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PYAR KA BANDHAN

HELLO GUYS I AM BACK WITH A NEW STORY. IT'S A EMOTIONAL STORY WHICH WILL TOUCH UR HEART.SO HERE WE GO. PLZ ENCOURAGE ME WITH UR LIKES AND COMMENTS.

PROLOUGE

Geet is setting on bed staring a picture which is hanging on the front wall. She is sitting in this position from morning. A lady enter in the room with a small girl. The baby start crying after seeing geet. Lady sat baside geet and put baby in geet arms and start talking.

Lady - geet beta dekho ananya kitna roo rahi hai plz beta iss chup karado.

Geet -

Lady - geet aisa kaise chalega kuch toh bolo beta.

Geet -

Lady - iss bachi ki taraf dekho isse apni ghood mein toh lelo beta.

Mahira(crying) - mamma bhuk, ana roli roli

Lady - iss bachi ka toh kuch socho beta.

Mahira (crying) - mamma hero taha hai. Bulao unne.

Geet saw mahira and brust into tears and mahira got scared by dis. She also start crying. The lady is consouling both mother and daughter.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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THANK U ALL U LIKE MY STORY AND GIVE COMENTS.SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE GUYS. I TYPED THIS UPDATE 2 DAYS AGO BUT CAN'T FIND TIME TO POST IT. TODAY I GOT FREE FROM MY COUSIN SHOPING SO THOUGHT TO UPDATE IT. HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT.

PYAR KA BANDHAN

PART 1

After 1 week of geet outbrust

Geet is sitting on her room window panel staring at nothing in sky with tears in her eyes. Her daughter mahira came and saw her mother is all silent. Its not her mother who talk nonstop. She call her mother but her moyher didn't react. She touch geet and geet came out of her thought.

Mahira - mamma maine aapko kitna bulaya aapne suna hi nai.

Geet(wiping tears) - sorry beta main kuch soch rahi thi.

Mahira - mamma aap roli roli kal rahe ho kya? Aapko toh pata hai na hero ko aapki aur meri eyes mein water pasand nai hai.

Geet - meri eyes mein kuch chala gaya tha iss liye water beta. Aapko kuch chahiye tha kya?

Mahira - mamma muje aapna phone do na.

Geet - par aap phone ka kya karoge?

Mahira - muje hero se baat karni hai, unnhone mahira se kitne se baat hi nai ki hai. Main unne phone karke dadu se data khilaugi.

Geet eyes again turn wet after listening her daughter talks. Who will make her understand that her hero is not coming to her. He left her and geet forever and went to that place from where no one come again. Geet control her tears and take mahira in her lap and said

Geet - beta aapke hero jaha gaye haina waha koi phone nai hai.

Mahira - toh hum hero se kaise baat karege aur unnse kaise puachege ki who kab wapis aayege?

Geet - aapko unnse milha hai?

Mahira - ha mamma

Geet - look there. Who jo sabse bright star hai na woh aapke hero hai.

Mahira - par mamma hero inti dur kyun hai.

Geet - beta aapko toh pata hai na ki aapke hero kitne ache hai aur who aapke hero hai.

Mahira - ha mere hero toh best hai.

Geet - aur godji ko ache logo ki jarurat hoti hai, dusaro ki help karne ke liye toh unhone aapke hero ko bula liya.

Mahira - par hero toh mere hero phir kyun?

Lady( in choked voice) - kyunki godji ko help chahiye thi issliye.

Mahira - par dadi muje hero se milna hai aur baat karni hai.

Shakshi - toh hum baat karege.

Mahira (innocently) - kaise mamma ne toh kaha waha par phone nai hai.

Shakshi -aap unn stars ki teref dekho aur jo aapke mann mein hai who unne boldo. Aapke hero aapki baatein sun lege aur woh aapko waha se dekh bhi rahe hai.

Mahira (cutely)- dadi sachi hero bina phone use kiye mahira ki baatein sun lege.

Dadi ( in choking)- ha bacha dadi ne aapse kabhi jhut bola hai. Ab aap chalo bed par so jao kal school bhi jana hai.

