Teri Umeed Tera Intezaar Karte Hai, (6), COMPLETED

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

haha what a lovely way you have requested the readers to update :D :D

coming to the part...

hayeee first tym ever in the history of ghsp nakul is getting a wife if am not mistaken...thanku for that,...you never fail to surprise me Aviii...:)

aha geet n maan in kurban hua attire...hayyeee...

armaan is also here...i hate J maan but at the same time lovvv J geet...dont know why it is so..:D but J geet looks very very cute...

phew finally geet got to know that sameera has got nothing to do with maan...great relief...hope she wont be able to create troubles in their life here...the name sameera scares me anyways..

lovely song selection...khuda jaane 😊😊

NOTE: Since all that most readers keep asking about after every update is Pammi and ML to be revealed to Maan soon, I will be cutting short some of the chapters so that we can come to it quickly.

which most readers??😕😕 plsss Avii dont cut short... We are hear to hear your story ...plsss dont change them...bakki tumhari marzi

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archana roy

@ArchanaRoy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

awesome bloosome update nd song Khuda jaane " ufff i thud*👏 nd a thight hug dear bcz u make both maaneet BIG JJJ im lovinggg it this part so muchh... i love their kisss serise Lol heheh geet ph covo n maan's noughtyness i loved it maan become noughty BBC like before ...maan teases geet on saying sir but geet tease hehehe again Shyamlal ne invisble entry marr de poor maan he really thought ke wo sach me hai and geet left the cabin showing her thumb ... he is excited about party and the fact that geet is wearing saree where as geet is nervous about it until she sees maan nd maan is mezmerised with beauty of his angel

both get jjj one coz gorila muscles n other chipkali chuddal(aag dono tarf baraba lage hai )...

what a dance maaneet love it ... adi nd maan covo was funny n cute...

ohh pls don't shorten the story It's an absolute pleasure to read yaar ...

Edited by brandgurti - 11 years ago

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Very nice update. Maan Adi argument was funny. I would request you to write the way you wanted .

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Hi avi
That was a fabulus update chum lu haath tere dil ki ye hi khhawaish hai
Adi ke call se maan ko gussa aagaya ek punch to banta hai
Geet party me sarree pehan ke aati hai maan to angel par fida ho gaya aur apni kuri vi maan ko itna handsome aur smart dekh kar usse nihar rahi hai both are j ek muscle man se to dusri sameera chipkali se dono hi ek dusre ke liye possasive hai
I love the wayjis tarah maan geet ko ye kahta hai ki vo ek ladki ke gale me apni bahe daale rakhna chahata hai vo 24/7 hayee is maan ne to maar daala i love there romance maan & adi ki dosti dono ka ek dusre ko tease karna kamaal hai yaar
Avi aap story ko apne hisab se likho ⭐️

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Ashdevil

@Ashdevil

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

fab update...😊

loved it...

maneet are jealous...😛

loved the way of maan warning adi...😆

excited for next part,,,,,

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Tanzy10

@tanzy10

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

lovely ud don't end the story so soon want to read more romance

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

khullam khulla romance
Maan Khurana wont miss a chance hann

Nice updt

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Part 21- jealous and possessive couple. 😆

Maan giving dhamki to Adi was cute.

waiting for Geet's ke pahle kadam in KC.

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Deelight

@Deelight

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

loved it..

i toh luv ur FF in any form tak ur FF as u lyk
though i prefer longer version-more parts n faster updates!!

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

beautiful chapter...with two beautiful songs for the beautiful pair !! romance full on...after long maan is happy enjoying with his angel ...aur thoda enjoy karne do...kyun cut short karna chahti ho...aap...kitna tadpa hai poor maan nei...abhi sach samne aayega tho...bechare ka dil toot jayega...!!