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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love u geet!

He whispered in the air in the darkness of the night... she was his only reason to be bounded to humanity coz he knew one she opened her fist he will only cause destruction!!

She was his employer n he worked as a supervisor in dispatch section... he had witnessed the cruel act which was imposed on her on the name of some deal... her cries n the pain it carried was still fresh in his memory

He took her off from the world's eyes n nursed her... when she was strong enough he let her go too

He was no one to her... Probably she has never seen him too he was one among the workers

It was only a promise n few painful memories which bound them

He knew it all... it was always the game of power n she was stepping into another one...

This time on the name of a wedding proposal... she hadn't seen him after that night n he made sure there wasn't any confrontations...

This time he was sure he wouldn't be able to stop himself so he stepped back

He made sure that his resignation letter reached her table not any one in his senior staff n left silently. ..

The envelope had a small note attached to it which was meant only for her

Geet
I'm taking u with me... N I promise to keep ur promise

Maan



Year's passed n with each passing year his popularity did increase. .. his books won many awards n accolades but he remained unteachable to the world. ..

But what's life with out a tiny miny twist

One regular day heading back from his class dismissing his students for the day he found few of his students looking at something n gossiping

It was about a painting of someone... he shrugged his curiosity n walked to the staff room looking into his schedule. ..

He heard the same thing again... it was attracting him very strongly so he decided to look into it inorder to calm his curiosity!!

N when he saw it earth slipped beneath his feet

Those eyes were fierce like so like his but what shook his soul was the lifeless body that lay at his feet n the music symbol in her open palm

All he wanted was to rush back to her but he restrained himself he didn't want anyone to question her atleast about his presence. ..

From that very night his life had become more miserable he would only fight his urge to wisk her away from everything n keep her close... slowly he opted for easier ways n he didn't know when he was became an addict. ..

Drugs was just a temporary solution for him then but now he doesn't even know what it was leading him to...

Then he wrote an artical in one of the famous newspaper calling out to her in love..in pain and in agony

It went wild among the young crowd. .. spread like a fire allover the country. ..

N thus started his wait...





Too small n too stupid hai na
People expecting an happy ending please stay away!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautifully written he loved her but for her dignity he always stay away from her n choose drug poor him nice os
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Drashtilove

beautifully written he loved her but for her dignity he always stay away from her n choose drug poor him nice os



thanks for reading😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi sporthy
a sad os ..
maan never went to geet for her sake ..lost everything !!!
geet lost her life and maan became drug addict ..
so sad ..
thank u for os ..
waiting for new one ..plz happy one
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tabby999

hi sporthy

a sad os ..
maan never went to geet for her sake ..lost everything !!!
geet lost her life and maan became drug addict ..
so sad ..
thank u for os ..
waiting for new one ..plz happy one


There's more to this story😆

And this one is my last story on IF!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks Miss.Chamchi😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it's an emotional one
poor maan, he loved her but left her to protect her dignity
who made that painting??????
will she return back now??????
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Maaneet_

it's an emotional one

poor maan, he loved her but left her to protect her dignity
who made that painting??????
will she return back now??????


Maybe😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: spoorthi28


There's more to this story😆

And this one is my last story on IF!!

last one on if ...why ab tumhe kya hua ..please don't stop writing and leave IF ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tabby999

last one on if ...why ab tumhe kya hua ..please don't stop writing and leave IF ...


Aree I have a long list of pending works

So no new ones😆

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