Geet is listening their conversation and weeping silently. She thought her daughter is fatherless now just like her but she lost her mother when she was born. Her father played role of her mother also, now again time came where she has to become father and mother for her daughter. God always played cruel game with her, this time he include her daughter in his play. Little did she know god always play fare if he take something, he also give something.

Shakshi - geet beta tum kuch khalo.

Geet - maa muje bhuk nai hai aur plz muje kuch time ke liye akela chod dijiye plz.

Shakshi - tekh hai par tum bhi soo jana unn yaado mein mat kho jana jo tume aasho de.

With dat shakshi left geet and geet lied down beside mahira. She thought how she gona handle mahira alone. Her father left them and how geet tell mahira her father is dead. She again come to window and start crying and said between her sobs.

Geet(crying) - main tume iske kabhi maaf nai karugi raj. Tunme aapna wada break kiya hai aur muje yaha akele chod gaye. Tum dekh rahe hona ki mahira kaise tumse baate karna chahti hai par usse kaise batau ki tum kabhi nai aaoge usske pass, kabhi usse koi kahani nai sunaoge. Kaise batao.

On other side of world in newyork in a big mansion

A man is doing tai-chi wearing only a loose pant. He is very handsome girls die for his a glimpse but he don't give a damn to their thoughts. He got many success in his career, already achieve best businessman award. His professional life is good but his personal life is nothing. He lost his parents in his early age and after dat he got only loneliness. Only a cousin sister he consider as his family and get some happiness with her and her small family.

Now he is doing his morning exercise and thinking about a deal. His thought broke by his phone ring. He answer call after seeing the caller.

Maan - hello di, gud morning

Other side -******

Maan - ya I know waha night hai, par yaha toh morning hai.

O.S. - *******

Maan - aaj kaise phone kiya aapne? Kal toh baat li thi humne.

O.S.- ******

Maan - main toh bhul hi gaya, anyways thanks.

O.S. -******

Maan - abhi kuch final nai hai.

O.S. - *****

Maan - ha main pura try karuga aur yah aka kaam katam karne ke baad jaldi waha pahuch jao.

O.S. - ******

Maan - ok then bye muje office jana hai and thanks once again.

So this is maan singh khurana, whose birthdat is today but he like always forgot about it. Only his di remember his birthday and wishes him. After exercise he went to his office where he is a terror.

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT AND GIVE UR PRECIOUS COMMENT

CHAHAT

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HAPPY NEW YEAR


I AM SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE


I am sorry guys, I know muje ye update 3 din phele dena tha but mein kya karu mera net bilkul kaam kar raha hai. So delay ho gaya. Now I m giving the update. ENJOY

PYAR KA BANDHAN

Part 3

One month pass after geet join office and meeting is coming near so they are working hard. Geet made new frd there. Her life is now revolving around mahira , her in laws and office. Her aim is now to make raj dream true. Now geet is working in her cabin when ram came.

Ram - geet bete ye project ki accounts file hai tum ek baar check kar lena.

Geet - ji papa, main ek baar ye file complete karlu fir check kar lugi.

Ram - main ye nai kah raha ki abhi dekho. Tum itna stress kyun le rahi ho. Bete thoda aaram se kaam karo.

Geet - papa bus ye meeting ho jaye toh mera sara stress katam ho jayega.

Ram - waise mahi ko school se kyun pick karne gaya hai.

Geet - maine abdul chacha ko pick karne ke liye bheja hai school se yaha lekar aane ko bhi kaha hai.

Ram (smiling) - tekh hai main apne kuch kaam katam kar leta hu woh aayigi toh sare office ko pata chal jayega.

Geet ( with smile) - pure office ko nai balki puri building ko pata chal jata hai.

IN NEWYORK KHURANA CONSTRUTION

Adi - sir hamari delhi ki flight kabki book karni hai.

Maan - next week Sunday evening ki book kardo aur delhi office mein bhi inform kardo ki muje sab kuch complete chahiye.

Adi - right sir.

Maan - adi maine tume ek list di thi uska saara samaan aa gaya.

