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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update dadi left dev the only family he had is gone and the emotional support he had also left him he thought to help meera by payin the guy full amt of meeras debt she was furious as if ppl taunted her as his mistress she left him and his job went to stay with her friend got a job worked overtime and gave the first instalment check to him of his debt she even returned the safe money dev had deposited in her account she refused to meet him adi called dev that maan was in an accident and paralysed from down below though dev hates maan but cant deny he is his bro so agreed to help adi in looking after kc and maan but will not stay in the mansion
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART - 17

Dev didn't want this but fate decide something else. He hold the command of KGI but his problem is to face Maan. He know how he react seeing him there.

Doc called him. Maan was awaked and troubling them. Dev not want to,but left no choice. Maan was laying silent and lifeless.



Already he was not inself after Geet left him and now his body. His frustration was at peak. He wasn't ready to accept this. This helplessness. It was hard blow on his ego. Dev entered in his room with doctor. Both glance each other.


"Why you are here?"Maan yelled.


"for you and our companies." Dev replied straight.


"huhh... Not for me. You came here to overtake my companies. You want revenge." Maan cursed him.


"you know everything then why asking?" Dev pissed off and snap back.

"dont you dare." Maan tried to get up but failed as his lower part not supporting him. But he dont give up and wants to hit him. Seeing him go wild doctor signaled his compunders. They hold his arms firm and he filled he injection quickly. After giving him injection all left the room.


"doc how much time he will need?" Dev get impatient.


"you see how his temper is. If he goes like this then i can't give u any assurity. He is not ready to cooperate and it will only harm him." Doc told him clearly,not giving any false hopes.



Dev tensed more. He wants to run away as soon as possible but cant leave responsibilities he had on his shoulders. 3 months passed. Maan's body wounds recovered but he was on wheel chairs. His pralyzise problem was same like before. Infact his right arm not even work properly. For his situation he cursed Dev only,when ever he saw him. His rage,his anger only increasing day by day. Whenever he open is mouth only spitt venom on his servants, doctors and his brother. Dev alone bearing all the torture of facing is wrath and suppressing his anger towards him. No one he have in his life with whom he can share his pain and turmoils.

"Doc pls do something and cure him at any cost." he pleads for his freedom.


"we tried our level best. But he is not supporting at all. Now this case is out of our hands. We did everything. This case of your brother now only be cured by Dr. Asthana." he told,giving ray of hope.


"then what are you waiting for? Called him. I will pay any thing for his treatment. Bas bro ko theek kar de."Dev want him cured as soon as possible.


"Dr. Asthana yaha nahi aayenge. He is very different man. You have to go to him. Wo apna hospital chhod k yaah nahi aayege. We have to shift Mr. Khurana to his hospital." He told him clearly.


"ok i am ready. You ask him and we shift bro there." Dev agreed.


"but his hospital Institute is not here. We have to shift him to Pune."

"no issue." he agreed.

"alright then. I will talk to him."Doc assured him.

When all arrangements done he informed Dev. He complete all the formalities and reached hospital to took Maan from there. Staff helped him and they reached to their private plane. "you are getting relief seeing me like this. Hai na. That time you were helpless and today i am. You must enjoying my condition." Maan again spitt venom on Dev.


Dev gave one magzine in his hand. "bro read this. I have some work." he moved to other side. After landing on their private aerodrome,he took seprate car, want some peace. Its been 4 month when he last saw and talk with Meera. Some where he missed his friend who understand and help him at every weak moment of his. Dev was looking at his phone. Not sure about his reaction. Last time she mistook him. He flipping his phone between his fingers. But he need to share his going through with some one so he dialled her no. Doubts were there. Wheather she take his call or not. Ring goes on but no answer. He was about to dump the call when he heared soft voice on other side. "hello... Meera..you there?" he asked.

"Dev you called, any thing important?" She asked casually.


"how are you?" he disappointed hearing her tone but hold himself calm.

"Dev i am in a office. If you call to ask this only then we talk later." she replied rudly.


Dev hurts and cursed him for calling her. He wants to through his phone out. He just bear abusive words from Maan and now she to treated him in a same way. He roamed his finger to cut the call when he hears one more sound from other side. "Meera come. Doc is calling you." it was her friend Sophie's voice. Hearing the word Doc his ears alerts.


