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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunima.

Awesome ff ... I read it in one go n I really found it intresting ...good wrk ... lkng frwd to read more n more

thnx alot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
updating😊😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

.thanx vampy n naz fr such beautfl banner ...🤗
.thanx alot sweta for editin each part🤗

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thanx alot sadz🤗...fr ur such beautiful poem fr my story...
belated b'day present fr u🤗

@red : flashback of past...

Kala saaya ishq tera , dil ko chalani kar gaya

Badanaami ka kafan chdha ke , khun ke aasoon rula gaya

marne bhi nhi diya humein, Zinda laash bana gaya......


I walked out of restaurant but I think my destiny walked out of me...making mockery of me. After seeing her so close I again lost her n this damn heart inside me...making me feels emotions which I thought was dead...seeing just glimpse of her me feeling restless...when I started to believe there is no heart no feeling inside me...y suddenly my heart started feeling restless for her ...y i just want to hold her in my arms n let time freeze that moment...i m feeling all d damn emotions again.


I laughed loudly...n next moment cried literally...y god is doing this with me...y...all pain I suffered till now was not enough...y again


If by just seeing glimpse of her is having such effect on me then what i will do when she will b infront of me and what abt my revenge from her...

Ahhh...i shouted with all my power...

.(credits goes to uploader)


I m feeling being failure once again in my life...but i can't let this emotions commands me... No...no more...enough damage is already and now it's time of revenge... she did all this for money n power...i will snatch all from her...she will face her punishment...damn that girl bcz of her i missed to meet her...

Being back to my senses as I lost where I walked towards after I left restaurant ... i looked around n see myself infront of my home... where it all ended...i unlock d gate n entered inside...all memories of my parents n my sis r back to me...


He entered the home...shouting loudly... mom...dad...chutki...everyone were watching tv...they rushed towards hall...kya hua maan ...kyu chila rahe ho...he just went n hugged her mom tightly...n said mom me too happy today...

Mom asked what happened dear...what's the gud news...he just forwarded page in front of his father...his father gave him a look n opened the page...where his marks were written...

Maan went to school to checked his 10th result...n he got 99.6% in 10th...n topped in all India...his father was just too proud n happy to say something...he just hugged him n said...maan u make me proud today son...i m so happy......n he tell other two curious person looking at them...

Mrs. Khurana...mithai lao ji...muh meetha karao apne bte ka...all India topped kiya h isne...dekhna ek din yeh khurana ke naam ko roshan karega......his mom just hugged n said ...mera beta h...lakho mein nhi karodo mein ek h...n chutky pushed her mom bit n said mera bhai h nah mere par gya h......n giggled at her own joke


They were so happy in their world. He passed through dining room n seeing dining table his memories are back again...

A boy sitting in dining table n singing ... hum bhook ke maare mar rhe h ...hum kya kare...mom b fast..i m too hungry...a women very beautifully dressed in cotton saree cum with parathe...n offered him...before he took bite from it ...it just vanished from plate...n he saw towards his left n devil is cherishing his paratha ...chutki that was fr me...give me back ...m hungry yar...
So what bhaiu...m hungry too...n mein choti hoon toh mein phele khaungi...n whole room was filled with their sound...chasing each other n forgetting about paratha...


He moved ahead...there was photo of their parents with garland over it...he was in 12th class when they met an accident n died on spot...annie was in 8th class...their world of happiness ended tht day... he saw him n chutki sitting on stairs

.( imagine maan n annie...n obvsly older version 😆)


Bhaiu pa n mama ab kbhi wapas nhi aaynge...mn kya ab mama ke ghar rahungi ...she cried...mujh apse dur nhi jana...ab sirf aap hi toh ho...plss mujh chodke mat jao...she hugged maan tightly like never let him go...nhi chutki...mein kbhi tujh chodke nhi jaungi...meri zindgi h tu n tere alwa kaun h mera...mein humesha tere sath hn n rahunga...she said pinky promise bhaiu... forwarding her little finger in front of him...he tangled his little finger with her n said...pakka promise...ur pinky promise...n hugged her tightly....


Tears rolled down maan's eyes continuously...his guilt hit him hard...he broke his promise to her sis which meant world to him...y...y i did tht...what i was thinkn when i left my chutki in her illness to safe that bitch...my mom n dad would never ever forgive me ...



I entered to chutki room where my last memories of this house belong too...

I was back from of my classes n duty in hospital...i opened gate of home n finding it peaceful...some fear engulf me as i would always find chutki watching tv or singing loudly ...i rushed to her room n opened it...she was lying on floor n breathing heavily...she had asthma attack...i searched for her inhaler n gave her to inhale d medicine...but condition is not improving...i reached out for my phone suddenly i got incoming call n its from miss dreamy...i picked her call for help...but voice at other end shocked me...she was crying too much

Maaa...ann... Crying hysterically
I lost my senses ...here my sis n there she...two imp person of my life going through pain..
I asked her what happened jaan...
Ma...an... pls...ss... cu...m to office...fast...he won't leave me...plss save me...m in danger here...i don't know what to do...that boss...
Ahhh...maaan help...
..n phone got disconnected...
I called ambulance n i called arjun ...i asked arjun to take chutki to hospital... i will b there soon...need to rush to her office now..
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But what i didn't knew was...i won't b able to make it to hospital that day...i got arrested that day...

Chutki was just in 12th when she faced it all alone...i was not there for her when she needed me the most...n still never asked me y i choose her over my chutki...it was my fault but i trusted her to take care of my chutki...i took her blame to save her but in return ...i just asked was to take care of my chutki on my behalf...But i forget life is bitch and so was she...


Precap - when lift door opened...the scene infront of her eyes shoot her temper to next level...all are standing infront of their desk n chatting like they are standing in class room...what they thought being advised by doc for rest will restrict her from coming to office...no way...

GUESS WHO IS SHE...ONE OF THE GIRL...😉

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Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely part...but how is this mistry girl...please disclose this suspence now...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: icskwt

lovely part...but how is this mistry girl...please disclose this suspence now...

thnx dear...in next part...new entry with name
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Posted: 10 years ago
i like his shirtless pic... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta

i like his shirtless pic... 😳

haha...just fr u dear😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
awee thanks i want more such pics plz..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta

awee thanks i want more such pics plz..!!

HEHE...i will send u all gc shirtless pic ...i will find while searchn😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional part maan rembng his past nd hw he left his wit arjun only 2 save her
who is she?
waitng 4 d nxt part

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