Beauty and a Dusht Danav MG *** Ch 6, pg 129 ** new thread link pg 1

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priyasree

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Posted: 10 years ago

#751

Wonderful update

Love this geet more...

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suni_104

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Posted: 10 years ago

#752

angry geet know judo maan insulted

geet leaving job

awesome update

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Madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#753

part 5 - kinda expected that kiss will not happen as both were so furious at each other but still somewhere wished kiss to happen...lol...
she was too much hurt with his accusation and she finally decided to give up and leave this job.. maan felt bad for his unnecessary accusing her. his past was painful but he realised that geet is not pammi. glad for that. he wanted to stop her but his big fat ego came in between. he pointed out her 90 days contract period and she should inform dadi about leaving.
not what...how will dadi convince her to stay back. hope he could apologies her, at least trying will be fun, to see arrogant, full-of-himself MSK asking forgive from geet.

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nishamna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#754

It's amazing. I was expecting a kiss but no it was geet who stamped her feet on maan's toes. Geet has endured a lot. And now when maan is doing everything to make her out, made geet shocked. So eventually she decided to left as her self respect is more important than her job. Maan realized his mistake and stopped her saying she should inform dadi ma first. His ego is so much big that he couldn't able to ask sorry from geet. Waiting for next dear

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#755

sorry for the late response ,..i like the way ur leading the story with a little bit comedy touch

Why oh why on earth could he not have a normal Daadima like the rest of the world? One who baked cookies and made sweets and thought the earth rotated on its axis just for her grandson

i diying in laugh and i just loved the total update

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#756

Victory should have tasted sweet but it felt like sawdust in his mouth

Sadak par so lugi but ab aur beizzati bardasht nahi karugi .. ".

Every hurt and injustice needs a reasonable closure otherwise it poisons our thinking.

He grappled with the situation, not willing to let go of his ego, not willing to bend in front of her and found a quick answer.

"Tum Daadima ke saath kaam karti ho aur tumhara contract 90 days ka hai. Bina unhe bataye tum ye job chodkar nahi ja sakti".

haa ,.. really yaar its always this false ego ,.. killing relations

well written ,.. i think ,.. we too don't want such angry kisses.

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singh24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#757

😭😭 Hi Avi...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#758

amazing update wow our iron woman geet was superb maan ka muh bhi band kar diya he had to accept that geet is not like his step mom but his big fat ego didnt let him to apologise to her atleast in other way he stopped her from quitting lovely update thnx 4 pm

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Dazlingdivya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#759

Interesting Update.

Feel sad for Maan, emotional update, but liked the way u portray strong & firm minded Geet, who is sensible and responsible but also know to give Tit for Tat.

Thanks for PM.

Waiting for next part.

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amu20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#760

hey am sry!!was out f town..so cudnt read d chaps 4 nd 5 hence cudnt comment..read both in one go!!fabulous :D :D
chap 4:
was maan jealous??nd a litl caringtoo..isnt he?nd he was very rude too :/
wow al in al d chap was awesome

chap 5:
awww..he's kinda insensitive...oh he's al rude coz of his past!!mm..dis was one was grt too!!waiting for d story to proceed!!!update soon :) :) :😊😊