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Posted: 10 years ago
geet meet dadi ,went to maan room seeing him sleeping,she unknowingly touch his head,pray for him,she saw maan study watching his lap top,she was shocked watching project and pen drive same,she want about maan asked dadi,lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing part
geet find out dat d owner of d pendrive is maan

waiting fr nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update... geet found out that the pen drive belongs to maan... precap ???
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update Babbie 😊
emotional too...Feel sad for Maan 😭
Geet part so beautiful ⭐️and you write so well👏


Precap seems very interesting
anxiously waiting for next 😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
I really feel bad for Dadima, at such a age too she has so much stress. Always worrying about Maan and his health, depression. It must be so painful.

Geet came to meet dadima and in her presence dadima felt good. She even went to Maan's room and prayed for him.

Geet's search finally came to an end. She got to know the owner of the pen drive as well found whose research work she is being following and needing. But of course knowing Maan and him banning the talks of his college and his past life wont be helping her. She is in a fix. She cant take Maan's help nor can she give him his pen drive back knowing how much he has come to hate his life spend in college and research lab.

Wonder where this Nattu going to lead her? I guess her final destination is going to be Maan only. She might go roam, ask and try to find anything from any person but she will ultimately have to come to Maan only.

Precap looks interesting. Wondering whose egos are going to clash?

-Sanjana!
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Posted: 10 years ago
maine kaha tha na ki wo sara research work Maan ka hai..
Ab Geet bhi detective banegi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Geet came to know about whose pen drive is
Hope she will find something about maan
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago



The Bliss



( For Banner credit goes to my dear Priya )


The simple things of life can be blissful, if you can take the time to enjoy it. There is love in the air, everywhere... you just need to feel it, embrace and enjoy all that life has to offer.

Every moment that is enjoyed, treasured and relished is a store house of memories, that you can draw out, enjoy and smile with love. It is bliss..


Oh sweet bliss how did you find me in the dark with all my troubles

collecting like copper pennies in a fountain,
under pain concrete form,
a flower breaks
through the crack of my once solid shell.

Stay with me bliss ,
never leave me again,
for my need is great and my patience is plentiful.
Oh lessons I need not learn again,
forget where I have been.

Let me walk in the sweet embrace of a Sunday's morn
and not forget it tender kiss of compassion
for God had granted me another day with you.
Hold me in the arms of your unfolding grace
and we will put back all the fallen stars in the sky...


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Note..

This a fiction , all incident , medical terms , professional terms nd places r imaginary ,, plzz don't relate them with reality .


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 12


Part - 13


Geet tried to remember this name but there was none in her lab nd she didn't heard this name from any one in her group aur dept ,, she decided to search in other labs form d next day ,, if Natrajan was close to Maan then he deffo knew many things regarding him ,, she switched off d charger nd came with DM for dinner geet asked for Maan.

Geet: DM , did Maan had his meal ?

DM: No beta he refused nd lying with close eyes ,, he was not talking to me properly from last 2-3 days .

Geet felt bad for this elderly lady who was in pain seeing her g son like this ,, she cd understand her misery ,, she faced worst than it ,, at least he is infront of her nd talking to her .

Geet: let's try if he take something ,, how long he'll remain on drip ?

DM : this is d prob ,, he is becoming stubborn ,, he didn't try to think that it hurts us more ,, he only renting that he wanted to make us free from our miseries .

Geet wiped DM tears nd pressed her hands ,, with stiff face she took some food in a plate nd got up .

DM: Geet beta plzz u don't go near him ,, he became hyper nd scold u .

Geet: let him do DM ,, at least apni frustration hi nikalenge na mujh per ,, no prob nd u don't worry about me .

Geet moved to Maan's room while DM was requesting her not to go ,, she knew Maan deffo scold her for this.

Geet entered in Maan's room nd gave a look to him ,, he was awake nd staring at roof blankly ,, she went slowly near him without making any sound but he sensed her nd turned his face towards her side .

Maan: tum ???? What r u doing here ? leave Doc.

Geet: Ok , i'll , but have some food ,, why r u troubling that old lady ,, is that good ?

Maan: i'm doing this for their well being .,, I don't want anything , leave from here .

Geet: u r saying this bcoz u r thinking only from ur side ,, don't be selfish nd think for others ,, have something , they'll feel better too .

Maan angered : don't u have ears nd who d hell r u ? who called u here to preach me ,, get lost .

Geet: now u know me well Mr Maan Singh Khurana , I'm as stubborn as u ,, I don't like defeat , I won't go from here nd eat ur mind ,so it's better for u to eat ur food nd save ur mind .

Maan groaned in anger nd shouted : DM,,, DM ,, Adi ,, throw her out from my house .

Geet : ur house ,, O hello , correction ,, this is Khurana uncle's house not urs , throw me out ,, huuhh ,, come on have ur meal nd break this hunger strike ,, Adi raise his head rest .

She went near his bed but Maan gave a burning glare to her ,, his jaws tightend nd nosetrill flattered ,, face turned red in anger , Dadima was watching from outside nd Adi was standing helplessly .

Maan: how shameless u r ? standing here even I m insulting u ,, don't u have any self respect ,, who made u a Dr ? what greed brought u here ? leave from my house , I don't want to see ur face .

Geet: OK Bhasmasur , better ,, save ur energy for another day ,, it's better for u to eat ur meal fast to save ur self from my torturous face ,, i'll leave nd u'll get ur peace back ,, decide quickly what do u want ,, peace of ur mind OR me in front of u ?

