MG- Anmay-The Unbreakable- LAST Chapter Pg53 (30/09/2017)*NEW* - Page 3

In this story maan sounds like supermen who is working in the welfare of common people under disguise name of Anmay, his mission is to remove crime from earth but till department is corrupted common people has to unite to bring justice in society and remove crime and the criminals.

Amazing n beautiful part. ..

Woah!! Interesting story...
The background settings were done so intricately and meticulously.
Maan dealt with the drug dealers in a cool, calm yet chilling manner.
He even blackmailed the police into doing their jobs.
Glad you used the Arjun cast. (another 4 bakras creation- kuch bhi bolo bt heroes n love stories badi solid banate hai starting mei)
So what is the mystery of past behind our wounded hero that is tormenting him...
Geet n Maan meeting was nicely done. ( I thought that she was somehow linked with his past when she said about seeing him previously but naah..it turned out to be a business magazine...)
Never the less it was endearing.

Maan's character seems really interesting... Does he have a butler??? Great build up...
Your writing style is beautiful.
P.S. One small tiny-mini request if you aren't offended: use Adi as Maan's assistant.

P.P.S. Thanks for mentioning my name in your update. I am honoured.

amazing start ..

lovely interesting update! well written! Maan aka Anmay works behind the scenes n helps bring criminals 2 book! Arjun annoyed! Maan goes 2 buy newspaper n meets Geet! she recognises him! she is a fan of MSK! They chat n he leaves! Geet thinking abt Maan! Aman calls Maan! update soon

awesome update loved the start interesting concept kashish maan is a very interesting cop he took over a whole drug cartel but didn't kill anyone he very carefully completed his work by collecting proofs and mailing to acp only thing he leaves behind is his name no one knows who he is even the culprits who didn't see his face since it was covered with scarf while in day he is a businessman ye arjun is getting insecured maan ne inka kaam adha kar diya aur ye hai ke chalo maaneet meet where geet meets maan and praises him as she is his biggest fan she even praises anmay as he I doing what cops should rightfully should do maan liked her but he has no place for her as he lives a dangerous life geet has a crush on maan his next mission is so save girls and children from kidnapping as they might end up in prostitution which is a shame for us

It is a very interesting story.

start of an amazing story yaar...cant wait for the story to go further..

awsm updt...anmayy ss intresting character hhe iss shhar,smart,cruel...maan has iignified persona...fnall maeet shhown...Geet is asusual bublly...maan ha sm feeling s hr bt cnt involve hrr in life...maan iis doing reallly good worrk...udt soon thhanx 4 pm