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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

thanxx everyone..m happy that u like my work.. i hv written next part..will update tmrw..

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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

part - 5

geet n just 4-5 students were sitting in class.. She was having tears in eyes..

Suddenly maan enters in class.. His eyes were also teary..

geet looks up and there eyes met.. Both were having so much emotions in there heart..they were not able to express it but in these 2 sec.. They forgot everything.. They feel connected.. 😳

maan (in mind) - what happened to her? Why is she crying?

geet ( in mind) - what happened to him? Why is he looking upset?

No one talks to each other but now both were thinking about each other problem..

geet ( pov ) - uske toh marks b itne acche hai fir kyu wo upset lg rha h..aakhir kya bat ho skti h.. Should i ask him?😕 But how will i talk to him? N why m so concern about him.. Its his personal matter.. geetjust stop thinking about him.. Apna soch..ghar jake kya bolegi mumma-papa ko..

maan ( pov ) - why i always feel connected to this girl? Damn.. May be she got less marks that why she is crying.. Should i talk to her? But what if she thinks that i m flirting? Noo.. Atleast i can say hie to her.. 😲

He was about to stand up from his seat but the bell rang..

maan - shitt...!!😡 Iss bell ko b abi bajna tha.. 2 min nh ruk skti thi.. Idiot😡

At geet home..

She didnt told her parents about the result..

geet (in mind) - bhgwan ji..kya bolu mumma papa ko? Wo bhot gussa krege.. Me nh btati..🥱

At night..

maan (thinking) - i will talk to geet tomorrow.. May be i can help her.. Yeahh me use..umm..han jb wo class me akeli hogi tb use bat krunga..😆

In school..

Nainika to her frnds - girls.. Yesterday maan n me went for bike ride.. It was awesome..

Some girl - u r so lucky nainika..maan loves u alot..

Nainika - yaa he is also very lucky to have me.

{ nainika always spread rumours about her n maan to gain attention... But maan consider her just a friend.. }

geet n pinky talking..

pinky - geet..tune apne ghar btaya result ke bare me❓

geet - abi nh pinky.. Jb mummy ka mood accha hoga toh bta dungi..

geet agn n agn were looking at door.. Like she was waiting for someone..she was feeling restless.. And the Suddenly maan enters in the class..

geet (in mind) - stop staring at him.. He is the attitude king.. but shukr h today he is looking fine..😊

pinky - hayee maan.. He is so charming.. Pta h geet kal maan nainika ko bike ride pr le gya tha.. Pta nh uss nainika me kya h jo maan usko itna bhav deta h huhh

geet (in mind) - dekha wo toh uss nainika ko pyar krta h.. Aakhir hai hi kya usme..na shakal na akal..huhh.. But why m bothering.. Wo jisko mrji date kre muje kya..huhh

Agn maan didnt got a chance to tok to geet..😲

After some days..

At market.
geet was shopping with her mom n maan came with his friends..

geet felt maan's presence but she ignored..

geet(in mind) - tu na pagal ho gyi h.. wo yhan kyu aaega bhala?!!😕

mrs. handa - aree kahan kho gyi..shopping toh almost ho gyi h..chl aj tuje pav bhaji khilati hu😊

geet - hmm 🥱

they went to pav bhaji stall..

on the other side.. maan buys some new shirts for himself..enjoying with friends.. he came out from the shop to attend a call n suddenly he noticed a petite figure..

maan (in mind) - is it geet?😕

n geet turns back.. but she didnt noticed maan..

maan - aree ye toh geet hi h.. wat is she doing here?
idiot..market h..ofcourse shopping krne aai hogi.. jo bh h aaj toh isse bat krke hi rhunga..😆

he was just a few feet away from her and then he heard - geet..

mrs. handa - geet..beta tu kha kyu nh rh h? accha nh lga kya?

geet - nh maa accha h..kha rh hu

maan(in mind) - damit.. ye toh apni mom ke sath h.. aaj fir moka hath se gya..

tbhi geet saw a small girl..she was about 5yrs. old.. was asking for food to pav bhaji wala..

pav bhaji wala - chlo jao yhan se..bhago..😲

that girl was looking very pale..it seems she has not eaten anything from last 2 days..

geet came close to her.. n said - pav bhaji khaogi?

girl (in meek voice) - haan

geet gave her pav bhaji.. she talked to that girl (roshni) for some time.. she was a beggar.. had high fever..

geet to her mother - mumma roshni ko toh bhot tej bukhar h..hum ise doctor ke pas le chle?

geet mom - hmm..bhot pyari bcchi h..lgta h iska iss duniya me koi nh..tumhare papa se khkr ise children home bhijwa denge..wahan iski acchi care bh hogi.. thk h na?😊

geet - thk nh bhot accha h..me hr hafte roshni se milne jaungi..😛

geet n roshni were very happy now.. they were laughing😛 n giggling😆..

geet - roshni.. mera name sanyukta h..u can col me didi okk😊

roshni - ok didi😆

all this scene was witnessed by none other our maan.. he was smiling watching them..👏 😃

maan (in mind) - is she the same girl who dont talk to anyone in class? and here she is laughing n enjoying with that beggar girl.. how innocent n pure she is from heart..ab toh tumse dosti krni hi hogi..😎

next day at school..

