'the girl next door' MG SS part 14 pg 112 updated 21 may - Page 25

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I know I know I am so late I was supposed to update last night but when I thought my server is good then again it went down and I couldn't update. So I typed again the whole part on the mobile and it took my whole day. So here is the next part!! sorry sorry sorry for keeping you all wait for so long.

PART 8

COLLEGE

Maan was standing with his friends in front of college gate when geet entered with armaan. Geet and armaan came out of the car and geet noticed maan standing with ridhima that's when maan noticed her. He smirked looking at her and geet looked away angrily. She marched towards armaan and linked her arm with his and looked at maan teasingly. Maan glared her and geet shrugged her shoulders and kept walking with armaan.

"Geet after this fest I have to go back to delhi." Said armaan looking at geet.

"why?" geet asked him while taking her seat.

"nothing yr as usual dad and mom are missing me and moreover Teesha di is coming from Canada so have to pick her up also." He said.

"ohh really teesha di is coming..wow..you know I miss her sometimes. " pouted geet.

"toh tu bhi chal na." asked armaan from geet.

"hmm let's see." Geet shrugged.

AUDITORIUM

"no no armaan you are getting wrong beats and geet sing slowly what's the rush?" said kavita and turned around to talk to Akshaj the drummer. Geet and armaan looked at each other and made annoying faces. They both were annoyed by kavita's constant nagging. She was interrupting after every line. Armaan was so frustrated that he was already to quit but because of geet he wasn't saying anything.

"I want to kill her." Whispered armaan slowly and made the action of strangling kavita's neck.

"go ahead" geet whispered and smiled.

"ok guys break time." Said kavita looking at her watch. Geet and armaan sighed and were about to rush out when kavita called them from behind.

"wait armaan and akshaj please come with me to the music room I have some more plans."

Armaan made an angry frustrated face and was about to yell at her when geet held him back.

"geet yr I need a break. Isne toh dimag khrab kar diya." Said armaan ruffling his hair and took a deep breath to calm himself.

"its a matter of half an hour. Go I am waiting here." Said geet trying to convince him.

"fyn. But wait for me. We will go to canteen. Ok?" asked armaan.

"yup sure.now go" said geet pushing him towards door. Armaan went and geet looked around and decided to wait. She took her phone out checked her fb, whatsapp and replied to messages. After 5 min she looked at her watch and sighed. She looked around and her gaze travelled to Armaan's guitar. She turned to look around to see If anyone is there. When she was sure that no one is around she slowly took the guitar in her hands and slightly played the strings. She sighed and closed her eyes. Automatically her hands started working and words came out of her mouth. Geet was unaware that the moment she touched the guitar maan was all the while standing there in curiosity as what geet was upto. And when she started playing he was left spell bounded like she really meant those lyrics

.Clear blue water, high tide came and brought you in

And I could go on and on, on and on, and I will
Skies grew darker, currents swept you out again
And you were just gone and gone, gone and gone

In silent screams,
In wildest dreams
I never dreamed of this

This love is good, this love is bad
This love is alive back from the dead
These hands had to let it go free
And this love came back to me

Tossing, turning, struggled through the night with someone new
And I could go on and on, on and on
Lantern burning, flickered in my mind for only you
But you're still gone, gone, gone

Been losing grip,
Oh, sinking ships
You showed up just in time

This love is good, this love is bad
This love is alive back from the dead
These hands had to let it go free
And this love came back to me

This love left a permanent mark
This love is glowing in the dark
These hands had to let it go free
And this love came back to me

This love, this love, this love, this love... [4x]

Your kiss, my cheek, I watched you leave
Your smile, my ghost, I fell to my knees
When you're young you just run
But you come back to what you need

This love is good, this love is bad
This love is alive back from the dead
These hands had to let it go free
And this love came back to me

This love left a permanent mark
This love is glowing in the dark
These hands had to let it go free
And this love came back to me

This love, this love, this love, this love
(song-this love by taylor swift)

When geet finished maan was speechless. He could actually feel her pain.

"why there was so much pain in her voice like she was suffereing.? Tujhe kyun itni problem ho rhi hai? I think I am getting affected by her.. god I will go mad. But maybe I can be her friend in that way I can know about her and clear my confusions about meeting her before." Thought maan and was brought out of his thoughts by geet's voice.

"Are you following me.?" Geet asked and frowned a little. When geet noticed maan standing there and was startled a little. She composed herself and decided to confront him.

"what makes you feel that I will follow you?" asked maan with a slight touch of humor and that hurt geet.

"yeah why would he follow me.?" Thought geet sadly.