Maan: God !!! why u made this lady ,, OK , remaine here , I won't eat ,, let me see how long u cn stand here ?

Geet: why wd I stand Mr ,, I m not a fool ,, i'll sit near u on ur bed ,, in front of u ,, let me see how much u abuse me nd curse me ,, I think u have a good collection ,, in fact I was missing ur scolding from many days .

Geet sat near his feet on his bed giving him a sarcastic smile ,, there DM was fearing for Maan's outburst ,, she don't know that Geet's stubbornness broke him or not like last time ,, Adi was standing aside in some good hope ,, Maan was shooting glares at her nd she was smiling at him which annoying him more.

Maan: u r taking advantages of my helplessness ,, if I was fine then u'll be out of KC in next moment avoiding my order .

Geet: is that so ,, hope it'll happen soon ,, u throw me out nd I promise after that I won't show u my face ,, nd 2ndly , i'm not taking advantages but it's u who is making u helpless ,, ur mind nd heart r fit nd fine ,, using ur energy to scold ppl nd sply me ,, use this mind for good , think good nd positive , but no , u r becoming Bhasmasur's pupil nd want to burn all in ur anger ,, thinking only about u .

Maan : grrr,, i'm not thinking about me girl ,, I making all free from my cursed life ,, they wr living in hell with me ,, this life is useless ,, a burd ...

Geet: stop it ,, u r not burden nd u r not useless ,, in med science if d mind is healthy nd working well then human cn do anything nd there is a hope for good,, u r a researcher saw many failures ,, hope for success till last moments but loose nd tried again ,, ur mind is as sharp as before nd u cn do anything with this ,, don't make it still .

Maan: don't preach me ,, I know myself better than u ,, ppl didn't know my pain ,, it was easy to preach other but hard to bear every moments ,, better u leave nd don't interfere in my matters .

Geet: if u think u r useless then give ur mind to me ,, I need that .

Maan: what ,, r u any jocker ?

Geet: nope ,, u think that if body is working only then u r fit nd useful otherwise u r useless with this still body ,, OK , then give me ur mind which is also useless for u .

Maan : stop this crap nd get lost from here .

Geet: why ? what's wrong in that if u have something which cn help me a lot , give me that ,, everything is useless for u .

Maan groaned : God!! Save me from this crap ,, why d hell she is behind me nd eating my brain .

Geet laughed : why r u worried about ur brain ,, let it be eaten by me . tumhare liye to bekaar hei .

Maan gave an angry glate to her nd shouted: Dadimaaa ,, plzz save me from this crap,, throw her out .

Geet : don't harash DM ,, do u listen her , no then why she listen to u ? why do u want everything according to ,, selfish .

Maan angrily : i'm not selfish .

Geet : Ok , prove ,, think about DM's happiness , smile nd eat this food .

Maan : not again , u devil .

DM nd Adi wr waching this drama quietly ,, they didn't know d outcome .

Maan: I want to kill u Dr. u r going on my nerve .

Geet: I swear , i'll wait for that day dear Bhasmasur .

Maan huffed nd turned his face ,, Geet was watching him with a smile .. bahot akdu hei .

Their eyes met many times for fraction of secs nd Maan turned his face but he find her staring at him when he looked at her ,, she was sitting infront of him ,, her fragrance was forcing him to look at her ,, her sweet dimpled smile attracting him ,, nothing was there to divert his mind ,, half nd hr passed like this ,, every min was going hard to bear for Maan when she was sitting near him ,, he was annoying at his state ,, why she was affecting him , a lifeless man ,, he cursed his luck that he cn't even move his hand to push her away from him ,, few more min passed .

Maan: God!!! ,,OK fine , Adi ,fed me nd show her d main gate to go from here ,, watching her near me is worst than anything .

Geet: very Good decision ,, mai khila du.. a victory morsel .

Maan: grrr,,, get lost from here , now i'm eating nd Adi nd DM r here for me .

Geet: only one .

Maan: Dadima ,, plzz save me form this monster .

Geet: it's u who is behaving like Bhasmasur ,, wanted to turn me in ash in d fire of ur anger nd telling me monster , remember if u trouble DM again i'll show u my MonsterGiri ,, samajhe (she pointed her finger at him ) Adi have it nd fed , nd u , have full meal otherwise i'll sleep here in Adi's bed wishing u sweet dreams at nyt.

Adi lifted his bed from head ,,Geet handed him d plate nd came out with smile saying mrng mei BF acche se kerna aur meds bhi le lena .

Maan shouted: get lost u Devil .

Geet: thank u for this lovely name.

Geet joined DM in corridor who smiled at her nd mouthed thanks cupping her cheek with her hand ,, there was love nd gratitude in her eyes for Geet.


Precap ---- search for Natrajan ...


Part - 14




sorry for mistakes ...




Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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part - 12

wow lovely omg superb update..te way geet came to meet dadi and dadi felt peace seeing geet was lovely emotional..te way geet feeling bad for dadi thinking she is bearing everything all alone and dadi asking geet to stay with her was lovely..te way geet felt my maan ki stress and soothing with her fingers was lovely touchy..te way geet in my maan ki study and came to know abt te pendrive content was my maan's and her shock was lovely superb..te way geet checking everything but scared to ask my maan thinking abt his big big eyes was lovely..te way geet talking with dadi to know abt my maan atleast she got one que..i love te update so much yar

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