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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Me first yupiiieee
Geet kya me ye jawab deti hn Geet ko nh krni chahye ye marriage maan dont deserve her..abhi usko yahan se chale jana chahye apne bache k sth Maan ko sirf baby ki fikr h but he doesn't change a bit b night life tu chal rhi h uski ye tu wo bat hogai chit b meri pat bhi meri...Bacha b mil jaega n kbhi attract hwa tu nam ki biwi bhi..I dont want any relationship between them until maan change a bit ...I know I know tu bolegi phr se bhashan de rhi h dekh mere bolne se kya jata u kne better about ur characters so tu behtar hi kregi but I just put my POV n I trust u wd the story richu ...THANKs for the update :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
feel very disapointed and angry at maan yaar😡😡😡..oh god he is hurting geet in a wost possible way..i really dnt know when he is going to realize the damage he is doing to the angel and the life inside of her😭😭...tooo painful to see geet like this...pls end her misery soon and start with maan😡😡cant wait to see him feel whatever pain he gave her..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi dear! hope u r feeling better! Thanks 4 updating! superb intense update! Wonderfully written! Geet leaves the hospital lost in her thoughts! Maan is angry n goes to KM n yells 4 Geet! Dadi irritated n warns him 2 keep quite as Aliya is asleep! he wants Geet! Dadi tells him she is nt here n is suspicious n asks if did something! Dev senses th tension n intervenes! he asks Maan wt happened! Maan explains wt dadi wanted n tht he n Geet argued! Dev tries 2 make understand n to be angry! he needs to give time 2 Geet! Maan leaves without a word! the doc calls him! she asks him 2 see him n he refuses bt she tells him if he wants his baby alive den he shld come! Maan goes! the doc tells him abt Geet's condition! she is critical! also shouts Maan 4 his negligence! Maan realises that the situation is serious! Geet siting on a bench in the park! she resolves to b strong 4 her baby n nt to let Maan's behaviour affect her! her baby is her priority! she leaves 4 KM! she realises she is hurting her baby! update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Even now i m also curious y maan wants to keep geet with him? Just for the baby or smthing else? Nice update...
Edited by mauaa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
painful part
geet's heart shattered once again hearing maan's thoughts about love
she went to meet doctor for checkup doctor scolded her for her negligency for not taking proper care of herself
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
And I hope she sticks to her resolution
I think she will
Enough is enough
Her baby is top priority
The hell with maan
Its his prerogative to change or not
She has nothing to do with him
Baby is all that matters
And should matter
Seeing as they aren't together
Lecture naa dein toh kya karrein maan
You only think of yourself
While there is nothing wrong in that
But with her condition
You have to focus on her too
Unless of course you want them both to die
Then please carry on
Not that geet gives a damn
Am glad she is thinking of just her baby
And won't let maan affect her
Both doc and dev told him off
Will it make difference to him though
Let's see shall we
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Fantastic Update

Maan thinks that Geet left his house and went to stay with Daadima
he was again angry and demands that she comes out at this stage
Maan is only overpowered by his anger and ego so he does not realize
the damage that he is doing to Geet because he has no emotions for her while Geet loves him so his behavior does effect her .
Dev explaining Maan that he should keep Geet happy for the baby's
sake and then the doctor also shows him Geet's report and tells him
to take better care of Geet
now I wonder what Maan will decide I also would love to know his POV
from the night he spend with Geet until now what does he actually
think about Geet .
Geet now realizes that Maan can never change and she has to take
better care of herself and her baby

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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
helloo richa...its very nice part dear.. ..omg maan is hell bent on keeping geet with him only for the sake of his baby...but geet want to go away from everyone...lets see what the geet decision to this maan new offer...hope geet ye offer accept kr le...because she really need care and support this tym...waiting for next part dear...and ya..plz update "in love with stranger" also...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on d new thread...
Nice update.. maan try every ways to keeping geet with him only for his baby...but geet want to go away from everyone..geet na shaadi sa bhi na kar de😲.maan offer new job...hope geet ye offer accept kr le...waiting for next part dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats on the new thread! thanks 4 updating! Superb intense emotional update! Well written! Geet doesn't want to lose her baby! she confronts Maan abt his intentions! Maan says its his child and part of him! Geet angry! She will nt give her child to anyone! Maan leaves bt asks to think abt it! Geet in hospital for further 3 days! Maan doesn't go n see her bt the doc updates him! Geet discharged! Maan upset tht he was not informed! She gets ready 2 leave the city n packs her stuff! Maan knows this n rushes 2 her place! Maan angry! Maan is rude! Geet tells him its nt his business! Maan tells as long as she is pregnant with his child it is! Geet tells him he hates children! Geet adamant on leaving! he wants to go with him! She questions their relationship! Maan says they wil get married! She refuses as she knws it only 4 the child! Maan taunts her! Geet explains he the hw will nt understand! Maan tells her to stay - she needs a job bt she says no! she will nt b made a mockery! Maan tries on last time - he offers her 2 b a cre taker of his house. she will stay at his outhouse! he will pay her! update soon!

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