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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Part 31A & 31B

Wonderful Updates

Geet is not at peace and so worried about her baby, contacted her friend and told her the whole story, Nidhi advised Geet to take help from her boss as he is not a wrong person,Nidhi is such understanding and mature girl, loved it

That chudail Surbhi came to KM with her parents for patch up, shameless creature did not have a little bit guilty for losing her baby, Maan was all ready to show her, her,s right place, has arranged all proofs against her, thank god bala tali, poor maan crying for his baby


OMG OMG OMG so so so Lovely Teaser, can,t wait for the update, pls update soon





heheheh
yr chudail :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

~EK ANJAANI DOR~

@rashmi di , di after reading your comment on surbhi I actually goggled how a chudail looks like and what she does.. Guess what I finally managed to get it and surbhi was even more than that.. Loved your comments

And all others too.. I am glad I am able to entertain all of you..

Since many readers asked for next update so here it is..

PART 32

The constable took surbhi , she fretted and asked her father for help but nothing was in her favor now.. She was taken along with her bf and goon.. Leaving a broken maan who finally could shed tears on the death of his baby..

Though there was still no confirmation about the baby but maan had lost all his hopes regarding the baby.. The adverse condition in which surbhi left the baby.. His heart clenched when he heard the goon for the first time where he left the baby.. maan had got to know that his wife had given birth to a baby boy and he had left to shimla in the pretext of the work and there his men had already the goon and all other hospital authorities who had literally sold their profession for some money.. There was a nurse who forged the documents and in the hospital documents it was written that it was still birth.. maan couldn't believe that someone can actually plan all these just for hurting him..

Maan's position had been helpful for him and even the hospital authorities were shocked after knowing that their staff did that , the staff were handed to the police while maan's body guards had already all the information..

Maan reached the place where the goon and rahul (surbhi's bf) was held captive by his men. His eyes were red and he knew that it was the last time he can search for his lost baby, the so called news about their divorce was already in media and maan just have to give the confirmation, then everything will be over for surbhi , he had planned to ask her about the baby and if she still denied that he will have no choice left then bringing her true self in front of her parents , he was very well aware what was going on.. the day she threatened him about the divorce he knew that she will definitely do something and the same day her mother had called daadima and that was the day maan had decided to give her a second chance in a mere lost hope that she may tell him.. Whereas his men found her goon and gave him all information and called him to shimla..the web of lies and deceit she had given him was something that made him to just knew about his baby, his heart was already having a intuition that he may not get baby now but at least by giving the punishment to his murderers, at least he can give his lost baby a little satisfaction that his father had punished the culprits..

Maan held his cheeks, his hands were tied and he was bleeding already.. He was a wanted criminal and this was in his favor..

Maan : where did you left the baby.. maan asked with his eyes full of anger.. How much money did that B**** gave you..

Goon was already scared; maan's bg's had done their work superbly. His all bones were broken..There were multiple fractures.. he didn't wanted anything now and immediately told the place.. maan went to the place along with the goon , he even told maan that surbhi wanted to kill the baby , maan's inside shudder knowing that the one percent chance that was left was also gone.. And his mind was just forming the first picture that was of dhruv baby...it was the same park where he saw geet's baby for the first time and that time, this goon was there.. maan asked him about dhruv now.. He had doubt that it was also related to surbhi too..

Maan : why did you wanted to kidnap a baby , you were here to kidnap who asked you... Goon shuddered and immediately told maan..

Goon: surbhi madam asked to kidnap any child and I just came to get him..maan kicked him and punched him//and asked his bgs to take him away..

Maan st : why surbhi wanted to kidnap baby and what she have to do with dhruv , or it is I am assuming things..She wanted any baby to be with me ...

Maan : that woman can do anything... I don't know what she is made up off .. itna kuch karke bhi there is no regret.. and she still wants me to accept her.. maan was disgusted on himself more and when he returned delhi , he had planned to let goon meet surbhi and all their talks he heard , with her every word his blood boiled and he knew that no second chance can mend her..she is born sinner and he will do everything to make her pay.. Unknown to maan , geet had heard all surbhi and goon's talks but failed to notice maan who was also there and he too didn't see geet .

