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PART 4

Geet started teaching maan the basic steps. He wasn't interested in doing any of the steps so he pretended to learn them and purposely was making mistakes. Geet was initially aware of his intentions but later on she got involved in her dance and music. So she actually dint care about his intentions and thought him the steps genuinely. While maan made her task almost impossible with his constant tantrums about the steps and about the song. While she calmly explained him. Her calmness only infuriated him further. He was highly annoyed with her as she had chosen his songs for his performance basically a club mix of his songs..She dint react to his tantrums and nagging. The song was perfect for his introductory song.

Here ayan was enjoying with GC .DD was busy practicing with rohan. While GC was niharofying her giving her lovely dovey looks. And ayan was busy showing GC his painting. It was lunch time So rohan excused himself and decided to take ayan to geet. GC and DD gave him kiss and ayan left.

Geet also decided to take a break. She informed maan about it.And maan left the room frustratingly as none of his plans worked..on her. He was hell angry and irritated with the turn of events.. He called his P.A for his lunch as he will have it in his van. He bought a van as that will be easy. After yesterday he decided bring the van for his comfort. Maan was taking long strides and making his way towards the exit while ayan was running towards geet's room to show her his painting.

Both dint c each other as ayan was excited to show his painting to his mumma while maan was cursing geet.

Both were walking absentmindedly and then...THUDDD

They clashed with each other.

Ouchhh...

OOchhh..

Both maan and ayan fell down.

Ayan cutely rubbded his forehard which had hit maan's thigh. While maan had tripped over and banged his head on the wall..

What did u do... Ayan widen his eyes noticing his painting where all his colours were smashed .THe colours were now imprinted on maan's t-shirt as it was stuck there .He had sued water colour and hence all the colors were on his t-Shirt.

Maan removed dat piece of paper from his t-shirt making an angry face..and glared ayan

Whatt the..fff... he roared

Are u insane cant u see while walking..Silly kid who allowed you in here he said getting up

Ayan also made o shape face and got up taking his painting in his hand.

It was not my mistake... it was all ur fault u spoilt my painting.. he said pointing his little finger at him

What?????? He Clenched his fist

What the hell.. u spoilt my t-shirt..n u r worried about ur stupid painting he said griting his teeth...God knws why do people make children they are simply disaster.. N u are also a disaster..u stupid boy.. pointing finger at him.

I m not a disaster and not even stupid.. I will call my mumma and she will scold you..ayan replied back..

Ya..please Call her I will make sure dat she is sued for creating a mess ...

You... .are very bad . My mumma wont leave u..just watch out ..he gave him warning.

Rohan came in hallway to see them fighting he immediately. Held ayan s finger that was pointing at maan and picked him up..

I m sorry sir..i m really sorry for the mess.. he said apologetically

HE is ur son..?? tell him to mind his words.. he said angrily he doesn't knw who he is talking to..

Ayan glared at maan and opened his mouth while rohan just kept his palm over his mouth not allowing him to speak further.

I knw sir..plz forgive him,.. plzz its my request..please go to the changing room and change sir... Rohan wanted to finish the matter as he knew if maan came to knw dat ayan is geet's son she would be in trouble. Everyone knew about his mood swings and his unprofessionalism from sasha.

Fine... Teach him how to talk to people.. and glared ayan back..

Sorry once gain sir... plz change.. he said. Pressing his hand slightly tight on ayan's mouth and holding him tight... As ayan was struggling.. so that the could reply him back..

Don't bother about me..he said rudely and storm off.

While rohan merely nodded and sighed when maan left.He removed his palm and got a punch from ayan..

Why dint u let me speak..he is such a donkey... he said making a disgusting face..

Shoo..aayn don't say like dat..u don't knw who he is.. He said rubbing his chest wer ayan hit him..

I don't care I hate him..I will complain about him to muma.. he spoilt my painting he said with tears forming in his eyes

Ayan.. don't cry we will make a new one..na.. baby he said wiping his tears .. Ayan nodded and clutched the paper in his hand.