it was games period.. all students went to play ground.. maan n frnds strtd to play basketball.. geet n other girls sat on basketball court stairs watching their game..

geet was trying to remove her gaze from maan..but could not.. his moves😲..his postures.. he was luking like a greek god..😳

geet (to herself) - maan ko dekh..he is looking too hot.. his face..his eyes..lips..neck.. shut up..kya bole ja rh h..
dnt u remember he has a girl frnd.. stop checking him out.. focus on studies..😡

maan (to himeslf) - his attention was on sanyukta..ye ldki b na games period me b pdh rh h..dumbo.. here every girl is checking me out and ye muje dekh b nh rh.. kuch toh krna pdega maan..😉

next day..
it was raining heavily..

geet opens her eyes🥱..n see the time.. OMG 7 bj gye..
mummmaaa... mmuuummmaaa...muje uthaya kyu nh..me late ho jaungi school ke liye..

mom - are beta bahar kitni tej barish ho rh h..aaj mat ja school..

geet (in mind) - agr me school nh gyi toh maan ko kaise dekhungi.. but agar wo b nh aya toh? pr agar aaya toh?😕

geet to mom - woh maa.. aaj bhot imp. assignment submit krna h..jana hi pdega..me bss 5 min me ready hoke aai..😊

mom - accha aaj tere papa chod aaege tuje school..tu ready ho me breakfast bnati hu tb tk..

At maan home..

Damn iss barish ko aaj hi aana tha?😡 agar geet nh aai toh? be postive maan..she will come.

At school..
because of rain very few students came to school..

maan enters the class n found it empty..😲

(to himself) - what the hell? koi b nh aya..ab me kya kru..dammit

maan was standing on the door waiting for geet..
after 5 min. geet came to school.. she was walking towards the class n saw maan standing at the door..

geet (in mind) - thank god maan aya h..warna sari mehnat waste ho jati..

maan saw geet.. n was constantly looking to her like his wish came true..😳

geet to maan (very softly) - excuse me😳

geet (to herself) - why he is standhing here like this.. ohh god.. my heart is beating so fast..kahin bahar hi na aa jae..help me..

geet again to maan - excuse me

maan - hmm ??? (coming back from his dream land )

geet - wohh..muje class me jana h..aap plzz zara side denge

maan - ohh sure..plzz come in😃

geet enters in class..no body was there except her and maan.. both became silent.. geet sat on her bench n pretend to read book..

maan (to himself) - maan yhi moka h..talk to her..look nobody is here now..go👍🏼

(tell me hwzz it..😲🥱😆)

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

nice part both maaneet r concernd abt each other bt dey r nt able 2 talk wit eachother

dat stupid gal is spreadng stupid stories abt her nd maan😡

geet went 2 shoppng wit her mom nd der met roshni nd took care of her nd geet's mom tld her dat she ill ask geet's dad 2 take roshni 2 child care home nd maan saw all dis😃

its heavily rainng bt maaneet came 2 clg hpnng dat dey can c each other😉 nd only dey were at class

maan go on talk wit her👍🏼

waitng 4 d nxt part

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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: christipie
nice part both maaneet r concernd abt each other bt dey r nt able 2 talk wit eachother
dat stupid gal is spreadng stupid stories abt her nd maan😡
geet went 2 shoppng wit her mom nd der met roshni nd took care of her nd geet's mom tld her dat she ill ask geet's dad 2 take roshni 2 child care home nd maan saw all dis😃
its heavily rainng bt maaneet came 2 clg hpnng dat dey can c each other😉nd only dey were at class
maan go on talk wit her👍🏼
waitng 4 d nxt part

thanxx dear for liking it :-)
a small teaser for you..

gunjan - so u hate him?

geet - no..why would i hatr him?

gunjan - then u love him..

geet - do i really love maan??

so hwzz it guys??

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

whoaa nice.. maan babu abhi se chance.. cont soon hun

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

interesting can i get the pm

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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: maansee
interesting can i get the pm

yaa sure.. i have sent you buddy req. accept it then i ll pm u :-)

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Sorry for the delay!

So maan ko akir mauka mil hi gaya geet se baat karne ka...

Geet hiding things from parents isn't good😕😉

Geet tho achi student thi na then kya hogaya itna low performance!

Waiting for the next!

