Short Story ~Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi [Plz see Pg 1] - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SHRADDHA2102

nice part... maan surly ur life gonna change... from BACHLORE TO MARRIED MAN... lolz... cant wait for next...


Welcome to HKA!
Thanks for reading ! Very excited for the wedding are we?:D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree



<font size="2" color="#009900">Awesome updates</font>


Thanku for reading
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

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Welcome Madhuri!
Hope to see you here often. Thanku for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#660099">Fabulous Update

Maan's Daadima tells him that she has waited for two years for him to decide on marriage and cannot wait for another two years so if he does not want to come to Jalandhar then he also must not come when she is on her death bed .
Maan now realizes that his Daadima must have already chosen and accepted a girl otherwise she would not have put pressure on him .
looking forward to see what will happen next </font>



Welcome taahir ! Thanks for reading! Your long comments really make me happy.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: xolfiya

Another awesome update thank u for it !!

Dadima blackmailed maan n he finally going to jalandhar hmm eagerly waiting for next update want to see what will b maan's reaction :)



Hey xolfiya ! Welcome to HKA!
I really appreciate ur enthusiasm for the story. And i m glad u r liking the story. Thank u for reading.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DAZZLINDD

Just finsihed reading all the parts


its Amazing ...
the realistic view to life s hardships and hurdles ... written so beautifully
Maan doesn't seem a Cold person ... then whts the reason for Geet s Monologue in the Prologue

waiting for the marriage to be done with


Thanku for reading and welcome to HKA ! I m glad you liked the chps.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I dont know how many are waiting but here is a small teaser for those who are...

Teaser

The screeching of the tyres drew her attention and she peeped through the window to detect its source.
And the sight before her knocked the breath out of her system.
The Khuranas were here. They were here to see her and finalise the wedding . And here she had been hoping against hope that they would not turn up.
The gates of the Haveli flew open and both the families exchanged pleasantries. Naintara getting down the car squealed in joy and rushed to Rano hugging her while Dev amused at his wife's display of emotions walked towards Daarji to touch his feets .
However she did not notice any of this. Her eyes were glued to the man in blue sitting behind the wheels. She watched as he jumped down the black jeep and removed his shades that hid his eyes and place them in his front pocket. Under the setting sun his face was glowing. There was this strange feeling that she felt as she saw him walk lazily towards his Dadi. An indescribable feeling accompanied with the fast beating of her heart. And as he stood beside his Dadima ,he had an aura of arrogance about him.
He had grown taller . And stronger too. Unlike the thin teenage boy , his form was well built and he shoulders were broad.
In blue shirt and black denim jeans and his face bearing a neutral look he still looked different . Just in same way as he looked seven years ago at the marraige.
But the problem was he looked handsome as well.
Devastingly handsome.
Handsomer than any man she had come across in her short lifetime.
There was no way she could marry him. Infact there was no way he would marry her. So guess, she was in for another rejection.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Do let me know how you liked the teaser. I m still working on it.
I thought atleast some of you will ask for an update but as nobody did i myself updated a teaser. Okay so meet u till the next time. I have replied to some of the comments . Do check if u have time.
Till then Apna Khayal Rakhna.:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh wow. This teaser is soo lovely. Can't wait for the update. Wanna know wat Maan's reaction would be seein geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 8:

Maan worked hard but he missed the post n Adi is suggesting for own business n doing MBA. So maaneet marriage is fixed. I love hero Honda bike.

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