ff Memories. Part 7, page 9. 5th may 2015

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Hi friends. This is my first writing. And I'm also not good in English. So plz forgive me for my mistake. I have done some changes.

In my story geet n dav don't get married.
Mariage day dav and his family didn't come. They cheat geet and her family. Geet family become silent because of their family respect but geet want justices. For that her family become her enemy. So here geet is not pregnant.



MEMORIES



Geet is a happy, lively, fun loving girl who hails from a small town in Punjab. She belongs to a close-knit, traditionalist family which upholds honor, respect and dignity above all else. The story begins with Geet's wedding. Her family find a man Dav who is NRI. Geet's family give him geets all property and jewallary before marriage. but in mariage day dav and his family didn't come. They cheat geet and her family. Geet family become silent because of their family respect but geet want justices. For that her family become her enemy.

She revil all the trueth of her family infront of villegers. And police
arrested Brij. severing ties with her family from Hoshiyarpur geet move
to delli and worked under Maan Singh Khurana. Maan is a man she
coincidentally met in her hometown and had frequent unpleasant
encounters with. Maan has saved Geet's life many times; after wishing
for not seeing each other again, the moment Geet's in trouble, Maan
comes to her aid. Furthermore, since being new in Delhi and not knowing
anything, Geet works in Maan's office. By accident, Maan is Dev's elder
brother; Dev returns to India after Maan clears Dev's debts. Dev is
oblivious that Geet works for Maan, but can see a visible change in his
brother due to Geet's presence. The ever-increasing love between Maan
and Geet. Maan n Geet fallen in love and they disieded to get married.

On
the day that Geet and Maan are about to be officially engaged, Geet
finds out that Dev is Maan's brother. Geet told him that Dev, his
brother, was the man that cheatab cheat her. Maan is shocked,
heartbroken, and then resolved to get justice for his Geet. He calls the
police and has Dev and Naintara arrested for their fraud. And then they
decided to get married. Marriage day Naintara come and try to kill
geet. But maan saved her and accidentally Naintara fall down and goes to
coma. but NT's brother Arjun misunderstood and thought that maan push
naintara down. So he plan to trap any (maan sister). Any fallen love
with arjun. And try to harm her but couldn't because he also fallen love
with her. Maan n geet marriage happend sweetably. Then they went their
honymoon. Where they meet dav. Maan got angry and they. goes back to
delhi. but on way Geet childishly insists on driving and Maan gives in
to her demands. Geet's inexperience leads to an accident and Maan is
gravely injured. The hospital tells Geet to arrange for a blood, and
when Geet is unable to find any other compatible donors, Geet goes to
Dev. Dev agrees to donate the blood, but only if Geet promises to keep
the truth from Maan. Maneet return to the Khurana manor, and some thugs
beat up Dev and leave him on the Khurana grounds. Dadi guilts Geet into
allowing Dev to stay and to keeping this a secret from Maan, Dadi just
wants everyone to forget and live happily together.Geet forgive dav.
When Maan finds Dev there, he reluctantly allows him to stay when Dadi
guilts him into it and Geet takes Dadi's side and forgave dav. he became
angry n insults Geet by saying that she might have "safaid" (white)
blood. He also says that Geet may not know how to preserve her own
pride, because she forgave Dev, but Maan does have self-respect. Geet is
incredibly hurt by Maan's words, and leaves the house, breaking all
ties with the Khurana family and friends that love her. Geet went to
amritsar her masi's home.

Here maan understood his mistake and
forgave dav. Maan want to apologies to geet. Maan finds Geet in Amritsar
and apologizes for his behavior. Geet forgave maan and came back to
delhi. And find out Pammy (dav mother, maan stem mother) take all
property craftily. Manipulating Maan with her beguiling words, she gets
Maan to admit that he would happily give up his wealth to his mother and
younger brother. He walks away with Geet. When Pammi finds out that
Maan must sign over his wealth in order for her to gain control, Pammi
plans on manipulating him once more into signing the papers. Lest we
forget how evil Pammi has become, we find out that she has been drugging
Dadi Ma, and there was no stroke. When Maan finds out about this, he
absolutely refuses to sign anything, and tells Pammi that he will go to
the police and see to it that Pammi is punished. Pammi's goons
kidnapping Maan.