"you lied. You said you are in office. Then why doc calling you." Dev suspects and interrogate strongly.


"no...wo...i am not lying." she was stammering. "actually in our office every employe need to give medical fitness test,half yearly. That's why doc is here. I have to go Dev." she told briskly and cut the call,before he asked more.Same time his row of cars stops.They reached to Hospital. His driver informed him. "Sir we reached." Dev's attention diverted to Maan again.


One junior doc and some staff came with them. He contact with the staff of hospital and they all took Maan carefully. Dev got busy with all and forgot about his conversation with Meera. Now his priority was Maan.


One junior doc came to examine him and for other paper work. He took other doc came with them and Dev with him.



"Excuse me Dr. I would like to meet Dr. Asthana first." Dev demands.


"Sorry mr. Khurana he was out of town due to one seminar." He informed Dev and his face turn gloomed.


"What? He wasn't here. Then why you guys don't inform us. Now who will treat my brother? We only came here and now you telling me that Dr. Asthana is not here. Wow." Dev get hyper on their unprofessional behavior.


"Please sir don't get hyper. Your brother will get best treatment here. He wasn't here but his daughter Dr. Naina is here and she will handle this case. Dr. Asthana ko emergency me jana pada. Halaki previous planned hi hote hai seminars but college need in urgency and dr. Asthana had to left. But don't worry he will come back soon and in meantime Dr. Naina will handle this case. Trust me she is very good doctor. I am sure we get some positive results with her treatment. Or tab tak to Dr. Asthana aa hi jayenge." He assured and tried to calm him.


"Alright."



"But sir we need you here. You have to talk Dr. Naina because she needs patient's family members to study his case."


"I will meet her. Where is she?"Dev agreed and Doc show him the way to her cabin.






NOTE: I updated two parts back to back. Now I want 200 likes at least on both updates if you want next up of MIS. When Both parts 16 & 17 get 200+ likes then I will update next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
gr8 part,,,
cont.soon

wow m first,,,
Edited by janu_2006 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part. Felt bad for Dev . He is bearing everything inspite of Maan's abusive behavior.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
yeh maan abhi bhi nhi sudhra still blaming Dev for everything...
dev shifts maan to pune ... let's see what will happen next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Supeeb part... maan soo helpless but his arrogance are still thr...

really wen will this man will have the thing called brain...

something fisshy with meera...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice pt
maan thinks dev is here to show him down
and to takeover his companies
but dev just listening his all abusing and
following doctors
after 4months maan not getting out of his
frustrated mood and abusing dev his treatment
still going on doctors helpless maan not
cooperating with them so they suggested
Dr Asthana dev went their with maan and
Dr. out of city now his daughter will traet
him dev going to talk to her
dev called meera before reach hospital but
meera said she didn't have time
hope this Dr. put some sense in maan
hope he get well and b sensible and leave
his ego and treat human as humans
waiting fr next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for a surprise with Dr Naina.
Wishing a speedy recovery for Meera and Maan
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Poor Dev one side Maan's abusive words...saap gira lekin tever to abhi bhi waise ke waise hi hai...kutch bhi nahi badla ...sudhar jaa Maan abhi bhi waqt hai apne bhai ki aur dekh, bure waqt me wahi tere pass khada hai,jab ki tune to use jite ji maar dala tha...apna ego chod aur kutch acha soch...
here meera why she is so rude?agar dev ne kutch help kardi friend hone ke naate to kya bure kiya...? friend friend ki madad nahi karenge koun karega...? I did not like meera's character here, kutch bhi karan kyun na ho aise uski rudli baat wo nahi kaat sakti thi, aur jo paise wo job karke chukana chahat hai wo itne se job mein maar ne tak nahi chuka sakti agar use koi lotry lag jaati...?
Aur aab ye doctor naina...you stop there it means she is some imp character to this story may be related to some past...may be Dev knows her...dekhte hai kya chupa hai tumne apna gareban mein...update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update di
Dev came to take care of Maan and KGI
maan's condition is worst
his temper increasing day by day
and the fact that geet is not with him..is making him more rude
and showing his anger on dev...
poor dev...no o e there to support him
Meera...is she hiding smthing
Dev and Maan went to Pune for getting treatment
Dr Naina...will she look like geet 😆 my silly assumptions
thank you for the update di :)

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