Fairytale#1-In Love with a Devil Prince/New updt pg.32/

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CoolHania

@CoolHania

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

i thought maan will come to know of her love for him 😃

but here you twisted it

ye bhi acha laga 😆

does geet know, maan hears her program ? i want to know that

and also precap is interesting

but me thinking is mein bhi koi twist na daldo 😡

waiting 😊

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

amazing update ahh geets plan flopped here maan is thinking she is in love with his staff really no one cant escape from maans charm so natasha also is in this list she is just like maan really liked the fact that maan is noticing her even he went out for her precap very interesting lovely part thnx 4 update

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Vry different nd vry intriguing Mahi .Loved ur style of writing nd enjoying fairy tale in different taste .Cinderella had become bold nd beautiful nd prince charming ke upar effect ho raha hai .going great ,continue soon

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Hemlata

@nitika20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Me slapping my head...
Off Geet ka show personal nahi raha ... huh ... sare ideas agar Maan ko pehle hi pata hoga to Geet ka plan kaam kaise karega !!!!
Hehe I thought Maan was the.only one asked Geet about Problem in eyes ..
hehe.. ISD khud ko hi pata nahi killed Kong hai ... thinking of all possibility ..who could be ISD...
Poor Geet ..spending her savings ...
I wish Maan ko galatfehmi ho jaye ki Aryan Geet ka ISD hai...
bad maza aayega ...
waiting for next part...

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

haha...your beginning titles for all chapters are apt ones..aligned yet twisted from the Cinderella story..
Maan is smart enough for any magic? yeahh he is, but not enough for Geet's moves..😛
Geet's magic is working like a slow poison..slowly and gradually capturing his heart and mind..finally will consume him even before he realizes it 😉
she has got all his attention to her...I won't be surprised if one day like the callers he himself gives a suggestion to her...😆

and that was a nice turn, I also do not want him to know it so soon...he thought he is among the other 4-5 people who asked her the same question and started finding out who her devil prince could be, settling his doubt on Salil...not a bad guess, next time his doubt will be on Aryan 😛

the servant's blank face while delivering the message, poor guy must be very hard for him to control his laugh and show an expressionless face..😆

and I loved the way the caller's suggestions are used in the story..first her seductive attempts and now moving away from the crowd...but the ideas are working!!

ye Rajveer and revenge kya hain, wound of some defeat?

fabulous update...waiting for the next.

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 10 years ago

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

awesome update...

maan very much know Geet is liking someone.. & following ideas from her caller of the show to get her dream man...

aww.. i like this ISD word given by Geet... poor baby spending her savings to get maan..
party invitation.. & maan said he'll take Geet with him... confused soul doesn't understand why she is invited...

waiting for next update..

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

I couldn't even believe k we got another update that too so soon😆

Phir out of curiosity I read oneof many comments then I knew tum ne sach me update kiya!!

N coming to the update. ..

Yaar uss precap k baad I thought maan would know that it was him all the while but tum ne usse one of all kardiya

N ye party me geet kya kar rahi thi...

It was so hard to accept k wo geet hi hai

Something was out of place there!!

Maan natasha aryan sab the but geet!!😕

Don't mind but the whole party sequence n her encounter with maan kuch jama nahi!!

The first half of it was best of the whole update!!

Sorry if I've hurt u😔

Personal opinion samaj k ignore maardena😉

Waiting for the next! 😃

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ppriyanka83

@ppriyanka83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

wonderfull update..
Geets
makeover..thanks 2 her friends n callers..Maan iz noticing her
but but but..he turnd 2 b real I.S.D.
she iz spending all her 'jama punji' in d process n frm where dis Salil came in between..jo b h..its no dat bad..perhaps could turn 2 a twist..n dis Aryan also..bt where were her other office friends.
OMG..waz Maan really going 2 kiss my Geet..
updat soon
thnx 4 pm

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

#3 - I missed updates of this

beautiful update...a full makeover...all were curious to know maan's expression. but sudden entry of arayan sinha, I think he was jealous how they were talking in friendly nature... he, too, was fell for her new looks like others. her callers were right. their tips, ideas really worked. maan ne uski taraf dekha aur dekhate hi rah gaya. he was irritated on himself that he coul not take his eyes away from her. but his last line made her sad