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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update..
so ..is dat means mannu is maans' son??
n he is still unware of it.. n even he didnt remember it
poor geet..
maan shud be punished
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb updates!!!!
Sam n dev planned to trap maan but blindly belived sam
poor geet she had to pay a huge . Maan just broken her into pieces whatever he did is shocking . He always hated geet but his anger let him this extend thats pathetic
so is mannu his child??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan force himself on geet in his drunken stage kya manu maaneet ka hi beta hai waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
in his angry maan commited the sin...he was not in a condition to know what he was doing he carried away with his desires ...feeling really bad for geet what was her mistake in all this she only wanted to tell him the truth but in return what she got...eagerly waiting to know how geet had faced the situation and brought up manu all alone...
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update feel bad 4 geet maan did very wrong with geet he was drunk but wrong poor geet
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Posted: 10 years ago



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hello my friends
Updating 😊
Thank u so much my sweet friends





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.


Part - 21



Part - 22


Everything seems strange d place which gave her shelter now going to eat her ,, she wanted to run way , away from all but where .. she didn't have anybody in this whole world ,, she was quiet matured girl now nd understood d outer world but here in d protective walls of KM too she lost her last treasure .

She knew nobody is here for her ,, when her own family , if her so called mother cd discard her then how she cd think that this family choose her over their loving son or heir ,, she cursed her bad luck nd thought that she was meant to be ruin by their protectors ,, she dragged her torn body nd came close to bed , wanted to scream over him but what was d use ,, he cd blame her for this too ,, she adjusted his clothes properly ,, he didn't react nd was sleeping like a log ,, she brought other sheet nd changed that with defficult , dumped old one in her cupboard ,, arranged d bed nd him ,, opened d door nd came out in that stormy night ,, went on d top roof nd slumped on d floor broken ,, cried out on her fate nd wrecked life ,, hrs passed ,,she was lying there ,, after strong winds there was rain but she didn't move ,, drenching in that rain she remained there but that rain was not able to sooth her burning soul.

She didn't know from how many hrs she was there ,, she steered a lil nd opened her eyes ,, there was sunlight all around ,, d surface was warm now bcoz d rain stopped long back ,, her own clothed turned dry in d heat nd sunlight ,, she didn't know that she was sleeping or in unconscious state ,, sat on d floor nd looked around nd thought that nobody is there for her to think ,, got up from that place nd sat in d shadow taking support agains d wall ,, all profane sights fleshed in her mind again nd again .

she was on d edge nd feared that how he react now ? Wd he accept his sinful act ? OR he wd blame her nd accused her again ? to whom I told d truth nd who wd trust me ? wd this family accept that their son cd do this or they blame her ,, what was d result of all this mishap ?

Kya karu main ab ? Mujhe nahi pata ye log kaise react kerenge mere sach kahane per aur uske baad mera kya hoga ? Agar inn logo ne mera viswaash nahi kiya to ,, uske baad kya ? Mai kaise Yash uncle aur Rashi aunty ko kahu ,, pata nahi wo dukhi honge ya naraaz ? anjaam chahe jo ho dosh to mujh per aana nei ,, meri wajh se ess family ne ye din dekha ,, Babaji !! mai sach mei ek curse hu ,, a jinx .. who brought only bad luck for all ,,, Mai kya karu ?

Geet head spined thinking on those endless Qs ,, hr passed nd she gathered to face d corollary ,, dragged herself in her room feared if he was still there but to her surprised he was not there ,, she looked all around d room nd check d time 10 am ,, she took bath in warm water , her whole body was aching nd mind was numb of conti thinking ,, she was under water for long ,, changed nd came down in kitchen to make a strong coffee for her ,, Nakul asked why she was looking dull nd she lied that she sdutied till late nd now had hadache ,, he adviced her to take something to eat nd them meds for headache ,, she nodded ,, prepared coffee , took some snacks ,, went back nd shut herself ,, d fear of facing him was still there .

At afternoon her intercom buzzed nd she picked that with a thudding heart ,, it was from Dadima .

DM: Geet humare room mei aao abhi .