Adi - nai sir kuch products rahte hai.

Maan - adi tum jante ho ki agar woh cheeze nai mili toh kya hoga.

Adi(smilingly) - ji sir main try kar raha hu. 2 din mein list complete kar duga.

Maan - hmmm.

Adi - I take ur leave sir.

Maan nodded and adi left. After adi left maan start thinking about his life where she is only ray of his happiness. He will meet her after 3 months. He knew she is angry on him and not talking to him on phone. He knew how to manofy her.

Next week on Monday

Geet is making mahira ready for school and asking her to finish milk.

Geet - mahira apna milk finish karo.

Mahi - nai mamma milk nai pina.

Geet (strenly)- no complete it now

Mahi (fake crying) - dadi dehko mamma muje scold kar rahi hai.

Shakshi - geet kyon meri bachi ko daant rahi ho.

Geet - maa apne hi isse bikaad diya hai. Dekho ye meri koi bhi baat nai manti.

Mahi - nai mamma mahira toh apki sab baate manti hai.

Geet - sachi?

Mahi - sachi mamma. Dekho main abhi ye milk finish karti hu.

Mahi finish her milk and to romm to get her school bag.

Shakshi - dekha geet hamari mahi kitne badi ho gayi hai.

Geet (wiping her eyes) - ha maapar main ye bhi janti hu ki woh apne hero ko bhi bhut miss kas karti hai.

Shakshi - raj se sabse jyada pyar bhi toh karti hai. Usne apna phela word bhi toh DAADAA bola tha.

Geet - fir uska daadaa hume kyun chod kar chala gaya.

Shakshi - geet sabhalo beta apne aapko dekho mahi aa rahi hai.

Both ladies wipe their tears and after dat geet drop mahi to school and went to office.

IN SCHOOL

Mahi went to her class and met with her frd anvita aka anvi. Both girl met on theor frist day of class and become frd.

Mahi - hello anvi.

Anvi - mahi main kitni deer se tumara wait kar rahi hu.

Mahi - par kyun. Abhi toh miss bhi nai aayi hai.

Anvi - arre muje tume kuch batana tha issliye.

Mahi - acha kya?

Anvi - ab nai batati school ke baad hi bataugi. Tum late ho issliye punishment hai tumari.

Mahi - ye kya abhi batao.

Anvi - nai.

Mahi - plz anvi main tumari frd nai hu kya?

Anvi(innocently) - ho isliye toh punishment hai.

Mahi - par main mamma ki wajah se late ho gayi thi.

Anvi - ab aunty toh nai hai punishment toh tume milegi.

Mahi make a pout listening this but anvi didn't told. Whole day mahi ask anvi but anvi only said to wait till school finish.

School bell rang both coming with eachother from class. When mahi said.

Mahi - ab toh batao kya baat thi.

Anvi - nai.

Mahi - par ab toh school finish ho gaya.

Anvi - arre bhudu main tume unse milwagi.

Mahi - kyon?

Anvi - tum bus chalo. woh mera wait kar rahe hoge.

Mahi - aunty toh roz wait karti hai.

Anvi(stop and said) - arre mom nai mere mamu aaye hoge muje lene.

Mahi (innocently)- par tume kaise pata ki aunty nai aayegi lene.

Anvi - maine mom dad ki baat suni thi ki mamu aa rahe hai aaj aur main mamu se gussa hu toh wahi muje lene aayege muje manane ke liye.

Mahi - acha.

Anvi (impatiently ) - chalo muje mamu se milna hai.

Both came near school gate when somebody take anvi in his arm from back and anvi also hug him.

Anvi - mamu aap aa gaye muje pata tha aap hi muje aaj school se pick karoge.

Man - acha meri anvi ko toh sab pata hota hai.

Anvi - maine toh mahi ko bola tha ki aaj mom nai mamu aayege.

That's when man turn his eyes towards mahi. Her innocent face and hazel eyes which fill with tears. Man feel an instant pull towards her. He kneel down and ask her

Man - hey dear what happen?

Mahi - nai meri eyes mein kuch dust chala gaya.

Man - are u sure dear.