Though maan enquired everywhere but he didn't went to PS and he would have, he would have got the clue about his baby.. That was the mistake maan did.. and went back to delhi as he needed to have a final confrontation with surbhi and her parents..

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Back to present

Maan told everything to his mother and daadi and even answered why he wanted to give surbhi a second chance..

Daadima : maan what was the need to even think of surbhi again.. aap nahi jante the usne kya kiya phir bhi aap taiyaar the use apni izndagi me shamil karne ke liye..

Maan : daadima , it was her father , aap janti hai uncle came to meet me.. it was because of him I didn't give anything in media.. His reputation would have been spoiled.. Whatever surbhi did was not his mistake..aap janti hai.. he had already suffered a cardiac attack when she left with the baby.. and how could I have done that could be dangerous for him.. Baby toh chala gaya daadima , I had thought that surbhi will tell me the truth , if I will agree to stop the divorce par usne aisa kuch nai kiya.. And believe me dadima I am having nothing but hatred for that lady now..

Gauri : mrs kashyap is the reason maan.. If she had told all this to her husband..itna kuch nahi hota.. unki ek galti ne aapki zindagi barbaad kardi.. maan kya sach me baby ke bare me kuch nahi pata chala.. Ho sakta hai wo aadmi jhooth bol raha ho.. aapne orphanages me check kiya..

Maan smiled painfully.. He had already done that..

Maan : mom , I can just pray mera bacha jahan bhi ho theek ho I don't know but mera dil nahi manta ki use kuch hua hai.. but kisi ne nahi dekha use..i don't even know where is baby.. I am such a incapable father.. nahi dhund paya apne bache ko mom... I think it's some sin done by me jiski sazaa mere bache ne bhugti hai.. See I am having nothing now..Silent tears flowed out of his eyes and his mother engulfed him in her arms.. maan was shedding tears for his baby and here someone was shedding tears listening to him..

Geet had came to meet maan as per nidhi advice and what she all got to know left her speechless , she never thought in her dreams that her baby will belong to someone whom she denied even to touch him.. guilt seeped in her and she immediately left the mansion..

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I hope now maan's condition, his position; his decisions are justified/..

Don't worry I won't leave any loop hopes in the story..

I think within one or two updates you will get the teaser part

Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update is Emotional Yet Hardcore

Maan just wanted to give Surbhi a second chance if she told the whereabouts of his baby but knowing the truth that she planned just to hurt him by getting rid of the baby and wanting the goon to kidnap any baby so that she can give that baby to Maan and he'll think its his baby but the goon and Surbhi spoke everything breaking Maan's last hopes of finding his baby .
Geet however comes to seek Maan's advice and hears about the truth of Dhruv and now she feels guilty
but now how will Geet give her baby up to Maan because yes its his baby but she found the baby and loved him as if she herself have given birth .

Surbhi could have used any means to hurt Maan but as a mother
carrying the baby , giving birth and still planning to kill the baby
she truly does not deserve anything good in her life
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional update... maan wanted to give surabhi a second chance to know about the baby... maan is completely broken after knowing the truth from the goon... geet heard everything and she became emotional...
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Posted: 10 years ago
so geet got to know dhruv is maan's baby will she give him his baby back n go away??
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan explained all things 2 mom n daddi
surbhi is such a b****
geet hear all maan's talk now she is feeling guilty n insecure
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harman12

so geet got to know dhruv is maan's baby will she give him his baby back n go away??

yes she will
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: preetymaaneet

maan explained all things 2 mom n daddi

surbhi is such a b****
geet hear all maan's talk now she is feeling guilty n insecure



yup geet iss now feeling insecure about her baby
after hearing maan
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

jaldi karo

im waiting

updated di
where t u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very emotional update..Maan was ready to accept Surabhi back in his life just to get any information about his baby.. After the truth was revealed, she didn't deserve any chance.. Maan was broken unable to find his baby..Geet overheard his talks with his Mom and realised that the baby in question is none other than her Dhruv.. Superbly written.. Loved it..

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