"by the way you sing well that's why Nicholas chose you." Said maan teasingly.

"hmm" said geet.

"oh god this fb and whatsapp gave a bad habit to everyone. If you don't know what to say just simply say hmm." Said maan trying to lighten her mood which he noticed to be sad.(wah maan babu..lol)

"no nothing like that its just I don't reply to faltu questions." Now geet came to her sherni mode.

"what faltu? Hello I was just joking..ok?" said maan defending himself.

"ya ryt..nice sense of humor then." Said geet smirking. Maan frowned and thought of something to retort back.

"by the way where is your that monkey friend.? Kehna padega he plays football really well." Said maan knowing she will get angry now and he was right.

"haw how dare you again? First in the morning and now again. Mind it mr. I will break that nose of yours." Said geet almost ready to pounce at him.

"oh mai toh Darr gya." Maan said trying to mimic a coward.

"yup daro. That suits you better. Faltu ka ego and a very very bad sense of humor. You know ek bache ka tumse better sense of humor hai." Said geet with double attitude and smirked looking at his funny frowned face.

"yeah whatever. I was trying to lighten your mood." Said maan feeling like a mouse infront of her.

"you" geet was about to speak when armaan came and interrupted them.

"oh maan what are you doing here?" asked armaan from maan.

"I came to check some arrangements. Going now..see you on the ground. Bye" said msaan and gazed at geet for last time and made his way outside. Geet stood there confused nd stared at his back."chalein geet." Asked armaan and geet noded and went with him to the canteen.

CANTEEN

Maan was sitting with his football friends and was having his cold coffee. Geet and armaan entered the canteen.

"by the way guys armaan has a cute gf." Commented one of the football player. Maan was sipping his coffee and he was almost choked after hearing it.

"yeah I even got to know that they are both together from childhood. From school to college and now MBA and moreover armaan specially came to Sikkim for her." Said another football player. All looked at them with admiration but maan was shocked to hear all this. He saw both of them laughing on something. Geet was showing something on her phone to armaan and he was teasing her. Maan felt a lump forming in his throat. He just left from there.

"Maan ko kya hua?" asked one of the player. Everyone shrugged.

Meanwhile on geet and armaan's table. Sanaya came running to their table and sat on the chair.

"hello both of you." Sanaya said picking up fries from the plate.

"hello" both of them said together.

"by the way geet uncle aunty's anniversary is coming right?" asked sanaya from geet while munching on chips now.

"yup and I still don't know what to gift them and I don't even know that whether we are having a party or not." Geet frowned and looked at armaan for help.

"pumpkin you don't take tension we will go for shopping tomorrow." Said armaan trying to ease her.

"how Malik we have this stupid fest coming up nd your football matches." Whined geet and made a crying face.

"don't worry I will take a day off."

"stop it both of you. We will decide it later on. First of all let's go break is over." Said sanaya and got up to go to her classes.

"chal geet warna who kavita maar dalegi." Said armaan jokingly and geet noded.

HOME

"hey bhai" said geet entering her house and noticed her bhai doing some work.

"geet aagyi tu. Acha hua ja bhabhi ko bula kr la." Asked raqesh while engrossed on his phone.

"bhabhi k bina toh aapka din nhi guzrta..uff" said geet jokingly and made her way towards kitchen to call ridhi. Raqesh rolled his eyes. Geet came back with ridhi and they both sat on the sofa.

"lo bhai aagyi aapki ridhii jldi btao kya hai mujhe neend aa rhi hai." Said geet yawning.

"ek min gudiya. Ek mail bhej rha hun." Said raqesh still engrossed in his work. He was just as workalcoholic as robot. Geet and ridhi rolled their eyes and silently smiled.

"raqesh ab bol bhi do dekho geet is really tired and mujhe aur bhi kaam hai." Said ridhi trying to divert his attention. Raqesh completed his work and turned his attention on them.

"as you both know mom and dad'sanniversary is coming up." Said raqesh and they both noded.

"so I have decided to throw a surprise party. What say?" asked raqesh from both of them. Geet and ridhi gasped. Both of them were really happy and geet in excitement pounced on raqesh and hugged him tightly and started blabbering.

"oh bhai you are just great I was so confused as what to gift them and you solved all the problems. Oh wait am going to tell sanaya about this. Am going now" said geet and immediately rushed out. Ridhi and raqesh smiled looking at her excitement.

KHURANA MANSION

"Sanaya Sanaya" shouted geet in excitement and ran towards her room. While running she slipped down and landed on her bums. She winced and was about to get up when a hand came infront of her.