Mahi - yes.

Anvi - mamu aap chocolate nai laye mere liye.

Maan - aisa kabhi hua hai. Ye lo aapke liye aur aapki iss cute frd ke liye. Waise anvi aapne apni frd ka naam nai bataya.

Anvi - mamu ye meri frd hai mahira aur mahi ye mere mamu hai maan mamu.

Maan - mahira very beautiful name. ye name aapko kisne diya.

Mahi - mere hero ne.

Maan - hero means?

Anvi - mamu mahi apne dad ko hero bolti hai.

Maan - oh like superman type.

Mahi - hmm.

Maan - hume bhi milna hoga aapke hero se taki anvi bhi hume kuch superman samje.

Mahi (cryingly) - aap unse nai mil sakte kyonki woh star ban gaye hai.

Mahi ran from there towards her car. Both anvi and maan shout her name but she didn't stop and sat in her car. Maan become sad after knowing about mahi dad from mahi mouth. He fell a pain in his heart after seeing mahi tears.

PRECAP - MAHI ASKING ABOUT MAMU WORD AND MAANEET MEETING AND MAAN THINKING ABOUT MAHIRA.

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT AND DO COMMENTS

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Pyar ka bandhan

PART 2

Maan came to his new york office in his MSK style. His bodyguards following him. He walks in attidude. maan walks into his office

There is perfect silence and no body dare to raise their head in front of the MSK ..Every one on red alret. Only adi and sasha wishes him

sasha - good hellow MK.

Adi - good morning sir.

maan nodes his head and enter in his cabin. His secretary went after him with his coffee and files of project.

Secretary - sir ur coffee and files of mall project.

Maan - ok and budget file of mr. thomsan project.

Secretary (fearfully) - sir I don't know sir.

Maan (angryily) - so for wat work I am paying u?

Secretary (meekly) - actually sir yesterday I was on half day leave so I don't know who take the file in afternoon.

Maan (shout) - now u will have full day for urself becoz u r fired.

Secretary - sorry sir plz give me a chance.

Maan - in my dictionary there is no word like sorry, forgive, forget and second chance. Now get out of my cabin right now.

The secretary came out from maans cabin with tears in her eyes. This is the 8 secretary which maan fired after he came to lonndon. Whole staff knew one mistake from their side and they will out of khurana group. Maan right hand adi goes to maan's cabin after few minutes and knock cabin door.

Maan - come in

Adi - gud morning sir, this is the the file u ask ur secretary sorry ex- secretary.

Maan shot him a glare and adi shut his mouth. After few minutes adi again spoke.

Adi - sir kya mein nayi secretary ke interview ke liye advertisement de du?

Maan - nai

Adi - hehehe par kyun sir?

Maan(irritatedly ) - nai adi uski koi jarurat nai hogi. Hamara yaha ka kaam pura hone wala hai fir hume wapis india jana hai toh tab tak tum hi meri meetings ke schedule dekh lena.

Adi - alright sir. Now I'll take ur leave sir. Have a good day sir.

After coming from maan cabin adi take a long relief and went toward his cabin when sasha stop him to ask wat happen.

Sasha - today wat happen in cabin adi?

Adi - wahi jo har baar hota hai kuch khaas nai bus muje ek aur kaam mil gaya muje Maan sir ke secretary hone ka.

Sasha - but why mk ko nayi secretary kyun nai chahiye?

Adi - kyunki iss project ke katam hone ke baad hum wapis india ja rahe hai toh jab tak hum interview karke secretary choose karege usse phele hi hum india mein hoge.

Sasha - acha hai muje yaha jyada maza nai aaya. I miss our delhi branch.

Adi - me too.

Sasha - sirf office ko ya pinky ko bhi.

Adi - stop sasha aur apna kaam karo warna maan sir next hum dono ko hi fire kar dege.

Here in delhi at night

Geet is crying holding raj photo and complaining to his picture.

Geet(crying) - why raj why? Kyun muje akela chod diya? Tumne toh muje promise kiya tha hamesha sath nibhane ka toh ye promise kyn tod diya.

