality time with ur family ,, u nd DM wr away from all from long ,, DM won't go leaving u here alone ,, so go nd spent some time with ur family .

Maan: I m still with my family Geet nd here I have u too ,, i'll go Delhi but with u not alone .

Geet: Maan ,, how cn I go there every time ,, don't bound u bcoz of me .

Maan: don't u listen what dad nd mom said ? I'll stay here,, I think u don't like if I m staying here ?

Geet : I want u to be with me Maan , but ..

Maan: really ,, u want, then why this but ?

Geet: Maan , plzz I want ur nd ur family's happiness too .

Maan: geet , my happiness lies in u ,, I cn't live peacefully away from u ,, I told u clearly , nd don't worry , Mom & dad won't feel bad .

Tum apne dil ki kaho .. ..if u want to be with me then be with me without any fear .(he pulled her more close )

Geet meri har subha tum se shuru hoti hei aur sham tum per hi khatam .. fir mai kaise dur chala jau .

Geet: M a a n .

Maan: haan Geet ,, I love u ... I love u Geet .

Geet felt a shiver nd hugged him tightly overwhelmed .. M a a n , be with me always ,, be with me forever .

Maan: I'll Geet , I'll forever ,, u r my bliss Geet , stay with me , hold me . ( he pecked her forehead nd hugged her tightly ,, Maan pour out his wish )

Oh sweet bliss how did you find me in the dark with all my troubles

collecting like copper pennies in a fountain,
under pain concrete form,
a flower breaks
through the crack of my once solid shell.

Stay with me bliss ,
never leave me again,
for my need is great and my patience is plentiful.
Oh lessons I need not learn again,
forget where I have been.

Let me walk in the sweet embrace of a Sunday's morn
and not forget it tender kiss of compassion
for God had granted me another day with you.
Hold me in the arms of your unfolding grace
and we will put back all the fallen stars in the sky...

Geet: M a a n , I m with u .

Maan: Oh G e e t .

They promised each other ,, there was not any doubt between them ,, both expressed their desires that they want to be with each other .

Days started sliping peacefully ,, Yash nd Ruchi came back Delhi with contented hearts ,, both shared d tragic happening of Maan with Veer nd Nandini ,, Veer was shocked nd thanked God for keeping Maan safe,, He was very happy getting d news that Maan started walking nd in few days going to get his Phd degree ,, he too wished a big party for Maan's recovery nd successes ,, this was d biggest happiness for Khurana family , Veer called Maan same time nd congratulated him ,, he talked to Geet too nd thanked for her help .

Where d whole family was happy one soul was sulking over her lose ,, d dreame of rulling d whole Khurana Empire crushed down ,, this greedy soul was Nandini who was living with this beautiful dream that they wd get this whole Khurana business bcoz d elder son was like nothing nd didn't know how many days he wd survive in that condition ,, But this news broke all her hopes .

There Maan was helping Geet ,, he checked all her work which she had done till now ,, correct them nd assured Geet that they r perfect according to current experiments ,, The medicine field has no end ,, if one research ended then new research begin from that end ,, her research was on a med which was lowering d s***** of human body which was dangerous ,, lil progress in meds count a success ,, Maan was in same line nd now became a big help for Geet .

After an admin process d lucky day arrived for scholars to get their degrees ,, it was a big Graduation Ceremony in insti too ,, parents of scholars wr also invited to attend d ceremony ,, Maan was getting his degree late coz of med prob , though he was Sr from rest of d scholars , but he became d role model for students nd others ,, his success was a lesson nd motivation to those ppl nd students who lost hope of success in life for any reason .. Nothing is impossible if u have a +ive will power,, The Deam praised Maan's efforts a lot nd handed him degree ,, now many ppl of insti knew what had happened with him nd Geet .

Khuranas , Geet , Nattu , Adi , Sam nd dr J wr overwhelmed ,, Sam was double happy bcoz she too got her degree with Maan ,, DM,Yash nd Ruchi invited all for a get together to celebrate d success of Maan nd to thank all for their precious support to him ,, Veer too arrived with nandini nd son to join in Maan's happiness ,, he hugged Maan with wet eyes nd congratulated him ,, then thanked all nd spl Geet ,, Nandini too did d same but not from her heart ,, she didn't like that all wr praising Geet nd giving her importance ,, Geet sensed that in Nandini's remark to her .

ND: u nd Maanveerji become d stars of family ,, now a days there was only urs talks in d family .

Geet; thanks nandini ,, it's quite natural bcoz Maan spent a long life alone nd in dark ,, he deserves this attention .

ND: humm ,, very lucky man nd u too .

Geet: yes, no doubt in that ,, he is very lucky that got a very loving nd caring family .

ND gave a faint smile thinking that yes he is lucky nd she was unlucky losing d solo right on KC.

Next day all planned to flew back to Delhi where Dev nd Yash wr giving a success party for Maan ,, all d Khuranas wanted to celebrate with all their family nd business friends ,, Ruchi held a Pooja too ,, Geet was reluctant but agreed quietly getting many glares of Maan,DM nd Ruchi ,, Yash always gave her smiles sensing her hesitations .


Precap ... Epilogue in 2 parts ...


Epilogue-A


sorry for mistakes ...


Note .. Nandini's J nd geet's family issue will come in epilogues ..





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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hello babie...


kaisi ho... bohut din hogaye.. baat hi nahi hui...

aur aaj bhi jaa rahi hoon... thak gayi...


hopefully kal baat karoayenge...



take care...




update kal padhungi...




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Hello my dear friends



Hai babie
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hello babie...


kaisi ho... bohut din hogaye.. baat hi nahi hui...

aur aaj bhi jaa rahi hoon... thak gayi...


hopefully kal baat karoayenge...



take care...




update kal padhungi...




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