"enjoying miss?" asked maan forwarding his hand. Geet didn't wanted to take his hand so she took support of the railing and stood up.

"are you following me?" asked maan in the same tone which geet used earlier. Geet didn't liked it and came to her sherni mode.

"are you deaf or you have a habit of listening less.?" Said geet sarcastically. Maan frowned and geet continued.

"I called for sanaya." Said geet and was about to go when maan blocked her way.

"I never saw you here before. Are you coming here for the first time.?" Asked maan from geet.

"you were never there." Said geet plainly and made her way to sanaya's room. Maan stood there confused and went to sit in the hall.

SANAYA's ROOM

"sanaya?" called geet. Sanaya just came out of the washroom. Geet jumped on the bed ad pulled sanaya with her.

"guess what?" asked geet.

"what?" asked sanaya and frowned. Geet giggled and said

"bhai is throwing a surprise party for mom and dad." Geet said excitingly.

"wow really.? It will be so much fun na." geet noded and smiled.

"wait what we have to do.?" Asked sanaya confused. Geet shrugged her shoilders.

"oh I forgot. Actually I was so excited that I didn't listen everything and came running down here." Said geet with a silly smile. Sanaya noded her head.

"come let's go to your home and decide everything with bhai and bhabhi." Said sanaya and geet agreed. Both made their way to the handa mansion.

HALL

Maan was sitting leisurely on the couch busy on his phone. Geet and sanaya made their way down. Sanaya sopped infront of maan.

"bhai tell mom that I am at geet's house." Said sanaya. Maan looked up and gazed at both of them.

"this is the right chance to know her more. Yes" thought maan.

"wait. Sanaya I'll drop you both." Suggested maan and picked up his car's key to go out. Both the girls looked at him weirdly.

"what are you looking at.? Come now!!" said maan.

"bhai what are you talking about?" asked sanaya confused and geet agreed and looked at maan with questioning eyes.

"why you wanna go by train or bus.? I'll drop you guys." Said maan now looking confused. Both sanaya and geet looked at each other and laughed.

"bhai what we will do with car? What happened to you? We are going here only. Geet lives next door bhai. Have you gone mad.?" Said sanaya while laughing.

"whattt????????" said maan shockingly and looked at geet with open mouth.

PRECAP- he jumped on her balcony and...

Hey guys here's the next part. Long enough I guess it will compensate the loss...lol sorry once again

guys one more thing i have applied in some colleges so next week is full of interviews andcouncelling sessions. so might get a little late to update but i will make sure to update whenever i will get time.

I am so happy with response. Please keep showering your love on me...love you all!!!!

Hope you like the update please hit button and leave your comments. They mean a lot to me.

-RIYA SINGH

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 updating! thanks 4 da pm! fantastic update! Armaan n Geet annoyed with Kavita Ma'am! Armaan will have 2 go 2 Delhi! Geet sad! he asks her 2 go with him! Geet sings! Maan speechless! he feels her pain! Maan tries 2 b friends with her! bt ends up irritating her! Maan angry wen one the guys mention abt Armaan n Geet! he sees them n leaves! Sanaya is so sweet! Geet at home! her bro tells her his plan! Geet excited! Geet goes 2 KM to tell Sanaya abt the party n meets Maan! she taunts him! Sanaya n Geet leave 4 HH! she tells Maan! Maan wants 2 drop them and try n get 2 knw Geet! They laugh! Sanaya says Geet lives next door! Maan shocked! update soon! interesting precap!
Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago
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Fabulous Update

Maan still feels kinda attracted towards Geet and when he hears her song he feels her pain but again Geet shrugs her pain by been rude with him
Geet comes over to his house and when she and Sanaya was about to leave he offers to drop them off but instead learns that Geet is their neighbor

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Posted: 10 years ago
Poor geet struggling with her onesided love and here maan is trying to get close to geet. Now he knows geet stays next door ab maan baabu kyarega
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
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Loved last 3 parts does Mann know who geet is then and the song how sad she is like heart broke Mann feeling something but does no what and get pissed off when he hear about Armann and then find geet at his house then bigest shocks geet living next door
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think he will come to know about the trutrh by reading her dairy.
Awesome update. last time maan saw her coming out from her house and then how come he didnt realise it.
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Poor Maan he is confused as to why Geet affects him so much even when she is trying to avoid him. Wow Geet knows how to play the guitar as well as singing. A very painful song sung from her heart. Maan wanting to know her better so offers to drop them off without knowing that Geet lives next door.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part. Maan feels pain in her voice and gets curious about her.

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