Geet: ji .

She came in Dadima 's room ,, asked before entering nd when she stepped in her heart skipped a beat ,, she rooted there near d door seeing Maan sitting with Dadima on her bed ,, seeing her he gave an angry glare to her nd then to Dadima .

Dadima: Geet ye hum kya sun rahe hein ,, etna samjhane ke baad bhi tumhare dimaag mei nahi jaata ,, ku tum humari life me enterfere kerti ho ? kisne haq diya tumhe maan ke friends ko judge kerne ka ,, bolo .

Geet understood that he didn't say anything about his act nd blamed her for all ,, she kept quiet nd waited what more had to come for her .

Dadima: tumhari himmat kaise hui Maan ke friends ki insult kerne ki ,, tumhari wajah se Maan ko kitna embarrassment jhelna pada ,, pata nahi kab peecha chutega ess musibat se ?

Maan: Dadima mai clear kaha raha hun ,, aur mom-dad se bhi kaha dunga ,, ya to ab ess ghar mei ye rahegi ya mai ,, soch lo ,, aur tum ,, tum mere friends se sorry bologi ,, sabke samne ,, jaise tumne insult ki ab waise hi sorry bhi bologi .

Geet lifted her teary eyes nd looked at him , there was not a single sign of shame nd regret in his eyes nd behaviour ,, she was right that he blamed her for all nd never accept what he had done to her ,, how shamless he is ,, she dipped her head .

Maan: bhagne ka bada shok hei na ab mei tumhe ess ghar se bhaga ker hi rahunga ,, aane do dad ko , wahi sabse jyada favour kerty hei tumhara ,, nd be ready for saying sorry TM .

Geet: mai koi sorry nahi bolungi kisi ko .

What !! What did u say ? suna aapne Dadima , eski himmat to dekho.

Geet: haan , mai kisi ko sorry nahi kahungi , chahe jo bhi ho .

DM: Geet , galti ki hei to maafi mangne se peeche ku hatt rahi ho ,, apni izzat ka etna khayal aur Maan ki ka kuch nahi ,, tum maafi mangogi sabse.

Maan stood up nd came near her : din pure ho gaye tumhare yahan ,, ab decide ho hi jaye , aane do Dad -mom ko ,, bas 2 din .

Geet: Dadima , mai aapse maafi maang sakti hu ,aur kisi se nahi ,, mai aaj ke baad ess pariwar mei kisi ke samne nahi aaungi ,, bas mujhe kuch din ka time de dijiye ,,, mai khudh cahli jaungi yahan se .

Maan: ye tum jaan boojh ker kaha rahi ho kunki tum janti ho dad tumhe jane nahi denge ,, accha jadu chala rakha hei un per ,, per ab aur nahi bas do din mei tumhara faisla ho jayega ,, now get lost from here ,, out .

Geet turned nd moved out ,, tears rolled out from her eyes ,, Nakul nd Satish saw her nd understood that again Daddima nd chote saab scold her ,, they felt bad for Geet ,, Geet came in her room ,, sat on her study chair , opened d drawer nd took out a folder ,, opened her laptop ( old belonged to annie ) nd started some work ,, till now she was not sure that she wd go US for her m-tech but now she had to move from here ,, she cdn't hurt Yash nd Rashi nd didn't want to become d reason for breaking d family .


Precape ---- Adieu ...


Part - 23




Sorry for mistakes ...


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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
main jaane waali thi aur tu aagayi.

happy diwali babie
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

main jaane waali thi aur tu aagayi.

happy diwali babie

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🤗 Hi priya..
aree tum bhi ho..
maine koi reply nahi dekha tumhara to soch aaj anhi aai ho..😊
koi bhi nahi hei...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 21...
Argh this Maan...don't want Geet to forgive him easily...
Just coz he has changed now...and is showing affection towards Maanu...who is none other than his son...moi don't want Geet to have a soft corner for this man...wanna see strong Geet...Maan deserves to get harsh punishment...he should rot in hell for what he did...n undergo the same pain Geet went through...

waiting for the next part...

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