Geet (sobbing) - tume mera khayal nai aaya toh tekh hai par tumari mahira kaise rahegi tumare bina tumne ye bhi nai socha? Maa, papa, mahira aur mein hum sab tume bhut miss karte hai plz aa jao.

She slept holding raj picture close to her heart. In her sleep she saw a dream where geet is sitting on a swing with raj keeping her head on his chest in a garden and he is telling her something but she only listening his heartbeat.

Raj - geet tum meri baat sun rahi ho ya nai?

Geet - hmmm

Raj - acha toh batao mein kya bol raha hu.

Geet - hmmm

Raj - GEET

Geet - ha kya hua aise kyun chilla rahe ho?

Raj - kyunki tum meri baat nai sun rahi thi issliye.

Geet - mein tumare dil ki baate sun rahi thi aur ussme kho gayi.

Raj - acha ji aur mein itni der se jo bol raha hu uska kya? Jao muje tumse koi baat nai karni. Mein jar aha hu.

Suddenly the garden change into a desert and raj is nowhere which freighted geet. She start to call his name.

Geet - raj! Raj kaha ho tum plz samne aa jao muje dar lag raha hai.

Geet - raj plz aa jao mein aage se tumari har baat manugi.

She can hear raj voice but can't see him

Raj - pariyo ki kahani jaisi hai raj ki rani.

Geet - ha ha tumari rani tume dekhna chahti hai plz samne aao.

Raj - nai raj ki rani muje jana hoga par tum ghabrana mat aur meri rajkumari ka bhi khayal rakhna.

Geet - nai raj ruk jao. RAJ RAJ

Geet woke up from her dream shouting raj name. she is sweating and feeling thrusty. Her water jug was empty so she came to kitchen for drinking water. While returning she saw the light on of the study room. There raj father ram is working and raj mother asking him to sleep.

Shakshi - ram plz aap kuch der ke liye aaram karlo. Aapki tabiyat karab ho jayegi. Raat ke 2 baj rahe hai.

Ram - nai muje ye project study karna hai iski meeting hai kal.

Shakshi - app itna tension mat lo sab tekh ho jayega. Office mein baki staff hai who dekh lege.

Ram (in choked voice) - kaise tekh hoga sab. Raj hum chodkar chala gaya, humari geet bhi kahi kho gayi aur mahi who toh sara din bus apne hero ko yaad karti hai.

Shakshi - plz calm down aapka bp phele hi kafi high hai.

Ram - kyun shakshi muje itna dard ho raha hai jo beta humari jaan hua karta tha ab humare pass nai hai. Kyun?

Shakshi(crying) - aap sab toh apna dukh bata dete hai par mein kisse batau. Koi mera dard bhi samjo kaise mein sabko samal rahi hu.

Geet couldn't hear there talks. She is angry on raj and herself but she decided something and waits for morning becoz her sleep is far from her eyes now.

MORNING AT DINING TABLE

Shaskhi - ram slow breakfast kijiye itni jaldi kya hai.

Ram - muje mahi ko playschool chodna hai fir office jakar meeting attend karni hai.

Geet - papa aap aaram se breakfast kijiye mahira ko mein drop kar dugi aur uske baad office bhi aa jaugi.

Both ram and shakshi got surprised with geet talks and ask for reason

Geet - bus muje ghar par acha nai lagta toh socha aapki hi help kardu raj ke dream project mein.

Ram - uss meeting mein abhi time hai bete.

Geet - pata hai papa uss company ke owner out of country hai par prepration toh karni chahiye na.

Ram - tekh hai.

Geet drop mahira to her school and went to office to help ram. One month pass after geet join office and meeting is coming near so they are working hard.

PRECAP - MAAN BACK IN INDIA AND MAAN-MAHIRA FIRST MEETING.

I KNOW IN THIS UPDATE THERE IS NO MAANEET BUT ITS IMPORTANT FOR STORYBASE. PLZ BEAR IT.

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT AND DO COMMENTS.