Rohan picked him up...and took him to geet.

Geet was in her room when ayan came crying.

Mummaaa mummaa he came and hugged her..geet immediately hugged him and took him to her lap.

What happened sweetheart why r u crying..?? she wiped his tears and looked at rohan..

Mommy dat man he spoilt my painting he is a very bad person mommy.. ayan hates him. He said sniffing..

Which man..whom r u talking about ayan..???

that man dat tall one is not good mummmaa

Geet nodded and and wiped his tears ad hugged him .She took the piece of paper in her hand and gave it to rohan.

Awee my baby its alright mumma knws ayan makes beautiful painting.. hai na..??so he will make another one for me.. right ayan. She said parting him a little and ruffling his hairs..

Yes mumma I will make for u.. He said wiping his tears

Rohan offered him water which geet made him drink.

Dats like a good boy.. lets have some pizza for luch what say.. baby she said to cheer him up..

Woow.. mummy u will allow me to have pizza.. ayan beamed with happiness..

Well yes..darling she said placing kisses on his cheeks..

Yeyy..lets leave .. he dragged rohan and geet to the canteen.

Here maan was pissed off.Today wasn't his day it seems.First that geet and now that boy.. gosh its my bad luck today.. ughhh he said clutching his hairs in frustration.

Naina called him up and maan poured all his anger on her. While she calmed him and motivated him for practice actually blackmailed him again. Naina was irking him more but he coulnt let down her especially when he had promised her. He changed his clothes and decided to have his lunch in peace.

Here Geet met Gc and Dd who were glad to finally see ayan's mommy. Geet was surprised to see stars like them so down to earth. They all get along well with each other and then resumed to their practice. Geet had called ayan's nanny to pick him up. So ayan bid them bye after a lot of cajoling by geet.

While going he saw maan coming out from his van. He narrowed his brows and told the nanny to get his bottle from canteen. She went back to get it.

Ayan ran to maan who was busy with his phone.

He stood next to him and pulled his pants to gain his attention. Maan looked down and saw him.He raised his eyebrows at him and made an angry face.

Ayan made similar face and pointed his finger at him.

This is not over.. ayan will take his revenge.. and blew his hair over his forehead

Maan grew more angry at him.The guy no..the kid had the guts to challenge him..

He made a hard face and kneeled beside him..coming to his level.

Challenge accepted kid. He gritted and put his hand forward for and hand shake.

Ayan held his hand and they and a formal hand shake.Both glaring each other in attitude until ayan's nanny called him up.

Ayan left maan after giving him another angry glare and maan just shook his head at his audacity .

That was a long part I guess.. I hope u guys enjoyed it...

Hehehe sorry for the delay..!!

N I want long comments this time too..willl be waiting !!

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Sweta

yuppie

Ok so ayan n his calling mom would definitely create some or the other misunderstanding in the future tracks

wonderful part
loved it
maan wanted to irritate geet but geet knowing his intentions concentrated on her dance...
maan and ayaan meeting started with fight...maan thinking that ayaan is rohans son...what will be his expression when he comes to know that ayaan actually geet's son...
geet found GC and DD down to earth people...
aayan saw maan again and gave him challenge that he will take revenge on him...maan accepted his challenge...
eagerly waiting for the next part

what was that
really maan
that was just rude
so they did meet
and they fought too
but it aint over yet
lord save maan
on second thoughts why bother
he asked for it
poor ayan
i feel for him
this man is so arrogant
wait till he gets it from ayan and geet

love the fight ayan give to maan

wonderful part...maan is hell bend to irretate geet with his silly mistakes...GC and DDpart was so good...LO isike kami the...maan aurayan ke gussa aur jhagda...upar se ek dusre ko changle de rahe hain...

Amazing Part!
LOL .. Maan and Ayan's hatred towards each other, Maan is such a rudee guy! Scolding a small boy! Irritating Geet for no reasons!