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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

part - 6

maan (to himself) - yhi moka h..bat kr usse..go

geet just pretending to read book..her heart beat is running very fast..

maan to geet - excuse me..

geet - ji (hesistating)😕

maan - wo aapke pas extra pen h? 😕
(to himself - pen ?? have u lost it?😡 idiot 😲)

geet -pen? 😲 haan..ek min abi deti hu

she checked in her bag..her hands were shivering..
geet (to herself) - ye pen kahan chla gya..abi toh yhi tha

finding no extra pen she gave him her only pen..

maan - thanxx 😊

geet - wecome😊
( in mind - isse phle ye kuch or kahe..geet tu chli ja yhan se.. kahin inhone meri eyes pdh li toh..)

she stands up from bench n about to go.. suddenly maan called her

maan - ek min ruko (seeing geet going he stops her)

geet - ji (nervous)

maan - umm actually do u have yesterday physics notes?
(to himself - gud job maan 😆😃 )

geet - haan but kal toh aap aae the school ( and she bites her tongue )
( to herself - idiot ye kya keh diya..he will think that u notice him daily )

maan - yeahhh (stammers) actually haan kal bh me pen bhool aaya tha ghar so note down nh kiya kuch..hehe
( to himself - ullu..gadhe.. what r u talking..😡)

geet - okiee..
n she gave him notes..

maan - thankyou.. by the way maan singh khurana 😆

geet - m geet handa 😊

and they both shake hands.. current passed from their bodies..

maan - so geet..if i m not wrong then u are new admission right?

geet - yeahh.. ( little hesitant)

maan - gud..so kaisa lga new school?

geet - its good..kafi bda h..but..

suddenly 2 girls enter in the class.. and geet stopped..

maan - ok i will return ur notes in next period..

geet - okiee..

there were only 10-11 students present in the class.. geet sat with pinky and randhir with aadi..

geet (in mind) - kya sach me maan ne mujse bat ki ? kahin ye sapna toh nh? (day dreaming)

pinky seeing her lost - geet..geet..what happen? where are u lost?

geet - nh kahin bh toh nh .. me toh bss aise hi kuch soch rhi thi..

pinky - okk.. m getting bore yrr.. class me b kitne kam bcche aae hai..lectures b nh lgege..kash hmari b chutti kr de..😆

geet - hihi hope so😆

scene change..

aadi - ye pinky kitni cute lgti h na.. mann krta h bss ise hi dekhta rhu..

maan - hmm ( lost )

At geet home..

(gunjan {sanyukta elder sis } was back from mumbai..she got admission in medical clg delhi.. )

gunjan - maaa khane me kya h..bhot bhuk lgi h 😛

tito - bhookh lgi h khano do..khana do..
both were😛laughing n enjoying.. 😆😃

geet was silent..
gunjan - geetu tuje kya hua..itni chup chup kyu h?

geet - nthng di..wo nxt month se xam h na bss isliye thodi tension h..

gunjan - chill kr..ab me aa gyi hu na.. Teri studies me b help kr dungi..or waise b meri geet toh bchpn se hi intellegent h..

tito - aakhir behan kiski h 😃

geet - ( 😊faint smile)

gunjan - accha ji? Meri behan h wo..

tito - nhh meri..

gunjan - meriii...

tito - meriii..

Mom - bsss kro tum dono.. Ye toh meri pyari bcchi h..
N kissed geet forehead 😊

gunjan - or muje ?
tito - muje b..

Mom kissed their forehead also..
- shaitan.. 😆 chlo khana khao jldi se..thanda ho rha h..

At night..

gunjan to geet - chal ab bta kya bat h?

geet(nervous ) - konsi bat di? Kuch b toh nh..

gunjan - tuje pta h na u cant lie to me..so why trying? Now tell me whts the prblm

geet - hmm actually di meri class me na ek ldka h.. Muje na wo bilkul pasand nh tha.. He is that hi fi kind of boy..so much attitude n ol..even he has a gf at this age.. I really dnt like him..

gunjan - okk u dnt like it.. Nothing bad in that.. Whts the prblm?

geet - han pr i dnt knw why i feel connected to him.. Mera usse bat krne ka..use dekhne ka mann krta h.. N u knw what aaj usne mujse bat b ki 😆😳 (excitedly) i feel he is a nice guy but i dnt know di..me very confused..😕

gunjan - omg sanyu.. That means u like him..

geet😲 - (shocked) no di i.. i dnt like him.. He is not a good boy..

gunjan - how can you say he is not good? Hmm..
Okk..u are saying today he talked to u.. Did he misbehave?

geet - nahii.. Actually he was very sweet.. But he has a girlfriend..

gunjan - aahhaann jealousy.. 1st sign of love😆😉😳

geet - stop it dii.. I dnt love him..huhh

gunjan 😆(laughing) - noo u are in love geet..You love him..😆

geet - nahi nahi nhi..i dnt love him..
(Fighting with pillows)

gunjn- so you hate him?

geet - nahii toh..why would i hate him?

gunjan - then u love him..😉😃

geet - urrgghhh aisa kuch nhi hai.. M sleeping..gud night..huhh

gunjan - hehehe 😃gd nyt.. Muaahh😳

N they both lie down on beds..

geet (in mind) - is dii right? Do i love him? Noo.. He has a girlfriend.. That idiotic n show off nainika..i just hate her..huhh
(to herself - that means you love maan) geet tu na pagal ho gyi h.. Chup chap So jaa..hmm)

And she slept confused..😕

thats it..kaisa lga?😆
will pm later..now vry busy..sorry

Edited by dreamyp - 11 years ago

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

this. maan is sooo cute...yaa..ge cares a lot for. geet!!

both doing engineering ..m very eager for the..next part.!!

dear next time...bell thode time baad bajana!
continue soon