Maaneet OS-humesha tumko chaha last part updated on page 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum start
Waiting fr d next part
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fab start! superbly written! update soon! Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Last part

A lone tear drop from her eyes followed by another.why life is so unfair.she lost her parents years ago now she is losing her love today.is she that bad that god is giving her punishment..

She never asked for anything in her life except maan.the only wish she asked from god is maan's happiness and his company.but that also going to lost from her.she is getting married to an unknown person.but she can't let that happen.she have to do somthing.

'"Geet beta,get ready..wo log agaye..I will send someone to help you.."yash,maan's father told her from outside.

Geet opened her palm and look again at the poison bottle.a sad smile came to her lips.

"Maan I know I will never have you in my life.aap ko shayad pata Bhi nahi main apse payer karti hu.par how can I marry someone else if all I want and wish to see is you an only you.i can't let anyone touch me.i know if I marry him I will ruin his life.so its better to ruin myself.
Iss janam main to aap mujhe mile nahi per agle har janam main mujhe app chahiye.."she read again what she wrote.
It's not for maan.she wrote it because of her writing habit.she lost her diary where she wrote her every loving memory with maan and her feelings.so she write it as a habit in a paper and hide it in her drawer.

1hour earliar...

Maan enter his dad's room without knocking.he have to stop this marriege.he want geet and he want her by any cost.even if it means arguing with his dad.he know he will be upset but he will understand at last.

"Dad stop geet's marriage please.i love her and I can't live without her.wo meri jindegi hai dad.agar jindegi mujhse dur ho gayi to how will I survive.please meri baat man lijie.." he blabber what comesin his mouth due to panic.

Yash smiled seeing his son doing the same thing which he was expecting.his two dumb kids now behaving like genius.

What marriage maan..Is there a marriage happening maan beta..

Maan just stared at his father.he can't understand what is happening.hejust continue his starring sesson.

"Beta koi shadi nahi ho raha hai..I just want you to realize your love for geet so i made up a story.but I guess I am successful..."yash said feeling happy.

Maan just kept looking for some second and the rushed outside but stopped at the door.

Dad I will take my revenge on you for making me fool..but I love you dad for whatever you did for us..

Geet's room

"Geet"

Geet missed a bit.ohh it's maan her maan.lagta hai god Is fulfilling my last wish.thank you god..she murmured.

Maan got lost seeing his jaan talking with her babaji and making cute faces.

"Ohh god..how cute she is looking..Mann Karta hai usko apni Bahi me chupalo.."

But he controll himself for now.he want to make sure she loved him still.he is too scared to lose her.

"Geet is it you diary and..."

"Yes..and I love you.."geet cut his word and said in a even tone.

"I know you you read it and I will not denied anything.every word I wrote in that diary is true..I love you and don't know from when.."she said everything today which she was hiding because she have only today for her..

I know you never love me but...maan pressed his hand in her lips to stop her.

"I love you" I love you lot..

Geet stood numb hearing his confession.she can't believe what he is telling .ohh god her maan love her.she just kept looking and in her shocking state she dropped the bottle which she is holding.

Maan heard the sound of dropping something and what he saw made him numb.his geet was trying to go away from him.forever.if he was late a second she will die and he will lose her forever.his fear turned into anger and shook her in anger.

"Geet how could you do this to me..agar main late ho jata to..he can't able to complete the sentence.

Geet felt guilty now..maan is in pain because of her..she tried to console him..

"Woh main..I mean..."maan didn't let her complete and kissed her senseless..his fear take toll on him..the need to feel her alive and still with him make him kiss her.

He kissed her with passion..making her tremble..he just want to feel her..his passion turned in to dark desire when he felt her responding..
They broke of after a while lack of breathing.geet felt too shy at the turns of event.maan's anger and fear also gone feeling her close .he hugged her making her shiver again and told..

Fir kabhi aisa maat karna jaan..I will die...I can't live without you..

Geet nodded her head and caught her ears cutely..

"Never.."

Maan hugged her more close and sigh seeing her cute antics..he never thought he will feel so much blessed having her in his arm..life is never this much beautifu before..love actually bring magic in life..


So how is it friends..??thank you all for your lovely comment's.it means a lot..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice endng finally maaneet r tgr dat too coz of yash's plan👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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emotional update! wonderfully written! Geet is gng to take poison as she did nt want to get married 2 anyone! she loves Maan! Maan tells his dad he loves Geet! n to stop the wedding! bt there was no wedding! Yash is clever! Maan goes 2 her b4 she can dp anything n confesses! all ends well! pls post epilogue! thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update, write few more stories.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Dis was sooo cute..
Loved it alot
it was yash plan to make him realize his love for geet...superbb
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank god he found her diary
awww he liked her too
but was being ignorant
well he thought she would reject him as if
he wants his geet back
so cute when he got all possessive of her

oh teri geet dont be mad
suicide is not the way to go
thnak god he got there in time
haila this was all a plan to make sure maan doesnt lose his geet
his dad is good
awww maan was so mad at her
well of course he was he could have lost her right but didnt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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simply suverub

gud dear

write more

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Encouraging to write more...
Very good..
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