Geet Handa




Maan Singh Khurana


Dav Singh Khurana


Naintara Dav Singh khurana


Anvesha Khurana


Savitri devi (Dadi maa)
Dadi of Maan and Dev and Anvesha


Vikrant ( his full name is...???? You have to read the story.)


Arjun Rathore (
brother of Naintara)


Pialy Handa (Pia)
(Geets Cousin sister)


Maira Sharma (Meera)
(
Old college friend of Maan and Dev)



Samira Singhania.


Index (Below)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good storyline... Something closer to the original... Lets relish and relive the old memories with a new twist...
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Memories



Part 1

Geet came to know where Maan is n go there. there maan and pammi's goons r faighting where Maan n Geet got injared and geet fall down in river. mean time Dav got police in pammy's place and she is got arrested.

In hospital all r tensed for maan helth and they can't found where geet is. Docter come to Dav
Doctor: Mr Dav, Mr Maan is now fine. He is in sleep now. In his sleep he call for geet. do u find geet.
Dav: no. Pata nahi geet kasi hogi. o river me gir gayi thi. or ab o mil nahi rari.

same tine maan screams
Maan: GEEETT...

Edited by sonaly1234 - 10 years ago
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Index

Part 1, 2 (page 1)

Part 3, 4 (page 2)

Part 5 (page 4)

Part 6 (page 8)


Edited by sonaly1234 - 10 years ago
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Itna fast farword me q jarahi ho🤣
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Memories

part 2


Geet lie down on Sd hospital bed. A man talk to her doc.
Doc.: mr. Vikrant the girl is now unconscious we can't say anything now. unke head pe chot lagi hai. bawse ye he kon.
Vikrant: muje nahi pata doc. ye larki muje nadi me behte hui mili. Muje lagta hai ki sayead ye nadi me gir gayi thi.

On other side pinki come Sd hospital for her fathers regular checkup.
pinky: papa ap bato me abvi washroom hoke api hu.

on the way of washroom she bump on Vikrant.
pinky: sorry.
Vikrant: its ok.
And pinkis eyes fall on geet and goes to her room. Vikrant also come behind on pinki.
pinki: doc. geet ko kiya hua hai!!!.
doc.: Ap inhe jante hai??
pinki: ha doc. ye meri friend hai. kiya hua hai ise??
Vikrant: ye muje river me behte hui mili. Or mene ninhe hospital me le aya.
doc.: inke sar pe chot laga hai. ye kuchi der me hos me ayenge to ham kuch keh payenge.
pinki: geet thik to ho jayegi na??
doc. ha ha bilkul.
And then geet come conscious.
Geet: me kaha hu.
doc.:ap hospital me hai. to ab ap muje ye bataye ki ap ka nam kiya hai.
Geet: geet.
Doc.: pura nam.
geet. mera nam sirf geet hai.
pinki: wy geet ye tu kiya keh rahi hai??
geet: ap kon ho??
pinki:??????. tu apni best friend ko nahi pehchan nahi pa rahi. me pinki hu tere bachpan ki dost. tu ase kase vul sakti hai?
doc. stop pinki
doc.: accident ke pehle ap kaha thee. apko kuch yead hai?
geet: me to... hosiarpur se bus me delhi aa rahi thi. or uske badh...???..
geet put her hand on head.
and she get unconscious.
pinki: doc. geet ko kiya ho gaya? o asa kiu bol rahi hai. ousko delhi aye huye. 6 month ho gaya hai. Geet ye kiu keh rahi hai ki o bus me thi. or asa lagraha hai ki o muje pehli bar mil rahi hai. kia hua hai geet ko.
doc.: muje lag raha hai ki geet apni 6 month ki memories vul gayi hai.
pinki: doc. asa kese ho sakta hai?
doc.:kavi kavi asa hota hai.
Vikrant: innhe sab yead kab ayega??
doc.: kuch keh nahi sakte. Sayead 1 din, ek mahina, yea ek sal. Kuch keh nahi sakte. hosakta hai inki yeaddas kavivi na lote.
pinki n Vikrant: ??????
Vikrant phone ring. and he goes outside.
pinki.: par doc. Inn 6 monthe me geet ke life me bohat kuch hua. Do mahine pehle hi geet ki sadi hui hai.
pinki put her palm on her mouth.
pinki: Ab me maan sir ko kia kahungi... Dadima dev sir!!!!!! Dav sir...????? Oh no, agar geet ne dav sir ko dekh lia to kiya hoga. Ab me kiya karu, ab me kiya karu,...??????
She get panic.
doc.:???????

