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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n splendid update! well written. Maan lost wthout Geet! Maan has a dream! Lovely dream! Maan realises his love! Maan gets to knw abt Geet n wt Dev did! Hate Dev! Dev is running 4 his life! Hope Maaneet meet! update soon! interesting precap



Thnx dear... Yup it was a dream... N it had effect in maan.

Maaneet meet ka I don't knw 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_ya1408

Finally maan realised his feelings for geet
Dev should receive punishment from geet only
Continue soon dear
And why only 3 chapters plz do continue na plz



Yup maan has realised finally...

About continuing m not sure... As that is it ; it is already all the story j had for this... May be it can extent 2-3 rts more with some twists conning in my mind; but to continue I will have to turn the story 360 degrees... N m not sure it will b as intresting as it has been so far!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6


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<div>that restaurant scene I thought the story have directed to some years later and now Maan-Geet are married...I was happy whatever happen but now they are married and may be u will show what happen in-between as flash back...but it was all dream...Geet bhi sapne dekh rahi hai and Maan bhi and they are still taking so much time to realize their feelings...

at last Maan realized he loves Geet...

and after knowing what Dev did to her he has vowed to take her revenge from Dev and make everything right for his own conscious...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...




From my point of view I put that dream sequence to show the difference between their dreams; while for geet his dreams are no less than nightmares
On the other hand maan is dreaming a golden future with her!

And for maan realising love; di I think that the type of character maan is; a corporate beast, he would not easily flow in emotions or trap! So he is bound to take time n analyise before committing himself!

Thnx di 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: leenukiguru

Awww!!! thank you so much dear maan realised his feelings for geet
and
he have punish dev
nice part
looking forward to know more



Thnx di 😊

Glad to see big comment from u.. 🤗

It was already time for mana to realise his feelings and so he did 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jayshu17

<font color="#330066" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Fantastic update!!!Finally Maan realized his love for Geet...He came to know about Geet's truth from detective...he felt numb and thinks that how she must be through all this alone to save her mother from Dev...now Maan arranged for the grand welcome of Dev... will Maan able to meet Geet before she leave the place forever...??Waiting eagerly for the next update...Thanks for the PM dear...</font>



Thank u dear...

Yes the facts were imp for maan to knw so he realise the depth of his feelings...
N now that he has he will do all in his powers to make wrong right. My only fear is ki isme usse late na ho jaye 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nihatri

U r a great writer no doubt but u update very late



Hehehe... Actually one thing is m busy and add-ons to it are m lazy n moody 🤣

Anyways thnx dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: idunno

this was fentastic story but may be due to delayed updates people may have shy away from this ff.

so maan and geet both are in love now but confession is still faraway and dev is geting his punishment and still more thing is in store for him,Agrand welcome by both?
cha cha cha...poor Dev ab to wo kam se gaya.



Oh god I missed to see ur comment n thought u forgot to comment this tym

I don't want to delay purposely bas ho hata hai 😕
But m glad for the continued support of so many...

Confession is faraway right! Also there are still many folds yet to open for this to complete
Dev's chapter closes n opens a new one... As many are requesting to extend m thinking to add a twist 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff3399">Pooja🤗...thank u for the lovely update and pm...finally Maan is thinking about his feelings for Geet...omg what a sweet dream it was...Mr.and Mrs.Khurana were so adorable...he is all lost in Geetland...poor guy is badly smitten by the love bug❤️...the things the detective told him made him regret his behaviour with Geet ...glad he openly admiitted his love...waiting to see how he makes things right...but will it be too late for Maaneet...Dev has escaped😲😡...Sam and Geet are set with their plan for revenge too...eagerly waiting for the next part😊</font>



Thanks ratna di... Sorry cell se reply kiya toh post kharab ho gaya... I always love ur posts!

Hai na... I too loved tht dream sequence... Hayye so adoreable! But only a dream... N maan ka sapna toh tutne wala hai 🤬

He will make things right but he will get late na 🤣

Achha Maine zyada hi story reveal kar di... Chalo ab bas 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ambbiha

Maan realised his love for geet

Dev deserve it and waiting to know what maan planned for him

Hope maan able to convince geet😉



Wait yo see the plans and execution 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

amazing part maans dream was so beautiful finally he realised that he loves her n now he knows all about dev but she is going nice update



Thnx dear..
Glad u like the dream part ❤️

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