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abba12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ambbiha
Congratulations
nice part😉

thanks 😉

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abba12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sagorika93
Congrtz for ur first story dear ...
1st part was awesome . jungl girl geet n Richie rich business tycoon Msk ...:D nice concept . geet saved maan n now unconscious maan n jungle grl geet r alone in geet's lil hut ..hayeee how romntc :p :p plz continue soon..would love to read more

ahaha romantic 😛😉 ..will update soon 😛

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abba12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: mauaa
hii amna.. i think u'r the one who has also posted edited picture on kurbaan hua 5th year celebration.. m i right? i liked yr edit.. wanted to tell u but couldn't find you there.. but now got the chance so kudos to u n good going dear..

i would like to repeat the same for yr story also dear.. though u r posting it for the 1st time, u r really good n i really liked the 1st part...

maan was attacked by his some enemy or a rival.. n geet (for me she's like a "lady tarzan" 😆) saved maan ...

good starting.. would like to read more..😊

yeah my edits r posted in anniversary thread but didn't come there due to my exam 😛 thanks for liking the edits ..

Thanks for liking the story as well ..hope u enjoy reading further 😊

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abba12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: annirogc
intresting start.. eager to read next part
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pls give eng translation to hindi dialogues

OK will try to add translation ...but still if u know Hindi the essense of dialogs is in it only 😉

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tooba ilyas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Came to ur story today... It was a treat for me..totally different one..

maan as usual a billionaire... But what was shocking is geet.. Oh myyy ... Is she Tarzan?? Jungle girl??.. Is she so poor that she even can't buy a dress.. Poor girl..

but why I'm having a feeling ke subah abhi baaki hai when maan will woke up..lolxx.

update soon

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Congrats amna for turning out to be a writer..

Read first parits simply superb

Maan was attacked by rival people he tried to save his life in the process he fell into pit...geet saved him and took out the bullet from his leg she applied some herbals on his wounds and she slept away from him...I am curious to know whst geet is doing in forest...is she lives there only. ?.?

Eagerly waiting for the next part

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RM14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Congratz Amna ❤️for your story.🥳 🥳Wow i am so happy dear,😃and liked your style of writing so much.⭐️and you know that,😳Keep writing,keep shinning,👏 🤗

Awesome Start,⭐️hmm..its really intresting,,,.😛so Maan,the hero, is in trouble and the heroine is helping him,😳and she is mysterious too..😉 loved the way she was talking to herself.😆why she's living there? 😲wanna know more about it,loved it,enjoyed reading it a lot, and waiting for next part.😃

Banner and pics are awesome.⭐️

Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago

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nishamna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Great starting. Goons attacked maan and ran away. One girl saved him n I think She is none other than geet. Waiting for next dear

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814741

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Yayyy putriii🥳kya awesome story hai👏

I loved how you described two of them, and Geet is a bit jhalli here😆 she was not at all serious while treating maan, as if it is her daily routine😉

Waiting to see how maan react when he gets up(thst too she is wearing only her inners)

PS:mera aashirwaad kaam kar raha hai😉😆

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

terrific update! well written! Maan is successful n his rivals after him! he is attacked! Maan jumps into the river n is saved by Geet! they think he is dead! she stays alone in a hut! she tends to his injuries! update soon!