Web of Love (3) - [Ch 69/70- P. 100] 30th April - Page 51

Nice update..

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Phew. This story is still alive, thank God for that. Kyunki I sort of lost hope, not blaming you. It is just that after a while you forget how it used to be, so you embrace the practicality.
Coming to Maan and Geet, you know when it started, it was Diwali season in the story. And it still is. It is just that in real it is Diwali again. So in my head it's like they are dating since then Lol. Like they have talked and talked and become so tuned to each other. So when I read this, I was not surprised. The surprise was Maan having a hope, wanting to change for good. Mature sorta couple, huh. I am smiling. Like saying God bless you both. Hahaha.

Thankyou and belated happy Diwali to you. It was nice reading them again. :-).

Originally posted by: dqno1

res 😃


wow!

you have a pulse on the pain he is going through

I had tears
this is the first Diwali without both parents and I have faced these questions too in my head
She is his strength and his weakness in one
love is like that
i wish her dream of their families growing and becoming better comes true
with her by his side he can make it happen

so beautifully penned
the world going on in front of them
the night conveying the new dawn to come
👏 you amaze and astound me everytime

thanks for updating my dearest 🤗

You know what stood out for me here in this chapter? Maan's pain definitely slashes through, but it is Geet who took the cake away today. From having drowned in pain herself, one would think she would agree with Maan on his take: the gloomier side of life as he sees it, but she is still so positive, so content with everything. It takes a beautiful soul to keep that optimism and to try and spread it too.

Part 62

Trying to think of something to say but can't, I'm hardly renered speechless, and thats a statement.

That being said, what an beautiful beautiful update. It perfectly shows the distance they travelled to reach this point in time. Maan's pain is palatable especially considering the air of fesitivies, his raw emotions are well portrayed and Geet being an anchor or a shadow of some sort is highly appreciated. Though shadow might not be the right word since she's foreseeing that he makes it though.

Its nice to see them flourishing into something thats beyond the basic level of any given relationship, something thats explicable. I second Geet, bad times wheel into good phases, eventually. Its how you hold onto faith that counts, men are equally allowed to fall weak but its the rise that actually makes a difference (man/woman).

I hope to see Maan's relationship with his mother improve, lets say not only is Geet attached to her but so am I in several ways. She's an amazing character, Lasanya was it? Sorry fish-brain here

Loved it: each word, each feeling, each action

Do keep writing

Originally posted by: ChandlerBing

Yo baby doll!

Although every author says this to all of their stories, I will tell this again at the cost of repeating myself. I love this story. This particular one

Hahaha they have been dating for three four diwalis now eh? I know it's been so long and I do understand once it is put up in a forum, this story is mine as much as it is of the readers'. And I have seen so many readers in the course of this story. Some stayed, some went away. Quite natural especially if I update once in a blue moon but there are a bunch of them like yourself who stayed and who drop in a line or two every single time and for you I write.

Hmm, Not a baby doll. :-D. This was reassuring and lovely of you to write. Cheers .

Originally posted by: ChandlerBing

Pain is the most relatable thing ever Avi. Isn't it so?

I love love love you and I missed you so very much.

If it weren't for your sweet Diwali wishes in the thread, I wouldn't have sat down to think about the next chapter. So thank you for that.

I'll tell you what Geet told Maan. Life will turn around. It would might not be the same, but no one said happiness won't come back again, in different forms.

Love you.

yes
the mind knows but the heart is another thing altogether
🤗

Part 62 - Liked the start how you wrote about geet noticing his pain thru his silence. She knew something was bothering him. She wanted to lesson his pain and she did that giving hope for the future united family of all three siblings which he missed in his childhood.

I am wondering to see them so close. It was like yesterday they were fighting, hating each other and suddenly now they were in each other arms giving strength to each other. How far they came. Really missing this story.

requesting that u pls update soon