~LOVE UNBOUNDED~NEW MG STORY~UPDATED PART 2- PG 14|| 15TH OCT - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for new story...awesome prologue and nice cs
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This awesome banner is created by...priya!!

Hey maaneetains..thank u for ur lovely response!

M very nervous about this story coz this is something new m writing...an action one..so plz support me!!


PART 1


I really like this girl..i find her perfect for my grandson.. Savitri khurana aka dadima beamed in happiness as she finally found her bahu.

Thank u pandit ji, Plz contact them as soon as possible, I cant wait to long..

Ji I'll inform them.. and he left..

Dadi ma dev said walking down through stair case..

Why was he here again?? He asked narrowing his brows making a serious face..

O lord wasn't my one grandson enough as police officer...dat now dev has also started. She thought

Dadi ma dev called her again...

Sweety..dont forget maan is police officer..and inspite of that..i m not obliged to answer him what makes u think I'll answer u she sat on her chair

Dev shook his head gently..

Dadi ma.. I

Ha haa I knw..u bothh don't really care about me nowadays..since maan is her now..i get to do what I want..all I wish is my bahu but no..humari baat aap log samjheneg hi kyu.. She said placing hand on her chest making a sad face..

No..dadi aisa nahi ...U are our world..dadi ma he kneeled before her..

Fine then let me do..what I want she said excitingly

Dev sighed..dadi ma..i..he paused I think something has happened to bhai..U knw..he.. He looked at dadi ma so was suddenly came so serious

What happened to maan dev? Is he alright ..he hasn't recovered yet koi problem hai?? She asked panicky

Dev cursed himself for sharing his thoughts to dadi ma..the lady wasn't dat strong..she gets hyper..on small things. She has bought up both brothers so lovingly dat even one scratch on them tears her apart.

No dadi ma...I mean nothing mai toh aise hi bol raha tha.. he smiled a little

Beta u sure na..or u r hiding something from me..

No dadi maa nothing..y would I hide something form..u he said getting up..

Did u ask bhai..?

She smiled widely yes..i have asked maan already and he is ready for marriage..usne ha keh diya..kal hi

Ab tum bhi ha kar do..so that I can get both of u married together..she joint her hands babaji k rehem se my last wish will be fulfilled..Finally she had tears in her eyes..

Maaan bhai ne haa kardi..now something is definitely fishy..Bhai is behaving weird since the time he's back..i should talk to him..

Dev..where r u lost? She asked touching his shoulder..

Nothing dadi..he smiled..aap jaisa chahate ho..waise hi hoga..He kissed her forehead..and patted her cheek

I'll check on bhai..

Dadi ma nodded and as dev moved his cell rang..

Helloo yaa...

Okay I'll be der..

Guess I'll have to wait till...night he left for office.

Maan's room

She is my best frnd geet...she lives with me..

Hi..

Her eyes ..wer the most captivating eyes he had ever seen. He was replaying each and every scene ...in his mind from the last few months. He is back here ..physically but his heart was lost. the man that he was...he rarely notice a girl..and he was so..mesmerized with those eyes. It was may be because her eyes portrayed such strong emotions..which he hardly understood. For once they seemed so broken while in next sec they are blank,

Tears gathered in his eyes...recalling their last encounter. This wasn't expected..certainly the turn of events which took place shook his entire existence. He clenched the bed sheet tight in his palm to subside the pain which squeezed his heart.

He was maan singh khurana former poilice officer.. Yes he had quit after his last case due to his injuries and partly because of his family.

He stood to his feet and walked forward to the window.

He stood there gazing the stars. It was beautiful and lonely night. Every night without her for the last 6 months seems lonely. He was known to be strict, hot tempered officer. It was his personality outside his home . For his family he was a caring and loving boy though not that lovey dovey.

Bhai Who I had to talk to u..about that girl ...Dev said as he entered in his room.

Maan glanced him while dev moved beside him.He placed his hand on maan's shoulder.

Bhai..i knw u r hiding something from us..u just said yes without even asking anything about the girl..

Bhai he pressed his hand Maan looked away..

I knw u bhai cant hide it..last case mai aisa kya hua.thA .u seem so lost since the time u r back..

Yeh shaddi k liye apne ha bol toh diya..but I knw that its not ur decsision...plz bhai tell me

Maan moved to the center of the room and sat on his bed. Dev stood her watching him helplessly

I met her during my last case..he shut his eyes...and opened them back

Dev stepped forward and sat by him..comforting him..

Dats it...guys the story will begin from next part..

Hope u guys liked this part this..was intro sec of maan, dev, dadi as a family!!

Please leave ur comments and hit like!!

Love

sweta

Edited by swetaa100 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
want to read more
plz ud soon soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Nice part daadi is findng bride 4 maan hpe its geet
Dev is worried 4 maan as he is behavng differently
maan is rembng his meetng wit geet 😳
maan startd 2 tel dev abt d girl
waitng 4 d nxt part
Edited by christipie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
nice start. so maan loves some one and he is not able to forget her and dev wants to know about maan's changed behaviour. waiting for maan's confrontation
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Great Start
So Maan left the police force and while doing his last case he met
Geet
waiting to know more

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update
waiting to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
nice👏👏



maan agreed to marriage😲



dev suspects that maan is hiding something😕



maan likes geet😊



update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
dadi is sooo sweet yaar..dev is worried for maan..soo many question yaar..why maan say yes to marriage & what happen 6 months back...hope to get the answers soon..amazing part..cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting start...
eager to know the flashback..

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