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CHARACTER SKETCH



MAAN SINGH KHURANA - RICH, ARROGANT, RUDE BUT VERY HANDSOME BUSSINESSMAN. LOST HIS PARENTS IN A CAR ACCIDENT. ONLY A COUSIN SISTER IN NAME OF FAMILY. HE POTRY THAT HE IS EMOTIONLESS BUT INSIDE HE IS FIGHTING WITH HIS LONELINESS. CURRENTLY LIVING IN NEWYORK BUT COMING TO INDIA.



GEET SINGH - SHE WAS CUTE AND BUBBLY. EVERYBODY CALLS HER CHATTERBOX BUT AN ACCIDENT CHANGE HER LIFE. SHE BECOME COMPLETELY DIFFERENT PERSON.



MAHIRA SINGH - DAUGHTER OF GEET


Other characters will introduced when story progress
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HELLO I WILL ONLY SAY SORRY FOR MY DISAPPEAR. AND AFTER THIS WILL TRY TO GIVE UPDATES AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.SO HERE IS THE NEXT PART

PART 4

Maan Anvi beta aapki ye frd ke dad kab expire hue

Anvi mamu last month hi use dad use chodkar star ban gaye.

Maan[thinking] itni pyari aur choti bachi ke sath aisa kyon hua par muje use milkar ek connection kyon feel hua.

Anvi shaking maan to get his attention.

Anvi mamu ghar chale aur aap batao aap mere liye kya laye ho?

Maan acha ji aapko ye pata h ki maamu aapke liye kuch laaye h.

Anvi mom dad ko kah rahi thi ki aap mere liye gift laakar muje khush karne ki koshish karoge.

Maan acha nani ma aapko sab pata h par ab ghar chale main di se bhi nai mila hu. Airport se direct aapko lene aaya hu.

Anvi- ok

Other side mahi is silently crying in her car, bcoz if her sob are heard by abdul baba then he will tell her mumma and after that she will also start crying for her dad. At this little age she is thinking maturely for her mother.After few min she reach home bcoz geet told abdul chacha to take mahi home.

After freshen up mahi is sitting with priya and suddenly ask her

Mahi dadi main aapse se question puachu

Priya ha bete puacho

Mahi dadi mamu kyon hote h?

Priya[surprisingly] ye kaha suna aapne mahi

Mahi dadi aaj na anvi ke mamu use school se pick karne aaye the.

Priya acha. Beta mamu ka matlab hota h mamma ka bhai.

Mahi dadi kya mere bhi koi mamu h?

Geet who is also listeningmahi talks said that

Geet nai beta bhagwan ne aapko koi mamu nai diye aur na hi mummy ko koi bhai.

Mahi par kyon mamma? God aisa ne aisa kyon kiya

Geet beta god ji ne kabhi bhi mamma koi khush rahne ka jyada time hi nai diya.

Priya geet beta ye tu kya kah rahi h

Geet sahi kah rahi hu main maa and she ran to her room crying. Mahi also feel bad to see her mother crying and she decide she will never ask again such ques which heart her mother.

Maan after droping anvi to her home and meeting his sister returned to his mansion and start working on a file whose metting is after 2 days suddenly mahi face came infront of his eyes. He stop working and thought

Maan uss bachi ka aason bhara chera mere samne kyun aaya achanak se

Maan main toh use pheli baar hi mil ahu par ek ajib se kashish kyon mashoos ho rahi h muje. Uske naam se mera dil ekdam se kyun khila.

After thinking for sometime he again start doing his work

PRECAP MAAN AND GEET MEETING. MAAN AGAIN THINKING OF MAHI AND GOES TO MEET HER

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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new story.
sach mein bohut emotional lagrahi hai. prologue dekh kar
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very emotional part. geet lost her husband and baby missing her hero 😭😭maan ki entry hone waali hai india mein. dekhthe hai yeh dono kaise milthe hai
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Emotional Updates but Awesome Indeed
so Geet's husband died and now she has to raise her little daughter
all by herself .
While Maan in New York is all alone has no family besides his cousin
sister
Looking forward to next update

Thank u for reading and liking it

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I know that after seeing this post some people may be happy, some may be upset, some may even be angry, many stories are ongoing, I understand...

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