Edited by sonaly1234 - 10 years ago
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nice story... toh iss baar geet ka memory loss hua hai...
Bechaare Maan ko bohut dukh hoga...

But I am sur that he will not let any stone unturned for winning jer love again...
I've one small request, pls make them fall in love again, memory gain enei dikhana...

Great story... 😉
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Interesting story! 😊Quite similar to the original. I would be grateful if you could translate the hindi phrases into English as I'm unable to understand it much 😕
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Memories


part 3


On city hospital Maan gets conscious and get panic. He wants to meet Geet. Doc. n sisters r can't control him. Dav also try to make him understand. But he is out of control, so doc. inject him and he get unconscious again. Dadima, dav n anny get worried. They could not found geet. Adi come to hospital.

Adi: Dav sir We could not found geet. But sir I am trying my best. Don't warry.

Dadima: I don't know i want my geet back.

Dav: We r trying dadima.

Adi: Dav sir apse kuch bat karni thi.

Dav: I am coming. tum bahar wait karo.

******

Here in Sd hospital

pinki: ab me kiya karu??...

then her father come and ask what happend. Pinki all tell her father. mean time Vikrant also come. Pinki introduce Vikrant to her father.

And then doc. come

doc.: Look pinki u have to take care that geet don't get traced herself. And don't remained her any think. Those thing which she cannot belive.

pinki: then what should i tell her when she ask me what happend in her life in these 6 months??

Vikrant: I think we shold tell her that in these 6 months she was in coma.

pinkis father: I think Vikrant is right. doc. when we can take her home?

doc.: When she get her consicous.

and doc. leave

pinkis father: (at Vikrant) beta ji thank you.

Vikrant: it s my duty uncle. I should leave now. You take cear of her.

pinki: Geet se milke to jao.

Vikrant: No. kisi or din. You guys are here to take care of her. So I should leave. Bawsay vi muje kuch argent kam hai jo tumhari friend ki bawajase der hogaye (and he laugh).

pinki also smile.

Vikrant give his card to pinki say bye to pinki and her father.

Pinkis father: Barahi achcha lardka hai.

****

At outside of geet caben
Pinki: papa ab me maan sir ko kia kahu.

pinkis father: I think u should call adi. And aramse tell him everything. Then he can talk to Khurana family. You can not talk to maan sir, becaus his health is not well.

pinki: u r right papa .
And then doc. inform them that Geet in consicous.
they go near geet. Geet don't know them. So she try to remember them.

pinki: wy geet. ase kia dekh rahi hai? me teri bachpan ka dost pinki hu.

pinkis father: Or me manchanda uncle.

Now geet can remember them.

Geet: O sorry uncle. me apko pehchan nahi paai. sorry pinki.

pimki manchanda: its ok.

Geet: But me hospital me kase ayi. Me to bus me thi.

pinki: Your bus meet an accident. and you were very injered. For that you r in hospital.

When pinki tell geet about her accident geets eyes fall on calender and become confeuse.

Geet: How many days i am in hospital.

pinki become panic n say
6 months

Geet eyes become beg.
pinki: you r in coma.

Geet belive that n relax
manchanda: Baki bate ghar jake karna.

pinki excused her self and go to call adi.

****

Whole family and adi r in Maans room and trying to calm maan. But he is not listening to anyone. He wants his geet back.

dadima: beta calm down. geet mil jayegi, Agar ap asa karenge to kese chalega. Ap kovi to hamari madat karni hogi na...

maan litel calm down. Dadima continues
dadima: Kaha hai hamar o Maan Singh Khurana jiske name se hi sab dar jate thee. kaha hai geet dust danab bala MSK. To find out geet u have to become the Maan Singh Khurana.

maan: Yes dadima you r right. Geet tum kahi vi ho me tumhe dun nikalunga. Geet tumhe mujse koi juda nahi kar sakta. koi nahi. khud vagban vi nai.

****

sorry for mistake. I am not that good writer. so plzz.. forgive me for my mistakes.
Edited by sonaly1234 - 10 years ago
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great story..
pls make sure that maan finds geet and let him woo her again...
is bikrant the stalker guy??

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