MG% SS% RISHTEY , kiya sath degye , part 25 teaser updating plus note

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Wow lovely amazing emotional updates..te way my maaneet ki intro was lovely..geet living like a stranger in her own family as everyone ignoring due to her past except her maa,even though mohi want to hold his daughter but his ego is blocking him..other side my maan want to marry his geet who was not match to him as per others but his guilty killing so something happen to geet due to my maan?..te way everyone thinking khuranas came for sam but wen they said abt geet sam and pam ki face and anger,wat ever u try sam u can never cum between my maaneet,they made or each other..te way my maan threatening mohi and geet as he don't have any other choice and in present my maaneet married and became one in every sense was lovely beautiful..i love all te updates so much yar

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#202

wow lovely update..te way pam creating a big drama and want to create tift between rano and mohi and now rano was with her daughter's side for her happy life was lovely..te way rano talking with geet was lovely..opps khuranas really funny but bonded with so much love want to cheer maan without knowing he is real devil who know to get wat he wants.. omg he going to buy te shares..i love te update yar

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fariya20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: Desigirls12
Wow lovely amazing emotional updates..te way my maaneet ki intro was lovely..geet living like a stranger in her own family as everyone ignoring due to her past except her maa,even though mohi want to hold his daughter but his ego is blocking him..other side my maan want to marry his geet who was not match to him as per others but his guilty killing so something happen to geet due to my maan?..te way everyone thinking khuranas came for sam but wen they said abt geet sam and pam ki face and anger,wat ever u try sam u can never cum between my maaneet,they made or each other..te way my maan threatening mohi and geet as he don't have any other choice and in present my maaneet married and became one in every sense was lovely beautiful..i love all te updates so much yar

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fariya20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Desigirls12
Wow lovely fav if my maaneet,finished reading all parts in one go..very interesting..

thud thud

yaar dont give me shock

happiness wale

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maankijann

@maankijann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Thanks for liking previous parts
You comments really encourage me
Sorry for not replying

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maankijann

@maankijann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Hello everyone
Being unprofessional maybe my writing skills not good other

If you thought my work reassembled with any of writer please tell me in pm no bashing

Sorry for English language I can't help it ;)

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To be continued

Precape maaneet talked
Marriage

Please give your feedback I really needed them
Sorry for delay

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maankijann

@maankijann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Will pm later right now I am hidding from mom
See you soon
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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Interesting update...

Maan took over handa's business...

To make geet agree to marry him...

But is feeling guilty as well...

Ye payal ki kya story hai

Thanks for update..

Continue soon...

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jasika

@jasika08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#209

Nice update

Waiting for next update. . .

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#210

hi thanks 4 da superb update! well written! Geet angry with Maan! Pammi behaviour confuses Geet! Maan's turmpil well pootrayed! he wants Geet 2 say yes! he feels bad 4 wt he did! Maan didn't want 2 force her! Maan recalls his past! who is this girl??? Maan takes over the business! update soon! pls update Tamannah!