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part 93
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Maan is falling for Geet slowly and strongly...
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part 94
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Daadima asked openly to Maan...
now what will he do...
poor Geet hope she doesnt get blamed for this...
cont soon dear...
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Updating

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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 94


Part - 95



Don't confuse ur path with ur destination . Just because it's stormy now doesn't mean u r not headed for sunshine .

This conversation brought all at d dead end ,, deep silence prevailed there waiting for Maan's reply ,, Yash nd Rashi's wr eagerly waiting nd staring at Maan for reply ,, Maan's throat went dried ,, he gulp hard nd looked down defeated ,, this situation had to come one day nd he was ready to face but fearing for d pain which all wr going to face ,, specially his Dad nd Geet .

Rashi: Maan .

Yash was watching Maan's hesitance nd tensed face ,, he became restless nd asked in a low voice .

Yash: say something Maan .

Maan nerviouly chewed his lower lip ,, rubbed his hands , pressing his eyes tightly he noded his hesd in Yes .

Rashi gasped putting her hand on her mouth , DM left a deep sigh nd nodded her head nd Yash was staring at Maan unable to react at this unexpected reply ,, he wdn't hope in his dream that Maan cd think about Geet ,, all wr speechless nd trying to get d reality .. Maan accepted that he likes Geet !! ,, How nd when it happened ?

It was Rashi who broke d silence with her shaking voice ,, she was still in shock .

Rashi: aur Geet ? Kya wo bhi ..

Maan : no .

DM : then how cd u Maan ? what made u to think for her ?

Rashi: did u tell her about ur liking for her ?

Maan: No , but ...

DM : then how cd u Maan ? r u crazy ? Why this stupidity ,, she is a mother Maan , how cn u think for her ?

Maan: why not DM ? what's wrong in that?

DM : u never like her then why all of sudden this type of thinking ? u r mistaken Maan ,, it is ur sympathy nd care for them bcoz u r regretting for hurting her .

Rashi: Maan , I m not getting what made u to think like this for her ? this is unbelievable ,, aur wo ab 3 saal pahale wali Geet nahi hei , wo ek bacche ki Maa hei ,, Yash aap esse kuch samjhao na ,, ye kya pagalpan hei ?

Yash was puzzled nd unable to react ,, it was not d matter of Maan but Geet too ,, Geet who had faced rejections in this same house with same ppl yrs back nd left this house ,, he preferred his family that time nd agreed to sent her away ,, though there was a burden on his heart too for not giving a proper place in his family , but he didn't want to hurt her again ,, this time he wd go in Geet's favour to protect her .

Yash: Maan , she still bearing d pain which she got from here yrs back,, I won't bear if someone try to hurt her again ,, specially u nd Maa,, think many times before looking at her .

Maan: Dad I don't want to hurt her , plzz trust me ,, I m ready to spend my whole life regretting that I hurt her nd u too ,, I want to give her all d happiness which she nd manu deserve .

DM: this is what I m saying Maan ,, it is not liking it is ur guilt ,,u r helping her nd cn help her in future too ,, we also want them happy but u r taking things differently ,, helping her a diff thing nd ur marriage is diff .

Rashi: Maan how cn u think about her when she always tried to keep a distance from us , even she didn't want to live here , u forced her ,, ur one sided thinking for her is ur foolishness ,, it cn hurt her more nd us too .

Maan: that's why I requested u to drop this idea of marriage ,, I m happy what I m ,,

Rashi: but u have to settle down one day na ..?

Maan: i'll when she accept .

Rashi: what ? Maan r u mad ?

Yash: if she won't , then ? remember I m with Geet , nd this time i'll go with her .

Rashi: Yash ,I think u have to make Maan understand , prob is with Maan not with Geet .

Maan: there is no issue nd stop all this here .

DM : but this is not d solution Maan .

Rashi (annoyed) : why r u adamant Maan when she was unaware nd not interested ?

Maan: I m sorry , I won't think my life without her nd manu .

DM huffed : again , coz of her , this family is going to face rift .

Maan: DM plzz , don't blame her . (he was hurt that DM was accusing her nd this is what Geet didn't want to face ...accusations )

Yash: Maa , not a word against Geet , we r at fault not see.

DM: OK fine , but tell us what made u think only for her who was a mother nd not interested in u ,, there r lots of girls who r good for u nd for d family .

Yash : yes Maan , life is not a joke ,, don't think in d gush of emotions or in effect of ur guilt ,, loving nd caring a child from a distance is easy but making him/her a part of ur family is very difficult nd u saw that when I brought Geet here .

Rashi: we brought Geet in this family to give her some love ,care nd protection but what she got ? even Yash nd I was helpless in front of u nd Maa ,, Maan do u think what u r saying ... there is a child , who belongs to other, cn u accept him as ur child nd love him as urs for ever ?

DM: don't repeat d history again Maan ,, after many yrs we all r happy ,, let her live her life like she wants nd don't force her ,, don't think about Geet , she has her own life with her child ,, to help her we all r with her .

Maan was hurt with d reactions of his family for Geet nd Manu ,, why they r not ready to accept them ? Yes they r reapeating d history again ,, doing same mistake not accepting a child nd girl wholeheartedly ,, that time he was wrong but not this time ,, Geet's fear was right , there wr many Qs to face nd to reply which cd hurt her deep again , but he had to give her that place in d family which was her nd manu ,, he wd reply nd protect her ,, he won't let them go away from him this time .

Maan : Manu nd Geet r not others , they r belong to me ,, they r a part of me ,, I won't leave them alone ,, Geet accept it or not but I have to live with them .

Rashi angrily : enough Maan .

DM: stop this Maan , how cn u say this ? r we nothing for u ? u r choosing them over ur family nd ur future .

Yash was staring at Maan ,, d firmness in his words was showing his attachment Manu nd Geet but d prob was she was unknown with all this ,, it was only from Maan's side ,, Yash too was confused , why Maan think about Geet ?

Maan: they r mine family too DM ,, they belong to our family .

DM: this is wrong Maan ,, u r not alone nd ur decision will effect all of us ,, u have to think about our feelings too .

Maan: i'll , but I have to think about Geet nd Manu too ,, they r mine nd belong to Khuranas.

Rashi: Ma was right Maan , this US trip changed u a lot , u r avoiding us nd I m afraid again u r going to hurt all in ur foolishness ,,, Dusre ki Biwi aur bacche ko apnana assan nahi hota .


Precap ---- avowing the Truth ...

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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